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| Vortex Warrior vs The Demon; DBZ influenced fight | |
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| BattleMetal | Sep 5 2009, 11:41 AM Post #1 |
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Alritey people. This is something i wrote when i was 16. I used to always write ideas like this when i young, my earlier influences came from my own imagination, then cartoons and films i saw growing up and later on manga i saw as a kid (Akira, DevilMan, Fist of the North Star and Guyver and others). This particualar story is mostly influenced by the style of combat and fighting we see in DBZ. There is a basic plot to it. I didnt have Chapter headings and things so i will post them up to break up the story more (i prefer shorter chapters myself) and will make slight changes as well (sentence structure and things) but it will be virtually the same. Cool PROLOGUE- The warrior i faced was called Boe-Dokk, a beast changer; master of Werebeasts of this Earth. His face carried the mark of one touched with the power of the beast-change. Eyes where almost pure red where the whites should have been, his iris surrounding his pupil was a sharp orange with slits instead of ovals for pupils. An animal of the wild. Four slash marks cut into his cheeks. Orange hair so dark and thick, glowing red, wildly jutting out in all directions like a lions mane, a silver streak flowing down the bottom of his back. The silver stripe showed his maturity and age. Nose curled up like a bat, several slits layering up his nose from the nostril, pulling on his top lip, making him appear to be sneering revealing sharp pointed teeth and long canines. Ears pointed and sticking up on either side of his head jutting forward of his thick mane. His upper torso was bare chested, displaying the Mark of the Beast. Thick tufts of animal fur covering his chest and along his muscled arms ending at the wrist of his hands. The thickest fur growing from his massive broad shoulders, long leathery hands with claws that seemed to grow and shrink with each heartbeat. A tail growing out from the base of his spine, wagging impatiently from side to side. He stood up on the balls of his feet, heels curled up like a dog, clawed hairy toes stretching out, gripping the ground. This being was the oldest of his race; The Bakkarr. Incredibly powerful and immortal, his age hard to distinguish, his face appeared only middle aged, hiding how ancient this being really was. Only his eyes revealed some truth, wise and old beyond time. It was rumoured that he was over a thousand years old and had perfected the Ways of the Beast. Mastering its strength to give him immortality. 'Why have you come young one?' Boe-Dokk growled, almost too guttural to understand his words. He waited patiently for me to reply, sniffing the air with his odd nose, smelling my scent for my fear, separating the truth from lies. I cleared my throat and went down on one knee, bowing my head respectfully to this grand elder, making sure i spoke with honesty in my soul and chose my words carefully. Keeping my powers up to defend myself if neccessary. Remembering my last first encounter with one of his kind a year before when we fought each other and later together against the Android menace. A fighter known simply as Wolf-Man. 'Ahh. The young one believes i will strike him down while he remains on one knee. He is gladly mistaken,' Boe-Dokk smiled with mirth, acting like he was talking to someone else. It amazed me that he knew my thoughts and feelings even with my defenses up. 'Ahh, i see now old friend. The young one has also met Wolf-Man as he knows him, what a shame that Woar-Tokk was destroyed so soon by the machine men. Maybe now he can rest, no longer at the wrath of the beast.' I looked up from under my eyebrows, keeping my head low. -Woar-Tokk-? Thats the name of Wolf-Man, this grand elder knew him. An image flashed through my mind of Woar-Tokks death at the hands of the Android that dealt the fatal blow. Grimacing at the ease and savagery of his death as he was ripped apart and blasted to pieces in his wolf form after saving my life and Sho's, the Shaolin Warrior. So many of died that day. Boe-Dokk growled when i looked at him, curling his top lip and baring his fangs, making a deep guttural sound in his throat. Quickly i lowered my eyes, not wishing to offend him, even as strong as i am, Boe-Dokk was incredibly more so. I was only here to make a request, to learn, not to fight. 'Elder, i wish for your training to become a disciple of the Beast of change technique?' 'Powerful you are already young one. Wy does a warrior with your mastery and power of the Vortex need my ancient guidance in the Ways of the Beast?' 'My technique is almost perfect. I am grateful for the gift of the Vortexs power but this power alone is not great enough to defeat a malignant evil that i can sense. A force so strong it rivals anything else i have ever faced. You elders will not step in, leaving the battles up to this generation to defend itself. I cant make pin-point where it is or even what is but i know it is a constantly growing threat. I need this training to help match this abomination for raw power.' 