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| ND4 | Feb 28 2011, 01:36 AM Post #1 |
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I did get this idea, from the Planet stage from DBZ: Budokai Tenkachi 3. If anyone would be kind enough, to post a picture of that location, I would be most grateful. So the idea is that their is a race living on the planet, that is under strict control by Frieza and his men, and everything seems to be going as normal, until one day one member of the captured race, manages to get an audience with King Vegeta, and eventually persuades him, to have the Sayains help his race, rebel asgiant Frieza, and take back the planet, from Frieza and the Arcoasians( Look them up on the DBZ wikia. They are the ones who made the Attack Balls.) Here is the first chapter! Tell me what you guys think!. Oh, and the Tuffles only just NOW meet the Sayians. So that’s why the Tuffles and the Sayaians don’t instantly hate each other. Also, if you didn’t figure it out, the Tuffles are being held like slaves on this planet.) It was a dark night on Planet Frieza 2, and in the chambers of his castle, the King of the mighty Sayain race, King Vegeta lay in his bed, furious about how he had lost his son to Frieza, after Frieza threatened to kill him, if he didn’t give up his son to the tyrant. Vegeta, would have done anything to keep his son, but he knew if he was killed, the Sayian race would have no one to lead them. Blood dripped from the palm of his hand, as his nails drove themselves into the flesh of his hand. Vegeta, had lost a lot to Frieza, including his beautiful Queen, and then the Saibiamen, and now his only son. Vegeta, always thought about attacking Frieza, but he brushed the idea off, as he knew he would be no match for the cruel ruler. One, foolhardy low class sayian had tried attacking Frieza, only to be killed just by the pure power of the evil one’s energy. Frieza, then made it a rule, if another sayian made a attempt on his life, he would kill all of the sayian children and women. Vegeta, had never felt so useless, but he had to get some sleep. As, the saddened king tried falling back to sleep, he got a message from his scouter. The king , quickly checked the message, and rolled his eyes, as it was none other than the lower class trash, or better known as Raditz. Although, the king had never met or even talked to Raditz, he knew who he was, as his fellow sayian Bardock would not stop bragging about Raditz, for weeks, after he was born. “What is it Raditz?! It must be very important, for you to dare message your king, at such a late ti-“, Those were the only words, Vegeta could get out before Raditz cut him off, and responded. “My king, one of the members of the race, Lord Frieza has taken over on this planet, is having a conflict with the leader of the Arcoasions that live on this planet. Lord Frieza, order-I mean requests you to come down and put that whatever it is, in its place. Raditz out.”, Although they weren’t a lot of words, Vegeta sighed, as he would have to stick up for a disgusting Arocoasion, who the King hated with a passion, as he thought that being nomadic, the Arcoasions, wouldn’t even think of being smart enough to make something as advanced as the scouter or the Attack ball, but while Vegeta could respect that. It, was the sheer arrogance, of the Arcoasions, that lived on this planet, that made the Sayian king hate the entire race, and it wasn’t because the Arocoasions killed Sayains or made them pay taxes, it was the fact the Arcoasions, if cornered or threatened with a beating, they would always call Frieza to come and bail them out, like the cowards they were. As much as he didn’t want to do it, Frieza had ordered him to, and with his son in Frieza’s possoion, he didn’t have much of a say in the matter. Vegeta, quickly flew down to the scene, as a member of the race, which Vegeta using his scouter, identified as a member of a species called Tuffles. They resembled normal human beings, and were very smart, but weren’t very strong, and as a result of that, their army was quickly defeated by Frieza’s troops. But, luckily Frieza didn’t want any sayians on the mission, so this was the first time the King or any sayain for that matter, saw a Tuffle. It appeared the tuffle, was fighting with two of the Arocoasion’s leader’s two guards, and was surprisingly holding his own, which shocked Vegeta, as even though he would never say it out loud, the Arcoasions were decent fighters, and before Frieza began trading with them, many of Frieza’s troops were lost to the Arcoasions, and even Sayians were killed as well, but the Arcoasions were quickly overwhelmed when the Sayians began to use their Great Ape forms. Vegeta, was watching in awe, thinking that maybe this wasn’t a Tuffle, but