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Second Chances V.2
Topic Started: Feb 8 2011, 08:16 AM (1,009 Views)
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Cell's Angel

So I did this fic awhile back and posted it here. I realize that you're not suppose to create new topics for the same fanfiction, but I'm redoing the whole fic, top to bottom, adding more plot, changing names, etc. etc. the whole deal. I thought it would be easier just to make a new topic than to edit old posts with old comments that new people would have to shift through. If I'm out of line, just tell me. I'll do whatever the mods want.

Anyway, here's is the first fully edited chapter of my story.





Chapter 1: Redemption

What..had happened? Where was he?

He carefully looked around him. A desk towered before him and an even more towering red ogre sat behind it. The only thing that kept him from looking like a complete monster was the horrid purple suit, orange tie and the fact that, even though the desk was gigantic, the ogre seemed almost comically too big for it. At either leg of the desk stood two, very scared, white-collared blue demon men. Wherever he was, it was certainly not Earth.

Did I..lose? No, impossible! I am the perfect being! I do not lose!


"Ah, Cell..I see your reign of terror has finally been brought to an end. Kami knows we had enough souls from you," the red giant said. "I am King Yemma, I am here to tell you where to go for the rest of your afterlife." King Yemma leaned forward and glowered down at Cell, but it went completely unnoticed by the bio-android.

What is that old fool blabbering about? I did not die! I am perfect! I could never be defeated! But still..a nagging thought tugged at the back of his mind. Had he..?

An image surfaced to his mind. There he was, and Gohan, facing off with kamehameha waves. Each striving for power, each knowing that more than their lives depended on the outcome. He had gained the upper hand. He had been so close to victory he could literally taste it. He had prevailed, even when those worthless fools had all attacked at once. He had been winning. What had happened?

"Why the lost look, Cell? Surely you didn't expect to win?"

Vegeta, that's what had happened. He remembered it all now. Vegeta, throwing off his concentration and enabling Gohan to overpower him in his moment of distraction. It had been a miscalculation on his part. He didn't think the beaten Saiyan prince would let his pride help a boy of twelve defeat an opponent he could not. Still, the Saiyan prince would pay, along with the whelp.

"For all of your heinous acts on Earth I'm sure you know where you're going. Hell has a special place just for you." Yemma picked up a pen, ready to mark Cell's fate across the paper.

Suddenly, the door burst open, making Yemma jump and causing his pen to fly out of his hand. He fumbled for it and, once it was secure in his hand, looked up, eyes narrowed at whoever had disturbed him.

"What's up, dudes," Grand Kai yelled, re-adjusting the boom box on his shoulder. He grinned toothily and flashed the 'rock on' sign at King Yemma.

Yemma, shocked, only managed to gape. Cell did not even look up at the blatant entrance.

"I'm here to tell ya Cell isn't going to Hell," Grand Kai started, walking foreword and placing his boom box on the floor.

"What!? But Cell has killed countless people." Yemma slammed his fist on the table, rattling the lamp and causing papers to fly. His pen also went flying out of his hand once more, almost impaling one of the blue demon workers below. "Surely you can't be-"

"Hey, I'm just telling you what the Supreme Kai told me. Cell is getting a chance to redeem himself."

Cell looked up at those words, his gaze fixated on Grand Kai, a non-existent eyebrow raised.

"Redeem himself," Yemma asked, outraged. The very thought of Cell redeeming himself was preposterous. What had possessed the Supreme Kai to give Cell a chance to 'redeem' himself? "And how, exactly, is he to 'redeem himself'?"

"Well, he's going to be given the body of a teenager and he is going to attend a school called Orange Star High. Supreme Kai wants him to change the lives of three people for the better….and befriend Gohan."

Cell's magenta eyes widened, his mouth gaping slightly. Befriend Gohan? They had to be out of their imperfect little minds. Befriend the little whelp that had destroyed him? Then again... this plan had merits...

"Well, Cell," Grand Kai said, turning towards the shocked bio-android. "Wanna get a chance to redeem yourself?"