'Yes. I also feel this power, i fear that is older than even myself, far older. This is an ancient foe and it seems that now is the time for it to act, confident enough for to reveal itself to the world. You truly believe that the training and techniques i can teach would make you good enough to win this fight? A mere human?' 'This threat is demonic, i feel i need this new power, the Vortex on its own is not enough to beat it. I have the courage and the ability but not the power. This foe will take everything i have and even then it will stand and laugh. My powers are growing all the time but not fast enough to face this thing. The only way it will stop is if i can destroy it, otherwise it will be a threat to all life.' 'The Ways of the Beast will open the inner realms of my soul, allowing me fight it on its level. Fighting fire with fire.' Boe-Dokk cracked his neck to one side, releasing tension in his old body. He took in a large breath through his odd nostrils and calmly released the air from his lungs through his fangs, making a hissing sound. 'Champion of the Vortex you have an admirable spirit. The fusion of your powers and the Beast will unlock a truly great strength within you that you never dreamed possible. You will be the youngest person to harbour such power. Woar-Tokk was a hundred years old and has been one of the Bakkar since he was a child. He struggled to use the beasts power without loosing himself to the change. He he had been gifted and cursed with the Beast from a young age. You however young one, do not have time to master the Beasts power, tame its savagery and use it strength.' 'The price for fusing with body and spirit of the Beast is dangerous for one such as yourself, you are older than any one who has fused before but i trust in your strength of spirit and character. I know you better than you do yourself. If you can meld the power of the Vortex with the Beast you will be a force to be reckoned with, if you cant you will be consumed and will roam the planet in a mindless rage till the day you die.' 'The cost is expensive and their are no guarantees of success. You understand?' I let his words sink in, allowing their effect and meaning take its toll. Would the sacrifice of my own identity be worth it, could i risk becoming a vessel of a destructive force of nature? If i didnt who how else could i beat this evil force that know is out there and i know i cant beat as i am now. A monster that was the face of destruction and death itself. 'Grand Elder. This is my decision. I want the power of the Beast. I will fuse the power of my Vortex with it and i will become a greater warrior. This threat cant be beaten any other way, im the only one who can stand against it. I will not fail.' Boe-Dokk threw his head back and laughed, a deep throaty sound. His muscled frame approached me and he laid his clawed hand on my shoulder and asked me to stand. I looked directly into his beast eyes, startled at the intensity of his stare, glaring down into the depths of my soul. Now my training would begin. Edited by BattleMetal, Sep 6 2009, 06:50 PM.
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| + Byakko | Sep 5 2009, 02:51 PM Post #2 |
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Good stuff, I like your description, but I think it'd be better if you had a little less dialogue. It's good that he is accepted as a pupil straight away, but it seems to progress the story a little too quickly. Good work man, keep it up |
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| BattleMetal | Sep 5 2009, 03:04 PM Post #3 |
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Yeah i agree. I edited out a lot of stuff. It was too much info and not worth knowing. At the time i wanted to make it simple, he asks to be trained, the guy says 'Aye' and then i can just get on with things. i skip the training and the reader just has to accept that he goes through some hardship and acquires the ability he needs. Like i said before its just a simple plot. Theres a few of things like how did he find Boe-Dokk and get an audience with him? Why doesnt he just ask Boe-Dokk to find this thing and finish it if he is so strong? Where does this thing come from? Why is it only up to him, why does he want to fight it? I didnt want Boe-Dokks to be dithering and making the character prove himself, i just thought it would be fine to make it that he is aware of this threat and decides this warrior who is willing to step up is worthy. He can see into his soul and knows he is capable of doing the job. I didnt want to create a novel out of it just a simple fight, Z style with a little background. ![]() I wanted to make the reader understand what was going on in their heads, the pros and cons. From here on its just a battle. There is still some dialogue but nothing as long as this. Chapter 1: First encounter with Dum 1 YEAR LATER Dum grinned a fat glaring look, fat bulking out from his frame, bunching one meaty purple fist into the palm of his other hand. Making wet slapping noises. I am calm. My temper is controlled as i have been taught, my powers at a comfortable level to face this monstrosity. This was the being? I couldnt believe it at first. It seemed harmless but when it grinned and looked at you with those loose, leering puss-yellow eyes you could sense the malevolence, that hidden evil. It was something that i had not encountered before, its chi felt similiar and yet alien. It felt like a Demon and yet it felt different, something else. Strange? I