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| Buu Saga Remixed; Basically what the Buu Saga would be like if Gohan was the main hero | |
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| Goten789 | Mar 13 2011, 11:56 PM Post #1 |
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This my first attempt at a DBZ fan fiction. I've tried Final Fantasy, Kingdom Hearts, and some other stuff before, but i've never tried a DBZ story. So any feed back will be appreciated. So basicaly this is about what the Buu Saga would have been like had Akira Toriyama had been able to make Gohan the main hero after the Cell Saga like he originally wanted to. So basicaly it's a remake of the Buu Saga lol. The story starts with Gohan and his friends arriving at the world tournament where they will meet Goku who has been given the chance to return to Earth for 24 hours. Gohan is still entering because Videl black mailed him just like in the Anime. So everything up until the tournament you can assume remained the same except Gohan kept up with his training for the past 7 years and Goten feels a little differently about his father, that's the only differences. So I hope everyone enjoys. lol ----------------------------------------------------------- The Z fighters began walking toward the gates of the World Martial Arts Tournament. Each of them excited that they would see Goku once again, Chi Chi and Gohan especially. Everyone except for young Goten. Being born soon after his father's death and never getting to meet him, Goten never knew of what it was like to have a father. The closest thing to a dad he had ever known was Gohan. Sure Goten wanted to meet his father, you could even say he was excited to meet Goku, but he was also nervous. And deep down, he was experiencing another emotion toward his dad, but it was something at his young age that he just couldn't understand. Still though his emotions were raging like a storm and his mind was filled with images and thoughts of his father, Goten kept his smile and calm in order to not worry the others. Still there was one that Goten couldn't hide his emotions from. Trunks could tell something was on Goten's mind. "I hope I get a match with dad in the tournament. I can't wait to show him how much stronger i've gotten." Gohan said with glee. Vegeta smirked, "You should be excited Gohan. Your father has been training in other world no doubt and his power has probably far exceeded what it was when he fought Cell" Vegeta gripped his fist with excitment, "But no matter what training he has gone through, I will still be one who wins." Krillin scratched the back of his head and laughed, "I still don't know why i'm entering this time. With my luck i'll end up facing one of you saiyans in the first round!" 18 rolled her eyes. "Hey Gohan!!" the group heard someone shouting up ahead. Piccolo spotted a young girl who was around Gohan's age, "She a friend of yours Gohan?" Gohan turned to Piccolo and nodded. As he ran to meet Videl he paused. It had been so long since he had last seen her that he had forgotten just how pretty she was. "Well Hello there Saiyaman. So you decided to show up after all." Gohan tried to reply but as usual his words came out muttered and mixed. Videl simply laughed, something she only started to do around Gohan recently and it was something she usualy did only around Gohan. She placed her finger on his lips and said, "I'll see you at the registration desk, okay?" Then she grabbed him by his collar and said in a stern tone, "But don't think just because we're friends i'll take it easy on you" Gohan again was rendered speechless as Videl smiled again and walked off. Krillin laughed, "Like father like son. You're in it deep Gohan. Your mom was just like that with Goku back at their first tournament together." Chi Chi kicked Krillin and shouted, "What's that supposed to mean!!?" From behind the group they heard a familar laugh and a familar voice, "That's my Chi Chi!! She hasn't changed a bit!" The group turned and their faces lit up when they saw their closest and dearest friend Goku standing before them. With his usual grin Goku said, "Hey guys, what's up?" Chi Chi nearly started crying. She ran up to Goku and hugged him tight, "Goku!! My Goku!! I''ve missed you so much!" Goku loved feeling his wife close to him again, he wrapped his arms around her, holding her close, kissing her gently, "I've missed you too Chi Chi." Goku looked over at Gohan and smiled with pride as he looked upon how much his son had grown in both size, power, and as a man. "Hey dad" Gohan said as tears started to fall down his cheeks. Chi Chi released Goku. He walked over to Gohan and hugged him, "I've missed you son." Gohan nodded, "I've missed you too dad. I'm glad your back" Chi Chi looked down to see Goten hiding behind her legs. She