maybe a sayian, or maybe a crossbreed, but then he caught the glimpse of the metallic gloves, the Tuffle was wearing. Their was no doubt now, it was a Tuffle, and the only reason it hasn’t been killed yet, is because of those gloves. Vegeta, didn’t acknowledge it but deep, deep, DEEP down inside he hoped the Tuffle would kill the Arocoasion leader, but he knew that another one would just take his place. He also wondered why this Tuffle had gloves, but ignored that fact, and kept on watching the fight. “YOU!!! King Vegeta, I thought Frieza ORDERED you to come and kill this annoying Tuffle!! Are, you going to disobey him??!!”, The Arcoasion leader screeched, as Vegeta growled, and bit his lip to stop himself from attacking the insect like alien, as he then nodded and reappeared, in front of the Tuffle, who desperately tried to take out Vegeta, by shooting a rocket, from the palm of one of his gloves, only for Vegeta to swat it away with no effort. The Tuffle, could only let out one scream, before Vegeta blasted him, and turned him to dust. Vegeta, quietly thanked the Tuffle, for trying to kill the leader, who scoffed and mumbled. “ Meh, I could have killed him myself. What, was the hesitation for Vegeta? Don’t tell me you felt sorry for the Tuffle scum!!”, The leader shrieked as Vegeta turned around and bent down to the leader’s face. “I, am willing to bet my son’s life on it, that I could kill you were you stand, and even if you guards kill me afterwards, I would be proud of it. Be glad, Lord Frieza is the one protecting you..” Vegeta warned as he then received a message from Frieza himself. Vegeta, cursed under his breath, as he flew off in a hurry, towards Frieza’s spaceship, leaving the now confused Arcoasion leader and his two exhausted guards behind. Once, Vegeta arrived at Frieza’s spaceship, he was shocked when he saw that Frieza’s father was here as well. “Ah, their you are at last King Vegeta. Come, come don’t be shy, and say hello to my father, and the leader of the World Trade Organization, King Cold.”, Frieza motioned, as his giant father, who towered over King Vegeta who was at least 6’0 while KC stood 8’0. King Cold then extended a hand towards Vegeta, while greeting him. “So, you’re the leader of the pride Sayian race that has helped my little Frieza conquer so many planets. Sigh, if only Cooler were here to see how strong his brother’s army has become. But, that’s enough of that. Let’s get down to business. “, King Cold, stated as he pulled his hand back before Vegeta could touch it, and then he motioned for Frieza to continue speaking. “While, yes it is unfournate, that my jerk of a older brother, would rather destroy planets, then come and see my own collection of planets, I have more pressing matters. You see King Vegeta, I grow tired of living in this space ship, and so I am taking your castle to be my second headquarters. You have one hour to get everything of yours out of the castle. No objections? Alright then, you can go.”, Frieza quickly said, as Vegeta began to power up a blast, and he would have shot it too, if Raditz hadn’t stopped him. “We will be getting out of your way, Lord Frieza.”, Raditz lied as he dragged the King outside of Frieza’s chambers, as he began to quietly scream at his ‘king’. “You idiot! You could have gotten yourself killed!!! Do you want that?! You know, what power Lord Frieza possesses!! Besides, you can’t die yet, without listening to this ‘proposal’ this ugly creature known as a Tuffle wants you to hear.”, Raditz quickly explained, as Vegeta and him flew back to Vegeta’s castle in a hurry, and once they walked into the king’s chambers, their was a skinny Tuffle, who although his ragged clothes, that Frieza had made his race wear, made him look weak, he had a solid six pack underneath his clothes, and he also had a scar running down the left side of his cheek. This tuffle, was on his knees, with his arms bound by handcuffs, made by the Arcoasions. “So, you finally came eh ‘King’ Vegeta. I hate to say it , but as a King it seems like your doing a pretty bad job.”, The tuffle stated as the King who was looking for ANY excuse to blast something, could barley restrain himself, from killing the Tuffle, as he grabbed the weaker alien by the neck, and demanded to know what his proposal was. “*Hack, Well, *hack, if you let me *HACK, go, I can tell you..”, The tuffle croaked out, as Vegeta coldly dropped him to the ground, and let the Tuffle catch his breath, before he began to speak. “Heh, well you see Vegeta, I have heard from some sources that will not be named, that there is an armory of weapons, for some of Frieza’s grunts, that also have some Tuffle weapons and armor locked away in it. I even know were that armory is. It was the prison I was just held in, before I