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Song Title Poem
Topic Started: Aug 3 2010, 02:25 AM (1,719 Views)
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Flashy Thing!

So i got bored while listening to my music then some how i started to make a poem with the title of songs on my computer and ended up with this:

First draft (unedited):
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Looking more like a poem:
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Artist/band names in order that they appear in the poem:
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Edited by Green, Aug 3 2010, 02:32 AM.
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* Sousen Ichimonji
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This is actually a really interesting way to craft a poem. Would you mind if I and maybe others gave it a go?

Nice lil' poem, btw. :)
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That's really good green. Well written, which is harder when you're trying to incorporate certain words. You should do some more.
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Thanks for the comments.
Yea go ahead and try it, i thought it was something new and fun to do maybe you'll like it too.
It was kinda difficult to make this, i tried to make it longer but i was stumped then gave up.
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I think I shall try it! I may put my ipod on shuffle and do the first 10 song titles that come up to make it even harder :P
Edited by Mitas, Aug 3 2010, 04:19 PM.
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold

In future, don't highlight the names of the songs, or like put the names in a spoiler tab: I'd like to try and guess what song name have been used. :P
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not rhyming but a true poem out of hearth
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