smiled and said, "Goku, I think there is someone else who has been waiting a long time to see you" Goku turned to Chi Chi and looked down to see Goten behind her. "Is that.." Chi Chi then finished his sentence for him, "Goten" Chi Chi stepped behind Goten allowing a full view of him for Goku. Goten looked up at his father and could see why everyone said that they looked alike. Goten ran up to his father and Goku picked him and held his youngest son close to him, "Goten, my son. It's alright daddy's here now." Goten began to cry, "Daddy...I love you" was all the boy could think to say. Goku and his friends talked about old times, and everyone told him stories of the past 7 years. After a few more minutes they began walking to the registration booth. Goten lagged behind however. Goten looked at his hands and whispered to himself, "That hug I gave him. Something about it...just didn't feel right." Goten still could not understand this emotion he was feeling deep down about his father. |
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Mar 14 2011, 12:02 AM Post #2 |
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Wow that was really good. Aside from a few things. I liked it a lot. |
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| Goten789 | Mar 14 2011, 07:18 PM Post #3 |
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Here's chapter 2. If anyone has any comments or want to give any feedback it would be very appreciated. This Chapter is longer than the last one. I hope everyone enjoys. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2: The group made it to the registration desk and signed in. Trunks and Goten were disappointed that they had to compete in the junior division. Videl popped up behind Gohan and looked at Goku, “Oh Gohan, is this your father?” Gohan smiled, “Yep” She gracefully bowed and said, “Nice to meet you sir, my name is Videl.” Goku laughed, “Videl? Oh you’re the girl that Gohan said he liked” Gohan’s jaw drop, “Dad shut it” Videl just stood there blushing. Vegeta, annoyed by the small talk spoke up, “When your done with the senseless chatter, we should get inside and gets seats. The junior division is starting soon.” Goku agreed. As the group entered the stadium they spotted a strange couple of fighters coming toward them. Piccolo could sense something odd about them, as could Goku, Gohan, and Vegeta. The smaller of the two came up to Goku and said, “You must be Goku.” Goku nodded, “Yes, but how did you know my name.” The stranger smiled, “My name is Shin and I suppose you could say I’m a big fan of yours Goku.” The stranger pointed to the taller stranger, “This is my friend Kibito. I hope I’ll get the chance to face you today Goku.” Goku smiled, but not like he normally does, it was a concerned smile, “Uh yeah me too.” With that Shin and Kibito walked away. Piccolo looked at Goku and whispered, “There was something strange about them.” Goku nodded in agreement, “Yeah, but let’s not say anything just yet. We don’t want to cause the others to worry.” While Gohan and the others found some seats, Goku and Vegeta stayed in the room where the kids competing in the junior division were waiting. “Listen Trunks, I don’t just want you to beat Kakarot’s kid. I want you to humiliate him!!” Trunks sighed and rolled his eyes, “Sure dad. Besides Goten hasn’t been able to beat me yet, and he wont beat me today.” Vegeta smirked, “That’s the right attitude.” Vegeta took his leave to join his wife. Goku was encouraging Goten, “Listen, just do it your best out there okay son? And whatever happens we’re all going to be very proud of you. I want you to give it all you got Goten. Your son strong, even stronger than what your brother and I were at your age. I know you’re going to be a great warrior.” Goku smiled, he loved having a chance to be a father again. He had expected Goten to smile and agree, but instead all Goten said was, “Where is Gohan?” No smile, no excitement in his voice, nothing. It took Goku by surprise a little, “He’s with your mother. We’re all going to be watching Goten.” Goten nodded and again without emotion, “Okay” Goku smiled and took his leave. Though as soon as he had his back turned Goku’s smile disappeared, replaced by a look of concerned. He couldn’t help but wonder what was wrong with Goten, but he knew Goten was probably just nervous or something. Trunks knew better though. He walked over and sat down next to Goten, “Alright Goten, what’s bothering you. You may be able to trick the others into believing you’re fine but you can’t fool me.” Goten sat there thinking about what he should tell Trunks. But Trunks figured it out on his own, “Is it your dad?” He asked. Goten nodded, “It’s just…I have this weird feeling about him. I thought I would be happy to see him and I am but…I feel something else. I don’t