managed to convince long hair here to let me talk to you. So c’mon, can you find it in your heart, to convince the other sayians to break into the armory, and get our weapons back, and we can all go asgisant Frieza?! Please!!!”, The Tuffle whimpered, as Vegeta mulled the thought over, and realized that Tuffle from before, must have kept his gloves hidden from Frieza’s troops, so they wouldn’t get put away in the armory. Anyway, Vegeta, before would have thought the idea was ludicrous and killed the Tuffle right on the spot, but after realizing the horrible things in his life, like dealing with the cowardly Arcoasions, and dealing with the loss of that one sayain and his beautiful wife, and now even his son was taken, his answer was clear. “Yes…I will help you.”, Vegeta said, as the Tuffle smiled, and once Raditz broke the handcuffs, the Tuffle shook hands with the King, as he declared that the Sayians and Tuffles would now fight a guerilla war asgiant Frieza’s forces! But, the first stop, was the armory, that the Tuffle had been talking about… CHAPTER 1 CONCLUDED! CHAPTER 2 Raditz, a sayian who had loyally followed Frieza, was shocked to listen to the KING of all sayians, agree to this Tuffle’s idiotic plan. In fact, he even stopped Vegeta and the Tuffle from leaving the room. “I-I-I’m sorry, but I can’t let you leave..You both must die here. You are no longer my King, and with you two gone, this rebellion agsiant Lord Frieza will never take off.”, Raditz said charging a energy blast in his hand, as the Tuffle growled, and hid behind Vegeta, who put aside the thought of harming another sayian, and only remembered that Raditz was low level trash. As, soon as Raditz fired, Vegeta knocked the blast away, and blasted right through Raditz’s chest, making the sayian fall to the floor, as Vegeta could only look away, as he destroyed the body, and the scouter. He then began to walk off, to gather his Sayian elites, as the Tuffle who was slightly scared of Vegeta’s mercelicess attack on Raditz, followed after. Once Vegeta, entered his chambers, he was shocked to see Arcoasions, in the room, with four of them holding Vegeta’s trusted commander of the Sayian army, Nappa back, as one of Frieza’s top ranked men Cui was in the room. Vegeta, didn’t particularly know Cui that well, but his son before he was taken, had fights with Cui, that always ended in draws. Remembering how easily his son disposed of the Saibamen, he thought it wise to not provoke an attack on Cui. Nappa, managed to break free from the four Arcoasions that were all tired out, as the sayian charged toward Cui, who stopped the might warrior in his tracks, with just one hand. “Hmm? Ahh, King Vegeta, perhaps you could stop this dumb monkey from attacking these Arcoasions and myself? Before, I am forced to strike back..”, Cui growled as Vegeta called Nappa off, and asked why Cui was here. “Isn’t it obvious Vegeta? I’m here to make sure you leave. Now, please don’t make this any harder than it has to be. Leave now.”, Cui warned as Vegeta nodded and shoved Cui out of his way, as the three of them walked out the door. But, while in the process of walking towards the armory, Nappa, pulled away from King Vegeta, and began to yell at him. “King!!! Why is their a piece of Tuffle sc- ooff..”, Those the only words Nappa could get out, before a quick knee to the gut silenced him. “Don’t make a scene you idiot. I am with this Tuffle for a rebellion asgisant Frieza, and I was looking to gather my best warriors, and seeing as how you’re the commander of our proud, Sayian army, will you come with us, to get our weapons for the Tuffles?”, Vegeta asked as Nappa grinned and shook Vegeta’s hand without question, as he asked The Tuffle where this armory was. “Its, right ahead. We, should have a good chance to get into it, because I have heard there is usually only one guard, patrolling the entrance.. I don’t know what lies ahead inside though.”, The Tuffle explained as Vegeta came upon the huge building, which must have been the armory, as their was one guard with a blaster, guarding the front entrance. Vegeta, The Tuffle leader, and Nappa quickly hid behind a tree, as Vegeta tore off a piece of his cape, and tied it around his mouth, as he then removed the family crest from his armor, as he motioned for the Tuffle, and Nappa to stay put , as he walked towards the guard. “Huh? Vegeta? What are you doing here out so late, and why do you have a thing on your mou- wh-wh-why are you raising your arm like that?!”, The scared and confused guard asked, as Vegeta blew off the guard’s head, before the poor creature could even think of pulling the trigger on his blaster. As, the guard’s body fell to the ground, Vegeta quickly blasted open the door, as The Tuffle and Nappa followed him in, and the