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| Kalea, Goku's Long Lost Sister | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 21 2011, 12:28 AM (2,855 Views) | |
| Kalea_The_Saiyan | Aug 21 2011, 12:28 AM Post #1 |
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After crash landing on earth as a baby, a young couple took her in. Now, 15 years later, Kalea is going on a serch for her long lost brother, Kakarrot. But her mission is interupted when she finds a crater, and a ship just like the one she was found in... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7303947/1/Kalea_Gokus_Long_Lost_Sister This is my first fanfic, so please be nice in any reviews. |
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Krillin makes me laugh. Goku makes me cheer. Vegeta makes me scream. Gohan makes me gasp. And Piccolo makes me shut up. Spoiler: click to toggle | |
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| * Yu Narukami | Aug 21 2011, 12:42 AM Post #2 |
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Nice introductory chapter! You outlined the background of the story and the force driving the main character very well. I also liked Kalea. She's similar to Goku but there are enough differences to make her a unique character. I look forward to future chapters!
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| Kalea_The_Saiyan | Aug 21 2011, 12:46 AM Post #3 |
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well, im gonna update soon! and thanks! i was really trying to explain her charcater, and some of the things i didnt mean to be like goku, but i couldnt figure out any other way to make it work. im already working on the next chappie, and hope to update tomorrow or the day after. |
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Krillin makes me laugh. Goku makes me cheer. Vegeta makes me scream. Gohan makes me gasp. And Piccolo makes me shut up. Spoiler: click to toggle | |
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| Kalea_The_Saiyan | Aug 24 2011, 02:07 PM Post #4 |
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WOO-HOO! I finished the drawing of Kalea! It took me all day yesterday, but I did it! YAYAYAY! |
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Krillin makes me laugh. Goku makes me cheer. Vegeta makes me scream. Gohan makes me gasp. And Piccolo makes me shut up. Spoiler: click to toggle | |
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| Kalea_The_Saiyan | Dec 23 2011, 04:27 PM Post #5 |
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Well, I finally got a chance to update! So, what does everyone think of the new chapter? |
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Krillin makes me laugh. Goku makes me cheer. Vegeta makes me scream. Gohan makes me gasp. And Piccolo makes me shut up. Spoiler: click to toggle | |
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