know how to explain it.” Trunks was starting to understand what Goten was feeling, but he decided to let it go for the moment. “Just enjoy the tournament, Goten. Don’t think about your dad. Just think about how bad I’m going to beat you.” Trunks laughed. Goten followed in the laughter, “Yeah, we’ll see about that Trunks.” With two half-blood saiyans competing most of the matches were quick and boring, well to Vegeta they were. Finally the final match came, the son of Vegeta vs. the son of Goku. “Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the final match of the junior division!! Young Trunks is the son of Bulma Briefs, the president of Capsule Corporation!! Young Goten is the youngest child of Son Goku, who fought here at the martial arts tournament so many times before!! These two warriors surely will not disappoint! They have shown skills far beyond that of the average child!! Boys come on out!” The announcer proclaimed. As Trunks and Goten stepped out and began walking toward the ring, Goten looked up in the crowd and saw his father with his goofy smile. The Son family cheered on for their youngest member. Bulma cheered for Trunks but Vegeta on the other hand was shouting at Bulma, “Could you keep your mouth shut woman!! Your giving me a massive head ache for Kami’s Sake!!” Bulma who was just as hard headed as Vegeta shouted back, “Shut it Vegeta!! You should be cheering too ya know!” Vegeta just sighed in annoyance. Gohan laughed, “Looks like even the prince of all saiyans can’t argue with his wife, huh dad?” Goku nodded and smiled in agreement. The young fighters stood staring at each other in the ring as the announcer said, “Alright boys, remember the rules and have fun!” Goten couldn’t help but glance up at his father. Trunks shouted at Goten, “Goten!!! Forget your dad for right now!! Focus on this! You have to or I will destroy you!” Goten looked at Trunks, “Right sorry.” The announcer then shouted, “Begin!!!” Trunks charged at Goten and punched him in the face while he was still distracted with his emotions. Goten quickly pushed his thoughts aside and snapped back punching Trunks square in the face, sending the purple haired boy flying. Trunks used his ki to push back and headbutt Goten. That’s when the match got interesting, the two were clashing, punching, kicking all over the ring with incredible speed. The crowd was amazed. Vegeta smirked, “Finally some real fighting.” Standing behind Gohan and his friends were Shin and Kibito. Kibito turned to Shin and asked, “Is it Gohan or Goku?” Shin replied, “Gohan. I originally believed Goku was the strongest but it was Gohan who beat Cell. He’s the one we came for, I see that now.” In the ring the two young saiyans were still going at it but Trunks obviously had the upper hand and Goten knew it. Goten resorted to using the Son family’s signature move, “Kamehameha!!” Goten shouted and fired the wave at Trunks. Trunks was taken off guard and flew into the air with the Kamehameha following. Luckily Trunks dodged the attack. “Hey idiot!!! We promised not to use ki blast remember!!?” Goten laughed and said, “Sorry Trunks I forgot.” Trunks rolled his eyes, “What if that had hit the crowd dummy.” Trunks whispered. Vegeta looked angry, “Hey Kakarot that’s not fair!! Your son cheated!” Goku smiled and scratched his head, “Oh come on Vegeta, he just forgot.” Vegeta smirked, “Oh I get it. Well two can play at this game.” Vegeta stood up and shouted at Trunks, “No holding back, use everything you’ve got to win!!!” Trunks looked at his father and grinned, “You got it!” Trunks began to charge his ki and finally let it loose, transforming into a super saiyan. The crowd was in shock, here they were watching a boy floating in the air and his hair suddenly turns gold. Videl who was sitting next to Gohan remembered that the strange fighters at the Cell Games also had gold hair. She put two and two together but she just couldn’t believe it, “It couldn’t be…could it?” She mumbled to herself. Back in the ring Goten shouted at Trunks, “Hey, we aren’t supposed to go super saiyan, Trunks!! But if you get to then so do I!!” Goten followed Trunks’ lead and he too turned into a super saiyan. Gohan looked worried, “What are they doing!? They aren’t supposed to go super saiyan!” Videl looked at Gohan and thought to herself, “Super saiyan? What’s a super saiyan?” Vegeta gripped his fist, “Finally. Now this will be the true test of our sons’ skills” Vegeta’s blood was boiling to see this match. Vegeta got exactly what he wished for. The two super saiyans were fighting like they have never fought before. Having his father’s temper in battle Trunks grabbed Goten and threw him into the ring. He flew down and began to punch Goten deeper into the ring, creating a small crater. Goten’s angered built and he blew Trunks off with