Cell glared skeptically at the old Kai. "And why, exactly, have I been given this chance?"

"You know, I asked the Supreme Kai that myself. He didn't give an answer though. Just mumbled something about the future and a heavy weight and told me to go."

Cell simply stared at the man, his face impassive. Inside, his mind was not as blank as his face. The wheels were turning inside his perfect brain, forming all the possibilities that could come from this, revenge being the foremost. They were practically offering it to him! Go back to Earth, be near Gohan. It was the perfect opportunity. Perhaps he could even go along with them for awhile. Become friends with Gohan, then stab him in the back at the last moment. No, he had a sense of pride. He would do it fairly. He had almost done it fairly last time, until those worthless fools had ganged up on him! Despicable, really.

"Uh..Cell?"

The scheming android looked up from his musings. "And what, exactly, is the catch?" He wasn't stupid enough to believe he had this chance for free.

The Grand Kai grinned as if catching on to the android's thoughts.

"You will be placed inside the body of a young man. You may not attack anyone or use your powers. The moment you do, your soul will be pulled and thrown immediately into Hell. And, as I've said, you must change three people's lives for the better and befriend Gohan."

Cell folded his arms across his broad chest. Was that all? He had expected all of those rules. And if he was to be put in a human body he highly doubted that it would be able to handle his awesome power. He ran through the rules one more time, exploring all possibilities that might doom him to fail. He didn't need power to exact his revenge. He could do that in other ways.

"Any questions," the Grand Kai asked.

A second passed, and then the bio-android gave him an odd look. "If the boy is dying, won't his body be too weak to handle my spirit?"

"Ah," Grand Kai started. "Yes, that is true. Your spirit's power will be able to rejuvenate the body, but only for a short amount of time. Say.. a year or so. The boy's body can barely handle your power as it is and too much of it would have the body break down on the spot."

"What happens at the end of one year then?"

"Well, you die, of course. The body is on borrowed time. And we can't let you wander the Earth forever."

Cell's eyes narrowed in contemplation. Could he exact his revenge in a year? Gohan was going to be very distrustful of him. Unless..

"Will Gohan and the others know who I am?"

"Goku, Piccolo and Dende do. We told Goku of our plan and he agreed. He entrusted Piccolo and Dende to the overseeing of your time on Earth."

Cell snorted. Goku had always been big on second chances.

"Which brings me to another point," Grand Kai added. "After you befriend Gohan, you must let him know who are. The contract cannot be complete until you, Cell, are friends with Gohan. Gohan must know who you are. Piccolo and Dende will attest to Gohan so he believes you."

Cell smirked. That suited his purposes just fine. If Gohan did not know it was him, then it would be all the easier to get close to him. But if he was going to exact his revenge, he would want Gohan to know it was him eventually. The victory would be all the sweeter then. He was never one to hide behind deceit anyway. He detested using tricks to win.

"Alright. I will take this.. offer. When do I leave?"

~*~

Okay, that was a pain. I copy pasted it to the word box and then all my quotations and apostrophes freaked out and I had to go redo them one by one. So If I forgot one, sorry.
Also, the characters might be a little out of character. I never really got to see a lot of Grand Kai's character and Cell is hard to keep up with sometimes. I mean, he is perfect. lol Couldn't resist that.
So yes, tell me what you think. And Neci I know you read the other one so if you remember anything at all about it tell me if I've gotten better (or worse lol) Although the old post is still up so I suppose anyone could go check out how bad it is...
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Can't finish it now but it looks good. Like the idea of Cell being a kid. I'll read it all later.
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I liked the story. You should write more of it I'm really looking forward to seeing the outcome of the story. And I like how Cell actually has a chance to change personalities. Keep it up
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Impressed with this, its good to read- good paragraphing, sentence structure and wording-

Like the use of known characters, youve kept insinc with them. Dialogue is well used.
Interesting idea on what you have planned for Cell.

Looking forward to more.

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Alright, finished editing up Chapter 2. I combined the old chapter 2 and 3 to make it longer.
Thanks for all the comments : ) And I always welcome constructive crit. so feel free to tell me if there's anything you think I could improve on.



