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And Still I Awake
Topic Started: Sep 5 2009, 02:47 PM (281 Views)
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

The sky is calm, the stars are bright
And still I awake
Cold, hard, rasping breath - dreams full of plight
And still I awake
The comforting breath of another, warm against my cheek
And still I awake
Close my eyes, and whisper "Let me sleep"
But still I awake.

Horror dreams,
Of blood and gore
The room is spinning,
My abated breath
Sheets are tossed to the floor
Drenched in cold sweat,
Beads of death

(And still I awake)

Cool, safe, cloudless night
And still I awake
Fears materialised, terrors real
and still I awake
I wish for sleep, but it does not come
and still I awake
Pray for morning, pray for Sun
But still I awake.

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Yeah, not about me. I just had a good idea for a short story, and thought this'd be a good addition to it.
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Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'"
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Beautiful. Good work.
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That's gloomy and beautiful at the same time. Could work as lyrics for a ballad type of song. Very cool, I smell talent.
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Bow down
Surrender unto me
Submit infectiously
Sanctify your demons

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I can see it now. I'm going to be thinking about this on those long nights. Great piece of writing there, Mike.
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