clenched and unclenched my fists slowly, my mind was focused on defeating this thing. Suddenly the ground shook, lighting flashed overhead as dark storm clouds gathered, deafening thunder boomed. My appearance had changed after my training with Boe-Dokk. My hair had turned into a lightning blue, with streaks of silver throughit. Light blue hair covered my arms and shoulder. Slash like marks cut into my cheeks, two on either side. My body was firm and lean, covered in scars. The training had been severe. My eyes had changed also, they appeared a lighter shade of blue on the whites, cat like slits displaying my change into a Bakkar. I could see further and sharper than before. My training should make me strong enough to beat this thing that stands before me. I cant help feeling like this thing is hiding something, something more dangerous? Even my new sense of smell cannot distinguish what it is, a mystery that sits deep within Dums being. His energy constantly moving and shifting, camouflaging his true power. Dum began hopping about on one foot then the other, growing agitated and excited. I grinned at this performance. We will see how excited he feels once i start! I made the first move and flew at super-speed, a dust cloud spawning behind me as i propelled over the ground, staying aloft using my energy. Dums face acknowledged shock as my left fist impaled his large fat stomach and i shoved him back. His cheeks inflated, forcing the air in his lungs out of him. Still pushing with my left fist i swung my right round in a vicious arc. Belting his head to one side, his face imploding under the force of the punch, squishing his cheek in. Just before swinging my body round, kicking him with both legs, he wheezed as my legs kicked him in the side, crunching into his ribs under the blubbery fat. Dum was smacked away by the blows. I gave chase and was on top of him before he knew it, dive bombing out of the sky. Smashing into him feet first, smashing him deep into the ground, the shockwave rippling over the ground, rubble and dirt flying into the air upon impact. I flipped out of the hole, waving my hands in air, making circular motions, two disc like holes in reality was formed, i charged my hands with static power and pushed them into the discs. The Vortex blasts blasted out of the other side, massive twin beams of blue power roared towards Dum still inside the crater. I floated high in the air some 30 feet away, watching as the blasts torpedoed towards their target. -WHOOOOMPH-BOOM- The fireballs exploded, shaking the rocky ground. I watched intently, waiting for the smoke to clear, obscuring my vision. Suddenly Dum erupted out of the crater, mouth wide open, he choked a roar as a high intense blast of yellow energy streamed towards me. Good to see it wont be that easy then. Edited by BattleMetal, Sep 5 2009, 03:58 PM.
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| BattleMetal | Sep 6 2009, 06:47 PM Post #4 |
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Chapter 2: Fancy Tricks The large yellow mouth blast screamed upwards towards me in the sky. I quickly waved my hands through the air and formed a larger disc in the air with both hands, i charged my blue chi along my arms and pushed my hands into the centre of the large disc. A massive beam of blue power, equally as large as Dums blasts roared towards his beam, i pushed hard, using my strength. His yellow blast clashed with my blue beam, there was a brief moment where the energies mixed and flowed into each other, a bright green glow pulsated out. -BANG- The chi energy beams repelled off each other, the explosion was huge. I covered my face with my arms, flying higher into the air feeling the intense heat and static energy as it chased after me. Im not fast enough! The shockwave ripped into me, disorientating my senses, punching me higher up, somersaulting out of control. Dum flew straight into the explosive energies, unaffected by the force of it, he lunged out with his huge, fat paws into the heart of blast and grabbed the amalgamated energy, like it was nothing more than candy-floss in his hands. Leering he flew through the the explosion, flying faster when he saw me off-guard, tumbling and turning in the sky. Dum pulled back his arms, taking in a deep breath through his nostrils, ripping apart the large ball of green pulsating power he had taken from the blast and joined his hands together at his back. Like a catapult he stetched himself as far back as possible, pumping more of his own yellow energy into the green ball, it vibrated and fluctuated to a massive size, some 100 feet wide. 