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Dragon Ball Z: Saiyan Unknown
Topic Started: Nov 12 2010, 11:18 PM (885 Views)
Sire
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Prologue:

The space pod shot through the darkness of space like a cannonball. It was tattered, scratched, and its white color was fading. The small space pod was only big enough for one person to ride in, but was an extremely advanced piece of technology. They had become a very useful space pod in Frieza's World Trade Organization.

"It should take at least another hour to land at my destination. I should stop at that nearby planet to pick up supplies, and have a little fun."

Within a few minutes, the space pod smashed into the Planet Fertok, sending millions of small rock into the air and leaving a giant crater. Them man emerged from the space pod seemingly unharmed. Smog filled air covered his surroundings, and all living things nearby cowered beneath the ground, hoping to even get a small breath of clean air.

"What a filthy planet to have landed on. I can sense the weaklings nearby. How could they live with themselves?"

He walked the barren ground until he made it to a city. Spectacular lights shone from it, and the city was abuzz with music and cheerfulness. The people were green and insect-like, but cheerful and welcoming nonetheless.

The man picked food, water, and a few spare parts for his space pod before leaving the city. He wanted to get to the planet early to find the strongest warriors that inhabited it. Making it to the space pod, he packed his food and water and fixed the few things on his pod. Then, the pod shot off at lightning speed, leaving behind the crater.

"Goodbye, Fertoks."

The planet erupted in a explosion of mass destruction. Thick gas and smoke covered the area that cold be seen for miles. When the smoke cleared, not a trace of the smog-filled Planet Fertok was there.

The Saiyan flew off his space pod, laughing.


Feedback, comments? I would love to hear input.

Edited by Sire, Nov 12 2010, 11:19 PM.
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They've become part of Buu! They can't even die! I just thought the least we could do is put our old differences aside, just this once, and really work together. We owe that to our teammates, our families, Vegeta. Our friends! Look, you've always talked about our Saiyan race, how we're the last of the mighty people. Well, it's time we accept we're starting a new race; one that can be just as strong, just as proud. But not if we're caught up in so much of our old birthrights to see what we have right in front of us! We've lost our old race, Vegeta! Let's not lose this one, too!
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a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but not bad. keep it coming
list of canon sources:

the DB manga, and the Dr. Slump manga as it applies to the crossover during the rra saga.

list of non canon sources:

everything else, regardless of origin, format, or quality.

for those that blindly follow word of god
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lunar2
Nov 13 2010, 02:19 AM
a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but not bad. keep it coming
Thanks for the feedback. I type pretty fast so I sometimes misspell things by accident. :lol:
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They've become part of Buu! They can't even die! I just thought the least we could do is put our old differences aside, just this once, and really work together. We owe that to our teammates, our families, Vegeta. Our friends! Look, you've always talked about our Saiyan race, how we're the last of the mighty people. Well, it's time we accept we're starting a new race; one that can be just as strong, just as proud. But not if we're caught up in so much of our old birthrights to see what we have right in front of us! We've lost our old race, Vegeta! Let's not lose this one, too!
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I loved it, please make some more! And is the Saiyan an entirely new character or somebody we saw already? If It's somebody we saw already is it Turles?
The blonde girl with the black lips turned to Valkyrie.
"We know," she said. "We've seen the future. We know you're going to kill the world..."

Release it Gohan! Release everything! Remember all the pain he's caused... The people he's hurt... NOW MAKE THAT YOUR POWER!!!!

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