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(I know my writing isn't perfect.) How's the Prologue so far?
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Saiyans: The Future(work in Progress)
Topic Started: Sep 3 2011, 04:26 AM (560 Views)
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Saiyans: The Future
PROLOGUE SUGGESTIONS ,CORRECTIONS, AND CRITICISM WELCOME!
I'm currently still pulling the story together, but I know the prologue could use some editing. If you have any ideas for any prologue story-changes I could make, please tell me.

Note: Gt sucks horribly. The only reason I'm including it in the prologue of this fanfic and not skipping over it is that I want it to work with what's Cannon
PROLOGUE
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CHAPTER 1
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Edited by pppgggr, Sep 4 2011, 07:21 AM.
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K. I got Chapter 1 Part 1 in.
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