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Dec 28 2009, 03:35 AM Post #1 |
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I can You could have been But my friend You have sinned Pure hatred Is all I am I hate all Because I can Never listen Be a rebel Just follow me I am The Devil |
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| * Sousen Ichimonji | Dec 28 2009, 02:38 PM Post #2 |
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold
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I love this poem. I'm not any good at analysing or giving constructive feedback when it comes to lyrics or poems, so I'm just going to leave it at that lol. |
![]() Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not I'm glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes, you can forget | |
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Dec 29 2009, 06:57 AM Post #3 |
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You -love- it? Jeez, I'm flattered. Thanks a lot, that made my day. |
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| * Sousen Ichimonji | Dec 29 2009, 01:56 PM Post #4 |
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold
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Yeah, don't think I was exaggerating, just the poem really resonated with me because it mirrors a character I've been creating in a piece of fiction over the last few days, but that's besides the point. So yeah, a happy coincidence lol. |
![]() Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not I'm glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes, you can forget | |
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| Pookie | Dec 29 2009, 06:15 PM Post #5 |
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Pookie Powa!
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Nice poem Brian. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it when you were writing. What inspired you to write this poem? |
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Dec 30 2009, 06:23 AM Post #6 |
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The same thing that always does, which is pure hatred and anger. Thanks for the compliment. I can't write, I just express how I feel. |
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