his ki. When Goten stood up his gi was torn and a small stream of blood came from his lower lip, as well as blood from an injury Trunks had made on his forehead. Goten shot at Trunks with fury almost knocking him out of the ring. Trunks fired his buster cannon at Goten. Goten knew the attack may hit the crowd so he tried to stop the attack with his hands. The attack pushed Goten back against the stadium walls outside of the ring. With one burst of energy Goten knocked the attack into the sky. The announcer who was in shock gained his composure and said, “Well it um looks like Goten has fallen out of the ring….which means Trunks wins!!” Trunks grinned and shouted with glee, “Alright!! I’m the champion!!! Hahaha!!!” Goten crossed his arms, “Trunks cheated.” He then looked up at his brother and mother and saw them smiling and cheering Goten. Goten smiled, “That’s alright I guess. If I had to lose to anyone, I’m glad it’s trunks.” Goten cheered for his best friend as he watched the celebration ceremony. Then Goten glanced up at his father and his excitement suddenly disappeared. When his father smiled down at him, Goten walked into the building. Goku become even more concerned, and now Gohan was starting to notice Goten’s attitude. As Goten entered the locker room he gripped his fist. He hated the fact that he was feeling this way about his dad. He didn’t know what to do. Outside in the crowd Goku turned to Gohan and asked, “Have you noticed Goten has been acting strange since I came back?” Gohan smiled trying to comfort his dad, “Give him a little time dad. He’s only seven, he’s just nervous I’m sure.” Goku nodded but still he was concerned. Gohan looked up at Shin who was looking straight at Gohan. Shin seemed nice enough but in truth he made Gohan feel uneasy. What did Shin really want? Gohan wondered. Edited by Goten789, Mar 14 2011, 07:25 PM.
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| Goten789 | Mar 15 2011, 04:43 PM Post #4 |
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Here's chapter 3. I'm getting alot of views on this story, but some comments would really be appreciated. Chapter 3: With the match ups for the adults already chosen and the adult division starting soon, Goku and Gohan went to the locker room to speak to Goten. The seven year old was washing the dirt and blood off his face. Gohan came up behind him and placed a hand on his back, “Goten is there something you’re not telling us.” Goten turned around to Gohan but also saw Goku. Goten looked down, he was so nervous it almost made him sick. Goku spoke up and said, “I do you love you Goten. You know that right? You’re my little boy, I’ll always love you.” With his head still down Goten gripped his fist in anger at his father’s words. Gohan was about to say something when he sensed the first match of the adult division already getting under way. He also felt Videl’s ki fading. Goku and Gohan looked at each other and they ran out of the locker room. Goten stood there with intense anger building. He punched a hole in one of the lockers and pulled back a bloody hand. “Love me? I’m his little boy? How can he say that when he barely even knows me.” Now Goten was starting to understand these emotions. Gohan and Goku hurried outside and what Gohan saw shocked him. There in the ring was Videl, beaten, bloody, and broken, beging crushed by the fighter Spovovich. She was screaming, begging for him to let go, shouting that she gives up. Gohan looked at her and saw she could barely breath. The announcer was shouting that spovovich was eliminated from the tournament and for him to stop but he wouldn’t let go. He laughed and then bashed his head against Videl’s face, breaking her nose and busting her lips. Gohan couldn’t take it anymore, “Stop it right now!!!!” he shouted, “I said to STOP IT!!!!” Gohan charged into the ring and kicked spovovich so hard he went flying out of the ring. Gohan held Videl in his arms. Finally able to breath again, Videl had tears in her eyes. Gohan had never seen Videl this fragile. She was always so tough and strong but not now. To see her in this much pain broke his heart. She reached her hand up and put it on his cheek and whimpered, “Gohan…please help me..don’t let him hurt me again….” Tears flowed down Gohan’s face, it was this moment he realized he really did love Videl. The girl he loved rested in his arms hurting. He carried her into the building. When he walked passed his father, Goku whispered, “I’m sorry son.” Gohan took her to the medical ward and gently put her on a bed so the doctors could check her out. Goku patted Gohan’s back, “You love her huh?” Gohan nodded and Goku looked down, “She reminds me a lot of your mother when we were your age. Gohan, I’m gonna go visit Korin and get some senzu beans. She’ll recover much faster with those.” Gohan