two sayians were shocked to see how many blasters, scouters, and battle armor was stored in the armory. The Tuffle grabbed a case of body armor, that had a crack in it, in the left breastplate, which the Tuffle ignored, as he grabbed a rifle based blaster, and since Vegeta and the Tuffle had kept two pairs of bags, they took as many items, as they could hold in the bags, as the delayed alarms began to sound, and guards immediately came out of various buildings, which held Tuffles who were treated like slaves, and if one was caught outside of their house, they were killed. Vegeta, quickly blasted some of the guards away, as the Tuffle fired upon the guards with his blaster, which destroyed the guard’s Battle suits, and the shots came out the other side. Nappa, then split the ground, sending a good majority of the guards plummeting to their doom, as Vegeta quickly slapped Nappa for his recklessness, as the Tuffle grabbed onto Vegeta’s back and before more guards and even soliders could arrive, the three thieves were gone. But, since Nappa lived in now Frieza’s castle, and Vegeta had lost his home, and The Tuffle would be killed if he was seen outside, the three had nowhere to go, so they just decided to hide in a tunnel, were the Arcoasioans used to live, while they fought Frieza’s forces. The three could only watch in terror, as Frieza, himself came down and Vegeta, even though he before thought of the Tuffles as nothing but a race that needed to die, his whole opinion changed, as Frieza had his two top men, Zarbon and Dodoria drag a innocent family of Tuffles, that lived close to the armory, and Frieza killed them, even after they said, all they heard was a big boom, and their guard went out to see what had happened and he didn’t come back. As, Frieza left, Vegeta was seething with rage and blood soon seeped from the palm of his hand, as he clenched his fist hard enough to draw blood, as the Tuffle patted him on the back, and said that they would soon defeat Frieza. “? So, you’re the troublemakers, Frieza sent me to look for…Well, I thought their would be more..”, The voice appeared to come to a figure, who looked to be a sayian, and even though Vegeta, and Nappa had never met him, the sayian resembled someone who Vegeta and Nappa had seen before. But, they were worried…that this sayian wouldn’t see Frieza, the same way they saw him, as the mysterious warrior raised his hand, and began charging a circle shaped energy blast. CHAPTER 2 CONCLUDED! CHAPTER 3! “Wh-Wh-Who dares attack the King of all Sayia- guaahhha!!”, Those, were the only sounds Vegeta could make, as this mysterious assailant kneed him the chest, sending the once thought powerful king to the ground. Nappa, ushered the Tuffle back into the tunnel, while he tried to destroy their attacker, with his strongest attack: Kapa. Nappa, launched the strong mouth blast at the sayian, only for the attack to be easily deflected, and with a swift chop to the neck, Nappa was defeated as well. “Now, there is only the weak Tuffle scum, left for me to take out..C’mon out Tuffle, I won’t hurt you too bad..”, The sayian mocked, as the Tuffle gulped, and fired on the sayian with his blaster, and he was hoping that he had at least injured the attacker, but once the dust cleared, the Tuffle was knocked out, by a strong punch to the gut. The attacker’s battle armor was ruined, but other than that, the warrior was fine, and after noticing the Tuffle had been knocked out with one punch, the man rose his hand, to kill the Tuffle. “Heh, the law is that if Tuffles are seen outside of their homes, that they are to be killed. So, I should uphold the la- huh? What the hell are you doing?!”, The sayian screamed, as Vegeta had managed to grab the fellow warrior’s tail, and held it as tightly as he could have, making the unknown warrior fall to his knees. “Tell me!! Who are you, and what is your real plot?! I can tell by the way your acting that you don’t serve Frieza.”, Vegeta explained as the warrior chuckled and then identified himself. “Names Turles, and your right ‘king’, I don’t serve Frieza or anyone. I only listened to come here to find who attacked the armory, because I thought that the rebels might have been a threat to me, but seeing as how easily, I beat you three…that doesn’t seem –oww!!!”, Turles screamed as Vegeta drove his nails into Turles’s tail. “ Grr…once I killed you three, I would be able to plant the Tree of Might!!!”, Turles, confessed as Vegeta was shocked by the mere mention of the Tree of might, as even Vegeta thought Sayians weren’t even worthy enough to have the seeds of the T.O.M. “You fool, how do you plan on growing something that enormous, without anyone noticing it?”, Vegeta challenged as Turles simply laughed and began to speak.”, Heh, you will see soon