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| Pookie | Feb 9 2010, 01:30 AM Post #1 |
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Please read rules first before entering. Words: Love, Saiyan, Kidnapped, Goku, Kingdom, Clouds Size: No less than 100 words Rules: No pre made stories Due: Monday, February 22nd Post your entries in this topic. GL to all entrants! The chosen author of a story will be able to choose the words for next story making. Edited by Pookie, Feb 9 2010, 01:31 AM.
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| * Mitas | Feb 9 2010, 10:09 AM Post #2 |
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It truly was a Shawshank redemption
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What is the word limit for this? |
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"Then you've got the chance to do better next time." "Next time?" "Course. Doing better next time. That's what life is." | |
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| Pookie | Feb 9 2010, 07:07 PM Post #3 |
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It says it in the rules. There is no word limit. As long as it's not less than 100 words, then you're fine. |
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| GarlicJr | Feb 9 2010, 07:26 PM Post #4 |
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I'll be entering this. Did the rules just say we had to use the word once in the story? So the words don't actually have to do anything with the story itself really? I could just say 'Goku is a Saiya-jin who lives in a kingdom in the clouds, who loves to eat (provided we can make different tense of the words there) and once had his son kidnapped by a band of sexy Makyo-jins.' and then just use that to describe who Goku was, but the story never mentions him again? XD;; Also, heh, no/less profanity means Pepper won't be making an appearance in any of my stories, likely. He has such a dirty mouth! <3 *loves him* |
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| Pookie | Feb 9 2010, 07:46 PM Post #5 |
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You only have to use the words once in the story. You can use them as many times as you want though. For example, Goku was a saiyan in love with Chichi. He lived in a kingdom of clouds. The kingdom of clouds was a popular place until one day someone kidnapped Chichi." All the words were used, but they can be used more than once if needed. The way you word the story is completely up to you. When the words are put in the story, is completely up to you and your creativity.
Edited by Pookie, Feb 9 2010, 07:48 PM.
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| DSXIII | Feb 9 2010, 09:38 PM Post #6 |
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“YOU WHAT?!” Vegeta asked, the power in his voice nearly shaking the ground they were standing on. Goku itched his head stupidly, trying not to look Vegeta in the eye. He had thought about it before, but kept convincing himself that Vegeta would find it in his heart to let it happen. “..but Vegeta! I love him!” shouted Goku, trying to get Vegeta to see his point of view. Vegeta’s fists were clenched, the vein in his forehead pulsed as he gave Goku a violent stare. He could no longer hold his temper as his image faded from the speed of his movement, appearing in front of Goku with his knee rising upwards and striking the stupid Saiyan in the stomach, sending him down to his knees. “You are a SAIYAN Kakarot! What the hell is the matter with you?! We are a proud, powerful race! Quit this nonsense you are NOT gay!” shouted the Saiyan Prince. Feeling disgusted, Vegeta walked away from Goku, leaving him on the ground where he had fallen. Goku’s eyes began to water as he cried on the ground like an infant. He was the complete opposite of his Saiyan ancestors who had ruled entire kingdoms in their time. “He just doesn’t understand..” Goku muttered, his eyes looking up at the clouds. “Hercule has kidnapped my heart!” With those words, the Saiyan Goku curled up into a ball and wept himself to sleep. Edited by DSXIII, Feb 9 2010, 09:46 PM.
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| GarlicJr | Feb 9 2010, 09:47 PM Post #7 |
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I just fell out of my chair from laughing so hard. XD Awesome little story short. Has some action in there, too. Poor Goku. :P My story is going to seem like a novel compared to some of the entries here I guess. >_>; *is long winded with her fanfictions* |
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| DSXIII | Feb 9 2010, 09:52 PM Post #8 |
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lol glad you liked it I'm sure others will put a little more time and length to their stories.. I tend to take the fast route >_> |
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| GarlicJr | Feb 9 2010, 10:23 PM Post #9 |
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What about chapter fics? How would we post those? Are chapter fics even allowed? |
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| * Mitas | Feb 9 2010, 10:27 PM Post #10 |
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That was brilliant Hustla :P I'll probably enter something, try and get it done in the next few days. It was late and Gohan should have been asleep hours ago. Instead he was staring out of his window at the cloudless sky. It was strange, he thought, as there were always clouds in the sky. Then he realised; somebody had kidnapped the clouds! He ran out into the corridor shouting for his Dad. He decided against bursting into his parents room, remembering the unfortunate event that he'd rather not repeat. Goku came out and saw the distress on his son's face. "What is it Gohan?" he asked. "It's...the clouds. They've been stolen" answered Gohan. Goku stood speechless for a while, horror etched into every inch of his face, quickly turning into anger. "Who would do such a thing!? It can't be Frieza again! Sure he's a maniac, but this is beyond even him. We'll go and see Kami and Piccolo, they're sure to know what's going on. We'll pick Vegeta up on the way." They arrived shortly at Vegeta's place and knocked on the door. A few seconds later Vegeta's head appeared from a window above them. "Kakarot! What's the meaning of this?" he said, clearly not happy to see the two of them, regardless of the time. "I'm sorry to wake you Vegeta, but something terrible has happened. It's the clouds, they've been stolen" said Goku. "The clouds have been stolen. You wake