Chapter 2: Resurrection

"You leave right now, of course. No time to waste. The boy you're inhabiting is already about to pass on to the next world," Grand Kai said. "Are you ready?"

Cell unfolded his arms and nodded.

In the next instant, the world collapsed before his eyes and he felt very small. It took him a moment to realize that his body had been condensed into a glowing orb that floated a few feet off the ground. Just as he registered this, he was off at break neck speed, zooming past the denizens of the After World. Soon they disappeared and everything became a blur that even his perfectly trained eyes could not decipher. The ride ended just as quick as it had started and he came to an abrupt halt in a very different room.

He did not know much about human buildings, but he knew this one was called a Hospital. The walls were obscenely white and barely decorated with little more than a degree from some school and a few diagrams of the human body. But none of that mattered. What did was the small family below him.

A boy in his teens was laying on a cot, a mouthpiece attached to his face that fogged over with each exhale. Next to the bed was a short blonde haired woman sobbing on a gray haired man's shirt. Lines creased the man's forehead and his honey brown eyes glistened with unshed tears. His wrinkled old hand was slowly rubbing the woman’s back.

Cell stared stonily at them, not the least bit moved by the emotional display. The bio-android waited patiently, hovering above the family. He had waited ten days for the Cell Games, he could wait a few more minutes for this boy to die of natural causes. Finally, the heart monitor went flat and the machine emitted a monotonous tone that filled the room. The woman's sobs reached a crescendo but Cell was focused on the dead body. Slowly, a soul arose from the boy. It lingered a bit, circling around the two, and then flew out. Then, Cell's own soul entered the body.

Once in he became aware of quite a few things. He was definitely shorter than before, which wasn't surprising. The woman's sobs also sounded significantly louder from here. Apparently his sensitive hearing was intact. He tried moving his limbs but found them unresponsive. What was wrong with this body?

"Wendy," he heard the man say gently. "Wendy, look." The woman's sobs quieted a little as she detached herself from the man and looked at Cell. Her mouth fell open, forming a tiny 'o' as joy filled her face and fresh tears lined her eyes.

"Oh Aiden! I'm so glad your alive!" Ragged emotion laced her words. "I..I.. I don't know what I would’ve done if you had left me!" She reached over and hugged him, his face landing directly in her bosom. Cell involuntarily flinched. He had never been.. hugged.. before. How did he deal with these people? He simply nodded and tried to lean out of the hug. The woman seemed to have no intention of letting him go though.

"Uhm.." he coughed slightly. "Can you release me?"

She stilled and leaned away, though her arms were still around him. "Oh, Aiden, don't what are you saying?" She suddenly gasped and turned towards the man, releasing him in the process. Cell sighed in relief and leaned back. "Oh dad, what if he lost his memories??"

The man stroked his chin. "Well, I suppose it's possible. He did hit his head after all."

A horrified look came over Wendy's face. Before she could comment further, the doctor and a nurse rushed in. The nurse coaxed Wendy into sitting as the doctor began checking Cell's vitals. When he was done, the doctor stepped back, amazement on his face.

"I don't know how, Ms. Destan, but it seems your son has made a full recovery."
The woman's hand flew to her chest as she sighed in relief. She took out a white cloth from her pocket and dabbed at her eyes.

"But doctor, he doesn't seem to remember anything."

"Amnesia is common in head trauma patients," he said, tapping the clipboard he had picked up from the end of the cot. "I would like to keep him over night, run a CAT scan, monitor him some more. He just came out of a critical condition." He scrawled something across the clipboard and then handed it to the nurse. "It would be best if you left now so that Aiden can rest."

Wendy nodded. "Of course, doctor." She turned back towards Cell and stroked his cheek. "Don't worry Aiden. Mommy will be back for you tomorrow."

Cell simply nodded and restrained himself from pulling away from her. Ugh, humans and their affections. Goku had showed such displays of affection to his own son and Cell had found it pointless. Right now he found it repulsive.

