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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 21 2009, 05:11 PM (358 Views) | |
| + Byakko | Dec 21 2009, 05:11 PM Post #1 |
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it
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Cold reality Retreat into your soul Stealing vitality Retreat into your soul When all is lost, the young soul rebels. Pain is lost like Tears in Rain I don't know how I don't know why All is forgotten like Tears in Rain We've all lost the game, the one that life plays, Sadness and Sorrow gone, Like Tears in Rain. |
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GFX Portfolio Tumblr DeviantArt ![]() Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'" | |
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| * Sousen Ichimonji | Dec 21 2009, 06:22 PM Post #2 |
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold
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Tears in Rain = Blade Runner = bad film I'm sorry, but association has made this poem baaaaaaaaad ![]() I joke, it's pretty good.
Edited by Sousen Ichimonji, Dec 21 2009, 06:22 PM.
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![]() Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not I'm glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes, you can forget | |
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| + Byakko | Dec 21 2009, 06:42 PM Post #3 |
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it
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It wasn't supposed to be a reference!
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GFX Portfolio Tumblr DeviantArt ![]() Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'" | |
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| Pookie | Dec 22 2009, 12:37 AM Post #4 |
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Pookie Powa!
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Awesome stuff man. I like your poems. They are always so deep and meaningful. |
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| Graffiti | Dec 22 2009, 01:21 PM Post #5 |
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MGD.
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Great job man *thumbs up*
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DBZF Original, 2005-present ![]() "When backed into a corner, you are the most fearsome fighter!" Piccolo [Portifolio | Str8 Outta Namek (DBZF's only Hip Hop Club) | MyAnimeList] | |
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Dec 23 2009, 03:52 AM Post #6 |
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Amazing. Like always. I felt it <3 |
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Dec 23 2009, 06:50 PM Post #7 |
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This is really good, Mike. My favorite poem of yours thus far. Now I think I'll read it a couple more times. I can really relate to this. Edited by Dark, Dec 23 2009, 06:50 PM.
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