'AWHOOO-BOOM-BOMB-BLAST!!!' he roared as he snapped his arms forward, unleashing all of his stored power in the giant green ball of energy. Launching it directly at me, its surface crackled with yellow sparks. I regained my senses and heard Dum shout out an attack. A huge green ball with yellow sparks shooting over it crackled towards me. Quickly i formed a defensive/ offensive strategy. I painted my hand through the air in a single stroke, a static beam, two metres long, four inches wide hung there; a Vortex Javelin. I grabbed it with my right hand, blue sparks fusing it to my flesh and pulled my arm back and threw the mighty bolt with all my strength directly into the centre of the green sphere. The Vortex javelin flew down, eight other smaller beams broke off. They separated from the larger, prime one as it bit into the sphere of power, the eight smaller javelins stabbed into the outer edges of the ball of power, forcing it back. The green power ball slowed as i pushed the Javelins harder, applying force. Suddenly the yellow electrical energy that surrounded the ball of energy burst off from it and whipped into the air at me. I waved my hand through the air, creating a shield. The electric whips cracked off the other side. I was too busy focusing with the power in the Vortex Javelins to make the shield effecient, the electric current burst through it and zapped off my chest. The large prime Javelin, penetrated the surface, passing through its core, burst through the other side of the green ball, impacting on Dums chest. The double explosions simultaneously blasting both of us out of the sky. Raging powers scoring wounds on both sides. My eight smaller Vortex javelins which had pierced his green ball of amalgamated energy surrounded it in a fierce blue glow, a spark passed between them, gathering in the centre. -BA-BOOOOMB- It detonated. Smashing the fat monster, Dum and myself faster down towards the the hard crust of the Earth with the concussive force of the shockwave. Energy beams erupted in many different directions, passing overhead, raging past our falling bodies, cutting into the earth. A creepy green aura lit up the sky, quickly followed by a blue wash of energy as the heatwave spread over the land. Cracks snaked outwards, forming huge holes, wide rents that dug deep into the ground. Clouds where twisted upon themselves, pushing away before being vaporised by the hurricaning force of the blast as it spread out. |
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| BattleMetal | Sep 11 2009, 01:13 AM Post #5 |
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Chapter 3: Overwhelming Force. Shaking my head, clearing my senses from the groggyness, i slowly rose for the crater where i had crashed. Across from me Dum leered, he too had survived standing at his full height just over six feet tall. We gauged each other, inspecting for any weaknesses, seeing if any damage had been done to eithers bodies or confidence. We where unharmed. Respect glowed from both of us, this thing wasnt even at his max, and neither was I. The fun had only just begun, the warm up is over. Im going to push Dum to his limits. Dum giggled, laughing as he ran across the ground, his blubbery body carrying him forward. I charged, smoke clouding behind me, meeting him in the centre. Dums clumsy, he throws a bizarre overhand right, a haymaker punch that i see coming from a mile off, sailing past my head as tilt it to one side, he misses with a body shot that scrapes past my waist. He falls over, off balance as i step out of the way. I slam six meaty punches into his face, knocking his fat head from side to side, too hard and too fast fro him to defend himself, he recoils in agony, eyes screwed shut against the pain. The rage was beginning to creep on me, a hunger growing. Dum reels back, punches his arm at me, fist glowing, surrounded in a threatening glow. A beam of energy slams off my face, i grin like a madman, my head snaps back, im unharmed, barely more than a tickle. Im snarling now, clamping my mouth hard, baring my teeth. My body is getting pumped full of power as i dig into the core of my being. Tapping into my abilities. My lightning blue hair gets thicker,, growing longer, my eyes shine blue, veins pop out along my arms and barechest as my muscles expand, canines growing longer, teeth sharper. Sparks shot around me, shooting up and down my limbs, crackling between my fingers. It felt good to let my power go a little bit. I LET RIP! -BAMM- I sprang forward. Swinging a super fast, hard punch, hitting Dum over the jaw, sending him spinning through the air, like he had been hit by a speeding bus. I shouted, my speed amplified many times over, i was so fast i was behind him before he reached the ground. I kicked upwards into his spine. Dum let out a whoomph of air, kicked vertically straight up only to be hit back down to earth, crashing head first before i punted him halfway across the country side, crashing headlong into a small rocky hill. The ancient monument, imploded, falling on top of Dums body, shattering into rubble. The felt unstoppable, my power was beyond a scale that even Dum could possibly match. Boe-Dokks training had vastly improved my original power many times over. The hunger was getting stronger. Shouting i charged forward, quickly Dum came into sight, struggling to rise, pushing rocks off his bruised body. The rocks are sent soaring into the air as i impact hard into Dum. Red blood is dripping from his wounds. I dig my hand into the his pudgy neck, gripping tightly through the folds of skin, easily lifting him up. I glared into his eyes then smashed over a hundred punches into his large body before he could blink. Blood vomited from his mouth in spray, washing over my chest and shoulders, pooling down my torso onto my feet. It was warm, sticky, it stank of coppery smell, sickening me. I let his limp body go, spinning on the ball of my left foot and smacked him away with my right leg, kicking him hard in the chest. He literally skimmed across the ground, bouncing and cartwheeling, seeming never to stop. I craved for battle, i wanted to face a worth adversary, i needed a real challenge. I shouted into the heavens, body shaking with power, the ground shook, rocks exploding, earths moving, sparks shooting off my body, sending pillars of blue fire erupting upwards. I felt like nothing could stop me, nothing could match me. I was using the full scope of my own Vortex power, only tapping into 5% of the beasts power and already i felt undefeatable. 