me up at 3am to tell me this! You're more of a moron than I thought Kakarot" said Vegeta, not hiding his annoyance. "Come on Vegeta, you must know how serious this is. Without clouds, we can no longer stare up at the sky, picking out images of all sorts. We're going to see Kami and Piccolo to see if they know what's happened. Are you coming?" asked Goku. "Ok Kakarot, I'll entertain this stupid theory you have concocted. You go ahead, I'll catch you up" he explained. Goku nodded and he and Gohan flew off in the direction of Kami's place. Vegeta turned to a mirror, a tear visible on his cheek. He wiped it away with his hand. "Pull yourself together Vegeta, you are a Saiyan Prince! You have no need for clouds. But, they are fluffy and like sky candy floss. They can be bunnies or trains or dragons. No! You can not let anybody know of your love for clouds" he said to himself. He put on his clothes and headed after Kakarot and Gohan. Kami and Piccolo were already out on the plateau waiting for the Saiyans to arrive. "We were wondering when you'd get here. I'm sure you know the magnitude of what has happened" said Kami as Goku and Gohan landed in front of them. "Of course, but what can we do? We dont even know who's behind this" stated Goku. Vegeta arrived behind them. "Vegeta? What are you doing here?I wouldn't think kidnapped clouds would be a problem for you" said Kami. "It isn't! Kakarot insisted I tag along. I don't care about clouds, or their cotton wool appearance. I dont wish to live in a kingdom of clouds where I am the King. And I don't desire a throne made of clouds, or cloud jesters and a cloud banquet. Or a cloud......" Everyone was staring at Vegeta, confused. "Is there something you want to tell us?" asked Piccolo. Vegeta stared blankly. Yes, I want to shout to the world, run through the hills and be dive naked into a river of clouds. "No, there isn't. Now let's get back to this kidnapper" said Vegeta, sweat apearing on his forehead. "Well isn't it obvious. Who has always hated clouds? Detested their very existence?" explained Kami. "IT IS I!!!" came a voice from behind them. They all turned and saw that the cloud kidnapper was none other than Krillin. He held over his shoulder two sacks with scribbled out dollar signs, sad face clouds drawn beside them. There were whisps of cloud appearing from his pockets. "You have always underestimated me. 'Oh look at Krillin, he's so funny, he's so small and has no hair nor nose, just a silly human.' Well that was my plan all along. For too long have clouds been the bane of my life, the yang to my ying. But not now. I shall have the final laugh in this game of cat and mouse!" shouted Krillin as he laughed manically. Vegeta roared, his hair turning golden. He raced at Krillin, pummeling him and launching him back to the plateau. He swooped down, grabbing the sacks. "The clouds are mine. We share a special connection, something nobody can understand. I shall take them and I shall form my beloved cloud kingdom and I shall laugh and smile all day at my cloud jesters. I shall be King of the Clouds!" he screamed, and with that he flew off at top speed. Krillin lay unconscious. Goku was dumbfounded. Gohan shocked. Kami conveying the situation. But there was one previously amongst them that was nowhere to be seen. Someone who shared that same bond Vegeta described so beautifully. That osomeone was Piccolo who was now following Vegeta. The embodyment of determination, he drew all his strength to catch up with the one obstacle between him and his clouds. "I shall have the clouds, and they will be mine!" he shouted, fists clenched as he burst into top speed, following the thin whisp of cloud to his goal. Edited by Mitas, Feb 9 2010, 11:26 PM.
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| Pookie | Feb 10 2010, 12:34 AM Post #11 |
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Chapter fics are allowed. You just have to post all the chapters before the deadline. It can be as long as you like it just has to be done before the deadline. Very well done guys. I enjoyed the stories. I'll be making a story soon too. Edited by Pookie, Feb 10 2010, 12:35 AM.
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| GarlicJr | Feb 10 2010, 05:31 AM Post #12 |
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*pops in Mitas' fic and steals the clouds* ~_^ Thanks for the info on chapters! Also, who will be the judge(s) of these fanfiction? I think the person who chooses the words should be, personally, since its their words we have to go by. Also, is this fanfiction section for all of these contest fics only of sorts, or can all fanfiction be posted here (DB/Z/GT related of course)? Because it seems weird to split the sections up like that. Also, I know this is going to sound absurd maybe, but it would really be better to post the contest fics as their own thread, so they can get comments on them personally, and then link the fics to this thread, which should be pinned each time a contest is up. Just saying. Its rather odd doing it any other way, and very very messy. |
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| Invisobill | Feb 11 2010, 08:03 PM Post #13 |
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Has Edward tied for her convience <3
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Dangit! I'm tied between Danny's fic and Mitas...xDD on the LOL scale I mean....xDD *breathes deep* phew.... You guys provide quite a lot of competition. I dunno how the hell I can stand up against those two xD! I could try though, my only question is if this is strictly canon or not. >____> I think Ana knows of my habits of ocs. I would explain myself, but I think Ana knows where that would end up too. *thinks back to the random memories*....heard of Saiyan babies... Okay anyway >___> Good luck to everyone else! |
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| GarlicJr | Feb 11 2010, 08:09 PM Post #14 |
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Well hopefully we can use OCs, because if not, I'm going to have to really start all over from scratch! |
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| Pookie | Feb 11 2010, 08:18 PM Post #15 |
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I think that is a good idea. For the next one, I'll have people make new topics with their fanfic. Then they will post it in the competition topic. Also, I think I'm going to have an anonymous judge so it's not bias. Edited by Pookie, Feb 11 2010, 08:25 PM.
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