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| * -Zero- | Jan 11 2010, 06:45 PM Post #1 |
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You may only vote for one, post who you voted for also to make sure everything is calculated right. Alive Soaring high, a monarch of the sky, Looking down on the powers of the world Who are but mere dots, With features so bold. Each blade of grass, different to the other, A family of mice, protected by Mother. Swooping with speed, power and precision A meal fit for a king. Flying fast, time by your side, Wind in your face. But there's no rush, you aren't part of the race. Can you imagine, a Life without scars, no limitations, Touching the stars, filled with elation? No walls, no ceiling, Imagine The feeling, Incomparable freedom. RAWR RAAAWR goes the lion, to scare off his enemy He peed on the grass, to mark his territory Lady Gaga stole his mane, and wore it at the VMA Although sad from this tragedy, he lived another day Now naked on the neck, he was no longer the king But it's okay because at least he has his dingaling Los Lobos De La Muerte Keep their looks Underline fake purposes Of making peace with guns Los Lobos de la Muerte are the ones Stick together, a single mind thoughts the same, a simple kind United they stand, together they fall Los Lobos de la Muerte to conquer all Ask no questions, they'll tell no lies hide behind their identical eyes Once unique, their steps now the same Los Lobos de la Muerte, the world to claim They'll take your heart, then take your soul They'll leave you broken, beaten and cold Because you're different, and speaking out Los Lobos de la Muerte will stamp you out Keep their looks Underline fake purposes Of making peace with guns Los Lobos De La Muerte will be the ones |
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| Pookie | Jan 11 2010, 06:52 PM Post #2 |
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All the poems were nice to read. They were very well written. My vote goes to "Rawr" because it was funny and lighten the mood. I like poems that rhyme too. I felt the other two were a little serious for my taste. |
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| + Rebel X | Jan 11 2010, 08:22 PM Post #3 |
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Wow, Wow, Wow These are amazing guys. Nice, great, Fantastic Job all of you! I liked Alive because the sense of command, freedom and confidence it had. I liked the descriptions and details. You lost me a bit on the message if their was one but it was just Great Perspective of the Animal. That's what I really thought stood out so Nice Job. Rawr was pretty great, made it humorous and simple. Yet you thought outside the standard box of just the animal world. Within itself whether you realize it or not this poem had a life cycle of meanings. It showed power and strength in the beginning quickly turning to shame and maybe even sadness but in the end a bright side kept the world spinning. Great job. Los Lobos De La Muerte. This poem was pretty awesome. Liked the rhyme scheme. I originally didn't know what animal you were depicting. I thought it was the running of the bulls or something but regardless you made the animal really stand out and show it's emotions from the inside out. Later on I figured out it was wolves and man what a way to describe the pack. Fantastic work. I couldn't decide for a while but my vote will go to Los Lobos De La Muerte this time. |
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| Meowth | Jan 11 2010, 09:22 PM Post #4 |
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I voted for Alive, simply because it seemed to flow better for me, the last one had words I couldn't read, RAWR was a little too short, although Alive had it's own problems, like a wonder a to end a line. |
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| + Green | Jan 11 2010, 09:53 PM Post #5 |
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Flashy Thing!
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i vote for Los Lobos De La Muerte. Whoever wrote that one knows something about poetry. Rawr was funny
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| * Sousen Ichimonji | Jan 11 2010, 10:10 PM Post #6 |
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold
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I vote for Alive, because as enjoyable as RAWR was, I felt Alive had a positive note to it too, and it was very well worded. Kudos to all the writers though, you all did well.
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| Tim | Jan 11 2010, 10:20 PM Post #7 |
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I thought they were all good All different styles but my vote went to Rawr as it had a nice humorous touch which suits how I feel now ![]() Though well done to everyone!! Fantastic jobs all round!! We have some very talented people on this site!! ~Tim |
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| * -Zero- | Jan 11 2010, 10:44 PM Post #8 |
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someone did not post what he or she voted for which was for los lobos |
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| * Mitas | Jan 11 2010, 10:54 PM Post #9 |
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It truly was a Shawshank redemption
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Yeah it would be best if people post what they voted for and why. However both me and Mike voted for none. |
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| DSXIII | Jan 11 2010, 11:05 PM Post #10 |
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I voted none also. |
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| * -Zero- | Jan 11 2010, 11:07 PM Post #11 |
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I voted for none as well |
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Jan 12 2010, 01:07 AM Post #12 |
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Rawr was funny, but I'm going to vote for Alive. I think it was really nice to read and flowed well. |
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| Android_18 | Jan 12 2010, 02:02 AM Post #13 |
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I liked "Los Lobos de la Muerte" so I vote for this one. I liked all of the poems though. It was a hard choice :P |
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Jan 12 2010, 03:57 AM Post #14 |
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I can relate the most with Los Lobos de la Muerte. |
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| Strawberry | Jan 12 2010, 04:30 AM Post #15 |
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ahaha omg RAWR was so funny. I had to read it again when I finished reading all of the 3 poems. ![]() You all did an amazing job. I loved each poem, but I'm voting for the first one. It has a peaceful vibe to it that I truly enjoy, and it gives me an amazing sense of serenity. Great job, guys! |
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All different styles but my vote went to Rawr as it had a nice humorous touch which suits how I feel now 

















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