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It was late and Gohan should have been asleep hours ago. Instead he was staring out of his window at the cloudless sky. It was strange, he thought, as there were always clouds in the sky. Then he realised; somebody had kidnapped the clouds!
He ran out into the corridor shouting for his Dad. He decided against bursting into his parents room, remembering the unfortunate event that he'd rather not repeat. Goku came out and saw the distress on his son's face. "What is it Gohan?" he asked.
"It's...the clouds. They've been stolen" answered Gohan.
Goku stood speechless for a while, horror etched into every inch of his face, quickly turning into anger. "Who would do such a thing!? It can't be Frieza again! Sure he's a maniac, but this is beyond even him. We'll go and see Kami and Piccolo, they're sure to know what's going on. We'll pick Vegeta up on the way."

They arrived shortly at Vegeta's place and knocked on the door. A few seconds later Vegeta's head appeared from a window above them. "Kakarot! What's the meaning of this?" he said, clearly not happy to see the two of them, regardless of the time.
"I'm sorry to wake you Vegeta, but something terrible has happened. It's the clouds, they've been stolen" said Goku.
"The clouds have been stolen. You wake me up at 3am to tell me this! You're more of a moron than I thought Kakarot" said Vegeta, not hiding his annoyance.
"Come on Vegeta, you must know how serious this is. Without clouds, we can no longer stare up at the sky, picking out images of all sorts. We're going to see Kami and Piccolo to see if they know what's happened. Are you coming?" asked Goku.
"Ok Kakarot, I'll entertain this stupid theory you have concocted. You go ahead, I'll catch you up" he explained.
Goku nodded and he and Gohan flew off in the direction of Kami's place. Vegeta turned to a mirror, a tear visible on his cheek. He wiped it away with his hand. "Pull yourself together Vegeta, you are a Saiyan Prince! You have no need for clouds. But, they are fluffy and like sky candy floss. They can be bunnies or trains or dragons. No! You can not let anybody know of your love for clouds" he said to himself.
He put on his clothes and headed after Kakarot and Gohan.

Kami and Piccolo were already out on the plateau waiting for the Saiyans to arrive. "We were wondering when you'd get here. I'm sure you know the magnitude of what has happened" said Kami as Goku and Gohan landed in front of them.
"Of course, but what can we do? We dont even know who's behind this" stated Goku.
Vegeta arrived behind them. "Vegeta? What are you doing here?I wouldn't think kidnapped clouds would be a problem for you" said Kami.
"It isn't! Kakarot insisted I tag along. I don't care about clouds, or their cotton wool appearance. I dont wish to live in a kingdom of clouds where I am the King. And I don't desire a throne made of clouds, or cloud jesters and a cloud banquet. Or a cloud......"
Everyone was staring at Vegeta, confused. "Is there something you want to tell us?" asked Piccolo.
Vegeta stared blankly. Yes, I want to shout to the world, run through the hills and be dive naked into a river of clouds. "No, there isn't. Now let's get back to this kidnapper" said Vegeta, sweat apearing on his forehead.
"Well isn't it obvious. Who has always hated clouds? Detested their very existence?" explained Kami.
"IT IS I!!!" came a voice from behind them.
They all turned and saw that the cloud kidnapper was none other than Krillin. He held over his shoulder two sacks with scribbled out dollar signs, sad face clouds drawn beside them. There were whisps of cloud appearing from his pockets. "You have always underestimated me. 'Oh look at Krillin, he's so funny, he's so small and has no hair nor nose, just a silly human.' Well that was my plan all along. For too long have clouds been the bane of my life, the yang to my ying. But not now. I shall have the final laugh in this game of cat and mouse!" shouted Krillin as he laughed manically.
Vegeta roared, his hair turning golden. He raced at Krillin, pummeling him and launching him back to the plateau. He swooped down, grabbing the sacks. "The clouds are mine. We share a special connection, something nobody can understand. I shall take them and I shall form my beloved cloud kingdom and I shall laugh and smile all day at my cloud jesters. I shall be King of the Clouds!" he screamed, and with that he flew off at top speed.
Krillin lay unconscious. Goku was dumbfounded. Gohan shocked. Kami conveying the situation. But there was one previously amongst them that was nowhere to be seen. Someone who shared that same bond Vegeta described so beautifully. That osomeone was Piccolo who was now following Vegeta. The embodyment of determination, he drew all his strength to catch up with the one obstacle between him and his clouds. "I shall have the clouds, and they will be mine!" he shouted, fists clenched as he burst into top speed, following the thin whisp of cloud to his goal.
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