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| The Dirty Wait | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 1 2009, 10:27 PM (298 Views) | |
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Nov 1 2009, 10:27 PM Post #1 |
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Despair, and I am waiting Hell I am building, by debating Refrain from using that word No, it is too late Amongst the mind and the sleep The hell I create The wait The dirty wait I wait today, and I will wait tomorrow Because one day, there will be no sorrow Edited by Dark, Nov 2 2009, 01:16 PM.
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| + Byakko | Nov 1 2009, 11:02 PM Post #2 |
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it
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I think this is really good, it really shows how you've been feeling the past while. Don't stop writing
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GFX Portfolio Tumblr DeviantArt ![]() Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'" | |
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Nov 2 2009, 01:16 PM Post #3 |
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There were a couple lines I left out. I put them back in. |
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Nov 8 2009, 12:45 AM Post #4 |
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Thats a very amazing piece, good work. |
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| Strawberry | Nov 8 2009, 02:31 AM Post #5 |
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Chiaroscuro ♥
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I like it. I like how you can feel the anger and the sadness without the poem being too obvious. |
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Nov 11 2009, 05:08 PM Post #6 |
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Thank you all so much. I had no idea that the words I expressed here would mean anything at all to anybody. |
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