~*~

The next day came a bit too fast for his liking. Wendy and the other man were now in his room waiting for him to get dressed in some clothes they had brought for him. He was in the bathroom, staring at his reflection, eye twitching.

This body.. was so weak! Oh, he hadn't had high expectations when he realized he would be inhabiting a human body. But this was ridiculous. The body was thin and pale. He could even see the faint outline of ribs. What had this boy done all day? Nothing, apparently. He sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. Alright, alright, he could handle this. He was the perfect being, after all.

That's why you were defeated.


Augh! He threw the jeans and t-shirt on, both hanging limply off his frail frame. He glared at the mirror once more and then stalked out of the bathroom.

The car ride back to his new home was almost unbearable. That woman kept babbling, asking him how he was, what he wanted, if he wanted to stop anywhere in particular. Usually he could have just tuned her out but he was agitated. His fingers were tapping against his leg as he stared out the window, elbow resting on the door and his hand propping his chin up.

"Now Robert," she started, turning around in her seat to face him. "You don't have to start school tomorrow you know. In fact, the doctor said it would probably be better if you didn't."

"What," Cell said, turning away from the window to look at her. "Not start school?" That was unacceptable.

"Oh, I knew you wouldn't want to," she said, mistaking his panicked question for eagerness.

"No! I want to! I have to!"

She gave him a strange look. "But sweetie, you really should-"

"I cant let my schooling slip behind," Cell said. Was that a reasonable enough excuse to go to school? He didn't want her confining him to the house. Ugh, to be at the mercy of a such a pitiful woman. Dr. Gero was surely rolling over in his grave.

"Are you sure, Aiden dear? I know the school will understand. You took quite a nasty hit to the head."

"Yes, I'm positive I want to go to school."

She gave him another worried glance. "Well.. if you're positive.."

He sighed. "Yes, I'm quite positive."

Giving a dejected sigh, the woman faced the front again.

~*~

His new home was acceptable at least. It wasn't very big, but it seemed alright by human standards. It was a simple one story with blue shingles and a porch that hosted some potted plants. Inside, Wendy led him to the kitchen and tried to feed him some dish that she called his favorite. Did he remember it, she had asked with eager eyes. He decided to try it and almost spit it out. Ugh, what was this? Oatmeal, she had called it? It was lumpy and way too sweet. Disgusting.

After dismissing the food he asked to be directed to his room. He wasn't very hungry and would rather rest. Truthfully, he wanted to get away from her before she tried to feed him something else or hug him. She frowned but reluctantly showed him where he was sleeping.

When he was finally alone he began inspecting the room. It was rather spacious and very decorated in what looked to be hand drawn pictures and paintings. There was a mirror as well, but every last inch had been covered in photographs. Sunsets, boulevards, mountains, people, animals. Some were in color, others were black and white. He stared, inspecting each picture one by one. His gaze stopped. Was that… him!?

He picked the photo up. It was far away but was zoomed in on him. It must have been in the ten days before the Cell Games because he was standing in his ring, arms crossed, head bowed. Why hadn't he detected his presence? Odd.. he shrugged and released the photo. It was interesting, but irrelevant to the larger scheme of things.

"Dad, I just don't understand. Does he really not remember anything?" Wendy’s voice. She wasn't speaking very loudly, but his sensitive hearing allowed him to pick up her words.

"He'll remember in time sweetheart. We just need to be patient. Keep showing him reminders. That's what the doctor said. The memories are there, they just need to be coaxed out."

"Maybe I should go in there and-" Cell tensed.

"No no sweetie. Just let him be, alright?"

