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Hi guys! Can you help me.....; My video
Topic Started: Aug 3 2010, 01:10 AM (285 Views)
Redzombie22
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By looking at this video?
I really really worked hard on this video. And it would be so cool if you guys liked it or even subscribed to me! Ill be making more great videos if you guys really help me. Tell me what i need to improve on. Thank you so much. I will be very active on these forums!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--0YL2RRq0Q

Rate it bad or good!
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Tell me what i need to improve on!
Subscribe if you like it and please tell other people!


Thank you very much! :w00t:
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Bouncefox
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"What's this? More wolves hungry for the blood of Almire?"

Yo!

I'm Bounceofx, the Catchphrase Thief. If you have a catchphrase, I want it. And I will get it somehow.

Just finished watching the whole video. It seems more like three AMVs, as opposed to one. That, or that was a really long song. It was interesting to say the least, but I think it should've stopped at that SS4 Goku part. I found myself getting bored six minutes into the video. I'm not really used to seven-minute AMVs, 'cause the ones I've found are usually two to three minutes.

I see you started to try lip syncing, but it kinda fell apart really quickly. My suggestion would be to try and improve that. It kinda seems like a minor detail now that I think about it, but, I think it's something people should know how to do.

As for the other parts, I found them not as exciting as the first three minutes (hence why I'm think you should just stick with that part and scrap the others). It didn't really flow with the music, and it just seemed miscellaneous.

That's all I can really say about that. Overall, it was a nice AMV, despite the flaws I pointed out. Maybe some effects would give a little flavor; but hide them a little. Obvious effects are fail. (I think you used one or two, though.)

That being said, I hope you stick around, have fun, and post lots. Why post? 'Cause posting is fun!
Try this, you might like it.

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