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Topic Started: Dec 28 2009, 03:35 AM (352 Views)
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I can
You could have been

But my friend
You have sinned

Pure hatred
Is all I am

I hate all
Because I can

Never listen
Be a rebel

Just follow me
I am The Devil

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* Sousen Ichimonji
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold

I love this poem. I'm not any good at analysing or giving constructive feedback when it comes to lyrics or poems, so I'm just going to leave it at that lol.
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Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not
I'm glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes, you can forget

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You -love- it? Jeez, I'm flattered. Thanks a lot, that made my day.
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold

Yeah, don't think I was exaggerating, just the poem really resonated with me because it mirrors a character I've been creating in a piece of fiction over the last few days, but that's besides the point. So yeah, a happy coincidence lol.
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Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not
I'm glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes, you can forget

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Nice poem Brian. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it when you were writing. What inspired you to write this poem?
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The same thing that always does, which is pure hatred and anger.

Thanks for the compliment. I can't write, I just express how I feel.
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