nodded again and whispered, “Thanks dad.” Goku went outside and flew off to the lookout, flying as fast as he could. “Gohan, you’ve become a man.” Goku said to himself. Gohan sat next to Videl and stroked her face gently. He whispered to himself, “How could I let this happen to her? I should have been there. This is all my fault.” Just then Hercule walked into the room and heard Gohan say “This is all my fault” Assuming the worst Hercule grabbed the teenager by his collar and punched him in the face, “You hurt my little girl!!!” He shouted. Gohan couldn’t believe Hercule could hit that hard, but I guess when it comes to your children, anyone can hit hard. Videl awoke and pleaded to her father, “Daddy stop….it wasn’t him. It was Spovovich.” Hercule let Gohan go and rushed over to his daughter. He held her hand, “I’ll make him pay muffin. I’ll make Spovovich pay.” Hercule looked up at Gohan and began to realize why he was here, “Are you her boyfriend?” Gohan looked at Hercule, “I love her…” was all Gohan could say. Though Hercule could have blamed Gohan for not being there to help her sooner, he knew that it wasn’t right. Even a cheat like him had honor enough to admit that. Goku arrived at Korin’s tower and after some quick hellos he took some beans and rushed back to the tournament. Goten came into the room and saw Videl was hurt. Tears filled the young boy’s eyes, “Gohan, what happened to Videl!?” Gohan turned to his younger sibling and held him in his arms, “Spovovich, one of the fighters he….” Gohan took a moment and said, “He basically tortured her.” Gohan felt anger over the thought of what Videl must have been feeling when Spovovich was squeezing the life out of her. Goten hated this, Videl was like a sister to him but here she was hurt. Videl reached her hand up and stroked Goten’s cheek, “Big sister is gonna be alright…” She smiled weakly. Goku entered the room and held Videl’s hand and said, “Videl, I got you something that is going to make you feel much better.” Goku grabbed a bean and put it in her mouth. She chewed and then swallowed it. Just a moment later she felt much better, “Amazing…I feel a lot better! I didn’t think anyone could recover this fast!” Gohan smiled and said, “Thanks dad.” Goku turned and smiled at his son. Then Goku looked at Goten and smiled but Goten just kept watching Videl, ignoring his father. Goku sensed the next match starting. It was between Piccolo and Shin. Goku had to see this, he had to figure out who Shin was and what he wanted. Goku looked at Gohan and said, “Gohan I have to see this match.” Gohan nodded and said, “Piccolo vs. Shin? Okay, I understand dad.” Goku stood up and ran to see the match. This made Goten angry, he couldn’t help but think, “Walking out again, dad? You can’t even spend time to be with your son when he’s going through a tough time.” When Goku arrived outside he saw Piccolo and Shin having a stand off. Neither was making a move, Goku knew they had to be speaking telepathically. In their conversation, Piccolo asked Shin, “If you don’t mind me asking. Are you the Grand Kai?” Shin responded, “No. I am the Supreme Kai” Piccolo was stunned. He had always speculated that there was someone higher than the Grand Kai, but he never knew for sure. Shin smiled and said, “If you don’t mind, could you please not tell the others about this. At least not yet.” Piccolo nodded in agreement. The announcer asked the two fighters, “Um. We’ve been standing here for 15 minutes now, can one of you please make a move.” Piccolo shook his head, “No. I’m sorry but I give up.” The crowd was very displeased as Shin and Piccolo stepped off the stage. Goku asked Piccolo, “Is he that strong?” Piccolo nodded and said, “Yes. He’s extremely powerful.” The announcer called the name of the fighters for the next match. It was Gohan vs. Kibito. Gohan heard his name being called but he really didn’t want to leave Videl. She persisted though and told him to go on and win for her. He smiled and told Goten to watch over her until he got back. Gohan ran outside to the ring where Kibito was already waiting. The announcer gave them the signal to begin. As soon as the match started Kibito asked, “Gohan, show me the true power of a super saiyan.” Gohan was confused and hesitant, “How do you know about super saiyans?” Piccolo shouted to Gohan from the side lines, “Do as he says Gohan! Trust me!” Piccolo knew better than to defy someone associated with a Supreme Kai. Gohan looked at Kibito and smirked, “Do you want to see a super saiyan or should I take it to the next level beyond super saiyan?” Kibito looked surprised, “There’s a level beyond a super saiyan?” Gohan nodded and started to charge his ki. It keep building up more and more, his hair turned gold, his aura as well. Then he pushed it a level beyond and blue lightning flashed