The bio-android let out a sigh of relief. Kami, what was wrong with him? He was the model of perfection- a warrior with the brain to match his muscles- and he was tensing up over a silly human woman who hugged him. He wanted to let his rage out but knew it would attract their attention. And besides that, this body might just crumple at the slightest display of power. He snorted and sat on the bed. Might as well try and sleep, he supposed. He had managed to do so at the hospital and if he could on that lumpy bed then he could in this much more comfortable one surely. Curse this weak human body!
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Keep writing i'm liking it
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Loving it. Where have been all this time?
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It's amazing, I can't wait to see what happens next, just keep them coming. ^_^
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Huzzah Chapter 3. Tell me if you think I'm keeping Cell in character or not : )

Chapter 3: First Day

Cell was still getting used to this whole sleeping thing. His old, perfect, body had never needed sleep. Oh, he had rested, of course, but it was a meditative state that left him aware. Sleeping required all of his senses to stop functioning. The thought of being in such a vulnerable position unnerved him, but if he didn't rest then he knew this body would not function and thus he would not be able to complete his mission.

Even though he could logically tell himself to fall asleep, his body simply refused.

He got up in the middle of the night at the request of his stomach. He peeked over the wall before carefully stepping out, bare feet turning cold from the tile. He would hate to run into the woman at this time of night. He made his way to the refrigerator and opened it, the artificial light flooding the small kitchen and momentarily blinding him. He blinked, his eyes adjusting, and then studied the contents for a few minutes. Not knowing what was good he simply grabbed a plastic container and opened it. It smelled alright but it was kind of cold, though he was too hungry to care. He grabbed a fork and began eating. He had no idea what it was, some kind of noodle with a red paste, but it tasted alright.

Once back in his room he found it a little easier to rest now that the stomach wasn't harping at him. He felt that he had just fallen asleep when he realized he was being gently shaken awake.

"Aiden, sweetheart," a soft voice said, "it's time to go."

Cell struggled against his eyelids as he tried to open his eyes. Kami, would this body not just do what he told it to? He sat up, rubbing at his eyes and stretching his limbs. Wendy was moving around the room and turned to him as he looked up.

"Orange Star High is not too far from here, but it'll be quite a walk. So you should get going soon." She had her hand laid on top of a neatly folded set of clothes. "Unless, of course, you've changed your mind and you'd rath-"

He stood and grabbed the clothes in a swift motion. "I'll be getting dressed now." He turned and began peeling off his shirt. He heard her sigh and then leave the room.

~*~

Wendy was right about the walk. She had given him the directions and by the time he approached the school doors he was huffing and clutching at his thin chest, his ribs heaving beneath his frail fingers. This pathetic excuse of a body was going to be the death of him. He moved to open the door but.. nothing. It wouldn't budge. His eye twitched. This was the last straw.

"You gotta pull," a voice said.

He turned, startled. "W-what?" There was a girl with long, curly brown hair smiling at him.

"Pull," she said again, making the motion with her hand.

"Ah, right." That would make sense. He turned back to the door and it easily pulled open. He stepped to the side and allowed her to pass.

"Thanks," she said. She suddenly stopped. "Wow, you look bad. Are you alright?" He gave a sigh and moved past her down the hallway. "Hey, c'mon," she said, catching up to him. "You seriously look like you need to go to the nurse."

"I do not need assistance."

She huffed. "Fine, I hope you keel over." She stormed away, hair snapping angrily.

He rolled his eyes. Humans were so bothersome.

Cell suddenly realized something, though. He did need assistance. Where was he suppose to go? He looked around and saw a sign with 'main office' across it. He walked over and opened the door. It was rather quiet inside. Behind the desk was a young human woman with short blonde hair. He approached the desk and laid his hand on it.

"Excuse me, miss, I'm new to the school."

She looked up from the computer and studied him for a moment. "And your name?"

"Aiden."

"Last name?"

Last name.. ahh.. hadn't the doctor mentioned it? What was it again? "Destan," he finally said.

She turned to the computer, fingers flying across the keyboard, and the machine next to it printed something out. She snatched the paper and showed it to him, her painted pink nails pointing at the information.

"This is your class schedule. Here," her finger moved across the paper. "is your locker number and combination. Turn it the right for the first number, to the left for the second and then back to the right for the last." She laid the paper down. "If you wish to change your schedule you can make an appointment with your counselor." She looked up as she tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. "Any questions?"

Cell picked the piece of paper up and studied it. Art, english, history, study hall, lunch, science and physical education. He didn't know if this was a normal schedule or not, but he supposed so. He wondered how many of the classes he had with Gohan. He looked back up.

