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| And Still I Awake | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 5 2009, 02:47 PM (281 Views) | |
| + Byakko | Sep 5 2009, 02:47 PM Post #1 |
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it
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The sky is calm, the stars are bright And still I awake Cold, hard, rasping breath - dreams full of plight And still I awake The comforting breath of another, warm against my cheek And still I awake Close my eyes, and whisper "Let me sleep" But still I awake. Horror dreams, Of blood and gore The room is spinning, My abated breath Sheets are tossed to the floor Drenched in cold sweat, Beads of death (And still I awake) Cool, safe, cloudless night And still I awake Fears materialised, terrors real and still I awake I wish for sleep, but it does not come and still I awake Pray for morning, pray for Sun But still I awake. ---- Yeah, not about me. I just had a good idea for a short story, and thought this'd be a good addition to it. |
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GFX Portfolio Tumblr DeviantArt ![]() Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'" | |
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| Master Roshi | Sep 5 2009, 03:24 PM Post #2 |
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Beautiful. Good work. |
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| * .Revolution | Sep 5 2009, 04:17 PM Post #3 |
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.: Changing Everything :.
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That's gloomy and beautiful at the same time. Could work as lyrics for a ballad type of song. Very cool, I smell talent. |
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Sep 5 2009, 09:17 PM Post #4 |
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I can see it now. I'm going to be thinking about this on those long nights. Great piece of writing there, Mike. |
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