in his aura and finally Gohan let his power release, transforming into a super saiyan 2. Yamu and Spovovich knew this was what their master wanted. This massive supply of power. The two jumped into action and caught Gohan off guard. They stabbed their energy draining device into Gohan’s side and began to drain his power. Videl stepped outside to see the match and gasped when she saw what was happening to Gohan. He was screaming in pain but it was like his body was paralyzed, he couldn’t fight back. Kibito did nothing to stop what was happening. Goku looked horrified, “oh no!! They’re killing him!” Goku was about to jump in and stop the match but Shin told him to wait. Piccolo looked at Goku and said, “Do as he says Goku. This is the Supreme Kai.” Goku looked shocked, that certainly explained the weird energy Shin gave off and the incredible power he has. Videl was still replaying Goku’s words in her head, “They’re killing him!” She charged into the ring but Kibito stopped her. Just a moment later Gohan’s super saiyan 2 form disappeared and he returned to normal. His power drained he fell to the floor dying. Spovovich and Yamu looked at each other and nodded. The two flew off. Supreme Kai looked at Goku and Piccolo and said, “Please come with me. We must follow those two. Don’t worry about Gohan, Kibito can heal him.” Goku and Piccolo nodded and took off with the Supreme Kai. Vegeta not being one to be left behind followed as well, “You‘re not skipping out on our match Kakarot.” Kibito quickly healed Gohan. The young fighter looked up at Kibito but he had little time to explain things to Gohan here. “Come with me, your father, Vegeta, and Piccolo are already with the Supreme Kai. I will explain everything on the way there.” Kibito took off and Gohan was about to follow when Videl came up behind him and asked, “Gohan wait…7 years ago those fighters at the Cell Games. That was you and your friends right? It wasn’t my dad who beat Cell…it was you wasn’t it? You were that little boy?” Gohan nodded and said, “Yes. I’m sorry I kept that a secret from you Videl. I really do love you and I’ll make everything up as soon as I get back.” Videl looked into Gohan’s eyes, “Come back alive” He nodded and flew off following Kibito. Goten watched as his father took off. He was concerned for Gohan. However seeing his father leave him, even though they have less than a day now to spend with each other, it hurt Goten. Goten gripped his fist and thought of his father, “If you’re just going to keep leaving me. Then why don’t you just stay gone this time and never come back” Goten looked up at the sky with anger. |
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| Arkadom | Mar 20 2011, 05:19 PM Post #5 |
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Coooolllll.....Goten seems more mirai Trunks at this point TBH. Not bad,but not good =/ Still,it is well written and for once Im not reading a script fic,so good work. |
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| Goten789 | Mar 26 2011, 04:16 AM Post #6 |
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Hey everyone. So sorry about not being on much, I had alot of school work to catch up on. Anyways during my absence I had time to basically come up in my head what the rest of this stories plot will be. Hopefully i'll be able to finish it by the end of next week or just a little later. So I think starting with this new chapter you'll see Gohan take the leadership role and some major changes to the original Buu Saga story. Chapter 4: As Kibito and Gohan followed the Supreme Kai and the others, Kibito explained everything about Majin Buu and the chaos he brought millions of years ago. Gohan looked at him and asked, "So Spovovich and Yamu were working for this wizard named Babidi. And they took my energy so they could revive him? And if he comes back then Majin Buu will destroy everything in his path." Kibito nodded and responded, "Yes. I'm sorry Gohan but we had to allow them to take your power so we could find out where Babidi is hiding." Gohan shook his head, "It's fine. I just want to put an end to this as fast as possible." Kibito agreed, "We all do." "Look there, it's the supreme Kai and the others!!" Kibito pointed out and the two joined the group up ahead. Goku looked back at his son, "So i'm guessing Kibito already explained everything to you, son?" Gohan nodded to confirm. Vegeta smirked, "Sounds like this Majin Buu would have made a pretty good saiyan." Supreme Kai looked at Vegeta and shook his head, "You're wrong Vegeta. Majin Buu killed the other Supreme Kais with little effort and the supreme kais were all much stronger than the one you call Frieza. Buu would have destroyed your entire saiyan race with a breath." Goku saw Spovovich and Yamu in a forest up ahead. "There they are guys!!." The