"Thank you, miss. I'll be on my way." He turned and left the office, intently studying the paper on his way out. He suddenly got knocked backward and barely balanced himself just in time.

"Oh man, I'm sorry. Totally wasn't looking."

"Well, obviously," Cell said, dusting his clothes down. He looked up at the guy. He was rather big, at least twice the width of Cell's current body. His black hair was spiked back and he would have a rather tough guy looking image if it wasn't for his eyes, which were small and had a kind look about them.

"Are you okay," the guy asked, ignoring Cell's tart comment.

"Yes, I'm fine." Although his shoulder was throbbing quite painfully. He sighed through his nose and his fist tightened around the schedule, crumpling it slightly.

"Lost," the boy asked, mistaking his frustration at his human body. He grabbed the schedule and examined it. "Ah, I know where that class is. C'mon, I'll show you." Cell looked at him incredulously. What was this human thinking? Augh, oh well, might as well allow it. He didn't know where the class was anyway. He grudgingly followed him.

"So, are you new here," the boy asked as Cell caught up.

"Yes."

"Well, we should hang out sometime."

Cell glanced at the boy. As if he would hang out with any human, much less one as lazy looking as him.
"No, that's quite alright, I don't-"

"No need to be like that. If you're new here you don't have any friends yet. So, let's be friends." The boy stopped in front of a door and gestured to it. "This is your class. I'm Bodo, by the way. What's your name?"

Were all humans so nosy? "Aiden."

"Cool. I'll see you later, Aiden." Bodo handed Cell his schedule back, gave him a wave and then turned to leave. Cell let out another sigh and then opened the door.

The room inside was normal enough. There were large desks, cabinets lining the walls, paints and colors laid out, clean sheets of paper on each desk. A few other students were already here but he paid no attention to them as he took a seat at the back of the class. He still had to work out the details of plan against Gohan. First, though, he had to actually meet Gohan. He doubted the little saiyan would be in a class such as this so he paid no attention as other students began filing in.

"Hey, you're that guy from this morning." He looked up at the voice. It was that girl again. "I didn't know you liked art." She sat down next to him, resting her book bag on the desk. "Are you feeling better?"

"I thought you wanted me to keel over," Cell asked, leaning back in his chair and crossing his arms.

"Who says I still don’t want you to?" She stuck her tongue at him.

"Why would you sit next to someone you want to die?"

She stared at him for a moment and then started to giggle. "You're so cute when you're serious."

Cell almost toppled out of his chair. Cute!? He was getting hugs and being called cute now?? Oh how he longed for the days when the little humans would run away in hysterical screams as he sucked the life out of their puny human bodies. This was degrading.

"Oh lighten up," she said. "You look like I've offended you or something." She placed her finger on her chin. "Although I suppose most guys don't like being called cute."

His eye twitched. Most guys, he thought with a scoff. The perfect being does not like being called cute. What was more infuriating was that he could not simply blast the girl into oblivion. He sighed and rubbed his temples. The strain was getting to him if he was already cracking. He was the perfect being! He should be able to handle this silly little human woman and anyone else who came his way.

"Hey, seriously, you okay?" He looked up. There was a surprising amount of concern in her brown eyes. She was leaning rather close too. He scooted away and turned his head.

"Yes, of course I'm fine."

She left it at that and the rest of the class time proceeded quietly.

The rest of his class periods proceeded smoothly too, until he got to history class.
It was a rather large classroom but the first person he spotted was Gohan sitting in the middle of the class, notebook and pencil out. Cell stood in the doorway, eyes fixated on Gohan. This was it, the moment he had been waiting for.
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That was....fantastic. I love how he reminiscent on he's past life.
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Everyone needs a second chance, Vegeta got one after all.
Okay, since I changed my name avatar and entire DBZF image, a lot of you don't know who i am. Well use your noggin. Who Loves Vegeta? Who thinks Cell and James Bond are hot but Vegeta is her main man? Who has a life sized cardboard cutout of Vegeta? Still don't know?
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