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Tears In Rain
Topic Started: Dec 21 2009, 05:11 PM (358 Views)
+ Byakko
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

Cold reality
Retreat into your soul
Stealing vitality
Retreat into your soul

When all is lost,
the young soul rebels.
Pain is lost
like Tears in Rain

I don't know how
I don't know why
All is forgotten
like Tears in Rain

We've all lost the game,
the one that life plays,
Sadness and Sorrow gone,
Like Tears in Rain.

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Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'"
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* Sousen Ichimonji
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You are calm and reposed, let your beauty unfold

Tears in Rain = Blade Runner = bad film

I'm sorry, but association has made this poem baaaaaaaaad :(

I joke, it's pretty good. :)
Edited by Sousen Ichimonji, Dec 21 2009, 06:22 PM.
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Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not
I'm glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes, you can forget

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+ Byakko
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

It wasn't supposed to be a reference! :'(
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Awesome stuff man. I like your poems. They are always so deep and meaningful.
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Great job man :) *thumbs up*
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Frankie
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Amazing. Like always.

I felt it <3
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Dark
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This is really good, Mike. My favorite poem of yours thus far. Now I think I'll read it a couple more times.

I can really relate to this.
Edited by Dark, Dec 23 2009, 06:50 PM.
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