group surpressed their ki as they landed on the cliffs below. Supreme Kai looked down to see the two minions of Babidi standing infront of a small doorway, which must be the entrance to the ship. That's when it hit the supreme Kai, "It was underground the whole time. That's why we could never find Babidi's ship before!! I'm such a fool!! I should have realized it sooner!!" Gohan looked over at Supreme Kai and told him, "Hey don't beat yourself up about it. We know where his ship is now. All we have to do is go in there and stop Majin Buu's revival and then everything will be fine again. Right now isn't the time to start blaming yourself." Piccolo nodded in agreement, "He's right. There is nothing anyone can do to change the past. We just have to move forward and do what we can now." Supreme Kai shook his head and said, "You people really have no idea what you're saying. Do not underesitmate this wizard. He has the power to manipulate the evil within an evil person's heart and bring them under his control." "Then what is going to keep us from being controlled by this wizard?" Vegeta asked. Supreme Kai answered, "Because I believe we all have pure hearts." Vegeta grunted and thought about how wrong the supreme Kai was about him. Vegeta's thought were interrupted when the door opened. "Someone is coming out." Said Kibito. A small green creature and a tall red demonic looking man stepped out of the ship. Gohan quickly asked, "Which one is Babidi?" Supreme Kai looked at him and said, "The small one. Don't be fooled, he is the most dangerous one of them all besides Majin Buu of course. And the tall one is..." Shock ran through the Supreme Kai's face, "Oh no!! Not him...it's Dabura!! He's the king of the demons. Gohan, you may be the strongest in this universe. But in the demon realm Dabura is the strongest." Gohan looked surprised. They listened in as Yamu and Spovovich handed the energy to their master. Babidi grinned and said, "Thank you boys but i'm afraid I have no further use for you." The wizard then used his magic to kill both of them quickly. Horrofied by the scene, Gohan's emotions started to rise, "I can't believe it!! He killed his own men like they were nothing!! What kind of sick people are we dealing with here!?" Supreme Kai looked at the young teenager and replied, "I told you to be careful. Babidi's cruelty has no bounds." As Babidi turned to enter his ship he told Dabura, "Could you "greet" our guest, Dabura?" Dabura grinned and replied, "Master, I sense they all have power levels far beyond anything imaginable on this planet. And one of them is the Supreme Kai." Babidi nodded, "Yes I noticed. Let's see now...ah yes I've got an idea!! Kidnap the green one. I can sense a small trace of evil burried inside his heart. If I can pull the strings just right then he will make a fine addition to my army. With the green one in our grasp, the others will charge in running and we can use their energy to revive Majin Buu!!" "And what of the Supreme Kai, master?" Dabura asked. "Don't do anything to him yet. He'll follow the others in and then i'll be able to extract revenge on him personally. He'll pay for what he did to my father!!" Babidi gripped his fist and entered his ship. Dabura just stood outside silently for a moment. "What's he doing?" Gohan asked. Piccolo realized what was happening and said in alarm, "He knows we're here!!!" Dabura shot up to them and punched Piccolo in the gut, knocking him unconsious and then he blasted Kibito, killing him. Dabura grabbed the Namekian and looked at an enraged Gohan, "Come and save your friend if you dare. But the longer you wait the more we'll torture him" Dabura flew back into the ship with Piccolo in hand. With thoughts of the horrors they would put his former mentor through and the feeling of loss watching Kibito being killed in front of him, Gohan's angered flared and he transformed into a super saiyan. With that he flew into the ship. Supreme Kai shouted for him to wait but he only ignored his pleas. Goku too was concerned, "Gohan!!!!!! Darn it that kid can really be hard to handle sometimes!!!" He jumped into the ship with Vegeta following as well as the Supreme Kai. |
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| lunar2 | Mar 26 2011, 11:15 AM Post #7 |
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nice, nice. i see you took out the spit. that was a stupid skill to begin with. goten and trunks sound more like teenagers than little kids. |
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list of canon sources: the DB manga, and the Dr. Slump manga as it applies to the crossover during the rra saga. list of non canon sources: everything else, regardless of origin, format, or quality. for those that blindly follow word of god | |
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