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The Dirty Wait
Topic Started: Nov 1 2009, 10:27 PM (298 Views)
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Despair, and I am waiting
Hell I am building, by debating

Refrain from using that word
No, it is too late

Amongst the mind and the sleep
The hell I create

The wait
The dirty wait

I wait today, and I will wait tomorrow
Because one day, there will be no sorrow
Edited by Dark, Nov 2 2009, 01:16 PM.
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+ Byakko
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

I think this is really good, it really shows how you've been feeling the past while. Don't stop writing :D
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Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'"
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There were a couple lines I left out. I put them back in.
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Thats a very amazing piece, good work.
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Chiaroscuro ♥

I like it. I like how you can feel the anger and the sadness without the poem being too obvious.

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Across The Universe
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Thank you all so much. I had no idea that the words I expressed here would mean anything at all to anybody.
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