The Dirty Wait

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The Dirty Wait
Topic Started: Nov 1 2009, 10:27 PM (74 Views)
*Brian*	Nov 1 2009, 10:27 PM Post #1
Homosexual Ogre Posts: 932 Group: Troll Member #4,185 Joined: May 9, 2009 What Browser do you use? Firefox	Despair, and I am waiting Hell I am building, by debating Refrain from using that word No, it is too late Amongst the mind and the sleep The hell I create The wait The dirty wait I wait today, and I will wait tomorrow Because one day, there will be no sorrow Edited by Brian, Nov 2 2009, 01:16 PM.
	"They wanna take your women." - Too inappropriate for DBZF


+ Byakko	Nov 1 2009, 11:02 PM Post #2
Operor Vel Non Operor Posts: 8,848 Group: Legend Member #158 Joined: February 7, 2005 Favourite Anime Naruto Shippuuden What Browser do you use? Opera 9.6 Favourite Manga Fullmetal Alchemist	I think this is really good, it really shows how you've been feeling the past while. Don't stop writing
	i don't get how a women can pour boiling hot wax onto their upper thigh, then rip the hair out by the root... and still be afraid of a spider.


*Brian*	Nov 2 2009, 01:16 PM Post #3
Homosexual Ogre Posts: 932 Group: Troll Member #4,185 Joined: May 9, 2009 What Browser do you use? Firefox	There were a couple lines I left out. I put them back in.
	"They wanna take your women." - Too inappropriate for DBZF


SS4	Nov 8 2009, 12:45 AM Post #4
Posts: 4,859 Group: Admin Adviser Member #593 Joined: August 8, 2005	Thats a very amazing piece, good work.
	The Forum, is back! Four Years after the original forum crashed, I revived it. I am looking for active staff and members to join, so please take a look! The Forum V 3! *"One’s best success comes after his greatest disappointments."* "Dreams are the eraser dust I blow off my page. They fade into the emptiness, another dark gray day. Dreams are only memories of the plans I had back then. Dreams are eraser dust and now I use a pen." - Edgar Allan Poe


Strawberry	Nov 8 2009, 02:31 AM Post #5
Chiaroscuro Posts: 7,809 Group: Rock Princess Member #1,750 Joined: September 24, 2006	I like it. I like how you can feel the anger and the sadness without the poem being too obvious.
	If you cry, you'll rust. {Wizard of Oz}


*Brian*	Nov 11 2009, 05:08 PM Post #6
Homosexual Ogre Posts: 932 Group: Troll Member #4,185 Joined: May 9, 2009 What Browser do you use? Firefox	Thank you all so much. I had no idea that the words I expressed here would mean anything at all to anybody.
	"They wanna take your women." - Too inappropriate for DBZF


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