enough Vegeta, but I think that’s enough chit-chat. I have places to be, people to betray. Be grateful because I’m going to spare you three weaklings for now. But, if we meet again, don’t expect any mercy.” , Turles warned, as he broke free from Vegeta’s grasp, and flew off. Vegeta, could only sigh in exhaustion and frustration, as he picked up the Tuffle, and put him over his shoulder, as he kicked Nappa, until he woke up. Once, the bald fighter was awake, Vegeta, began looking around for were they could sleep, as the Tuffle barley managed to open his eyes. “ Ve-Ve-Vegeta..go back into the tunnels…Some of my fellow Tuffles, who escaped with me, are down their. That’s why I chose to go here..” The Tuffle explained, as Vegeta was about to go deeper into the tunnels, which still had the dried purple blood of the Arcoasions who lost their lives, fighting for their side of Planet Vegeta. But then, Vegeta stopped and dropped the tired Tuffle on the ground. “Before we move any further, tell me what is your name?”, Vegeta asked, as Nappa went on without him. The Tuffle, using his blaster as a crutch, sighed and began to speak. “Well, before I tell you my name, I have something, to tell you, that I have kept hidden from you..You see I used to be the –“, The rest of the Tuffle’s words were sounded out, by the booming sound of Frieza’s troops blasting the area, looking for the thieves who broke into the armory. Vegeta, growled as he grabbed the Tuffle and dragged him into the main center of the tunnels, which before being caught, the Tuffles had slightly modified by upgrading the left over tech, by the Arcoasion soldiers, and as soon as Vegeta and T(That’s what I’m going to be calling him, until his real name is revealed.) got into the center, a steel door shut behind them, as two armed turrets, then rose up, with two in front of the door, and two guarding the back of the door. “Leader, your back!!!”, One of the many Tuffles exclaimed, as this one was a brawny one, who had a beard and was very strange looking, as he has short arms, which were muscular, but long legs which were weak. This Tuffle ran up to T, and hugged him tightly, as T could barely whimper out for the Tuffle to let him go. “Oh, Sutcac is sorry. Sutcac like the two Sayian friends, you brought! Sutcac, hear this one is the king!”, This …particularly slow Tuffle said with glee evident in his voice, as the rest of the Tuffles which Vegeta estimated to be around 15, and which shocked Vegeta even more, their were six Arcoasions, who had discarded their robes, which they were supposed to wear all the time, and some of them had TH tattooed on their back.(Tuffle Helpler.) Apparently, three of the six Arcoasions were female, as they instantly took a liking to Nappa. Vegeta, was then awoken from his ‘trance’ by T who asked him, if he could explain the Sayians’ role in all of this. Vegeta, nodded as he then took the stage, and began to speak. “Tuffles, I may not have known your race for long, and I thought you were scum like the Arcoasions that allied themselves with Frieza, but after seeing how brave your ‘leader’ was as he stood by Nappa and myself, and tried to take on a much stronger opponent, even though all three of us fell. Still, with the power I have, I will try to use my influence as King of all Sayians to get more than just one sayian to join our cause! With the Arcoasions, who broke from their evil siblings, and you Tuffles, and my mighty Sayians, we will take back this planet, and defeat Frieza once and for all!!”,Vegeta roared as this brought a up roaring of cheering, and clapping from all of the members of the rebellion. T, smiled as he came onto the stage, and motioned for Vegeta, to hand out the weapons to the Arcoasions and Tuffles. Vegeta, nodded and with a grin, he did so, as he threw the two bags of weapons, to the Tuffles and the other bag for the Arcoasions. Vegeta, then bowed and took his place beside Nappa. T, then cleared his throat, as he began to speak as well. “Thank you Vegeta, for your inspiring words. The soliders of the T.S.A.R(Tuffle, Sayian , Arcoasion Rebels) tonight, we take our first stand asgisant Frieza’s forces! We will battle, with Arcoasions and some of Frieza’s grunts, as I have heard that at 12:00 PM, there will be a tradeoff, in the backlot of the city, with the Arcoasions, and some of Frieza’s forces. I have heard that Frieza’s elite guards Doadoria and Cui are going to be their, so we have to keep our guard up! Remember my fellow Tuffles, with King Vegeta and The Arcoasion rebel’s help we can defeat anyone!!”, T yelled as the whole tunnel broke out in excited cheers. CHAPTER 3 CONCLUDED! (Not finished yet. Will try to update every day.) Edited by ND4, Feb 28 2011, 01:37 AM.
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