'RRRROOOOAAAARRRRGGGGHHHHH!!!!' Chapter 4: Dums true power Dum groaned, rising from the crater. The warrior he faced was unlike anything he had ever challenged before; insane, savage and utterly impossible. He groaned in pain. The attack on his being had awakened his own hidden power. It was what he needed. Dum let his inner power flow out, it grew and grew and grew. He giggled. *** I wasnt at my peak but if i released too much, too quick i risked domination and devastation by the beast inside. I twitched, my blue chi sparking round my body in a field. I sensed Dums energy. His wierd monster energy was growing, very fast, becoming bigger, more threatening. I let out a low growl, so the monster was going to bring his full strength to the table. Lets see if he is good enough to push me any further. Booming thundered in the distance. I faced towards it, my strength and fury simmering. Raging yellow chi came charging towards me in a tidal wall, massive and powerful, i had to cover my face with my arms as it brightened and burned into me, incredible heat as the aura blast exploded over the ground. The blast of power was like a nuclear bomb, shockwaves pulsating outwards, mountains blown asunder under the power rush. The blast roared covering 2 miles, wiping it flat. My clawed feet where dug deep into the ground, scratching and tearing into the ground, energy winds forcing me back, i struggled to keep my balance and shouted in defiance, the power nearly overhwelming my own. The explosive energy suddenly ceased. What the... I stared in amazement as Dum stood not 3 feet away, his speed had increased with his power, appearing in front of me in a flash. Dum coursed with power, the likes of which i had never sensed in any mortal fighter. It was astounding how much power he contained. I stared upwards at his towering form, standing well over sixty feet tall, increasing his bodymass by tenfold, dwarfing my physical body. He leered through his bulging yellow eyes, his flesh had turned from purple into a dark blue hue, studded with spiky bumps. 'Now...I... Shall...Crush...You. Now you DIE!!!' Dum bawled in my face and smashed his forearm down. i leaped backwards, blown further away by the shock of the impact as his entire arm dug deep into the ground. I flipped and rolled, eventually landing on my feet. I let out a surprised grunt as Dum was in my face and smashed me away with a blistering backhand, his gigantic hand slapping across my entire body. Sending me cartwheeling through the air, i tumbled and spun over the crumbling cracked ground. Finally i stopped and cried out in frustration as i tried to rise just as his massive body sized fist smashed into my side. I was flying again, gritting my teeth, concentrating my energy to slow me down. I caught Dum charging at me from the corner of my vision, growling as i engaged him in combat. We flew at each other, my fists crashing his with bestial strength into his massive studded blue arms, his own punches raining down on top of me. Our fists clashed off each other, the impact jarring up my arms. The battle was joined, our powers full blown ripping the earth apart. Opening my mouth i roared avoiding a left hook, a violent beam of blue energy nailed into his shoulder, the impact booming. Dum let out gruff bark as he toppled back, swing an energised fist, impossible to dodge. i raised my arms in defense, the force of the blow thudding heavily into me, blood sprayed from my nostrils as i was punched hard into the ground. Sending rocks and debree flying into the air. Dum growled, slapping his huge beefy hands together, like he was claming a victory. Each thunderous clap split the ground in two, like a giants axe from the Heavens was being hacked into the solid rock. -Boom-Boom-Boom-Boom- Four huge claps rocked the land, his hands charged with power, crackling with yellow static, leering his puss coloured eyes at me as i layed stunned in the ground. Edited by BattleMetal, Sep 11 2009, 06:10 PM.
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| BattleMetal | Sep 18 2009, 01:49 PM Post #6 |
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Chapter 5: Gaining the Upper Hand I groaned as i began to rise. Dum blasted several electrical balls of enormous size at me. Growling i blasted out of the hole, flying into the air smashing the first electric ball with a slap, it exploded on contact with my skin, shocking my entire body, my nervous sytem sent violent shockwaves of pain shooting to my brain. I convulsed in agony for a moment. The others magnified in size and split into dozens more. I stopped mid-flight, looking up into the horde i focused my power into my throat, a charge sparked from my body. I roared. The electric fireballs where torn apart by the blast, Dum whimpered in frustration, covering his ears as the noise vibrated into his large, fat blue body, hitting him hard into the air. Dum bawled and charged at me, throwing a meaty fist towards my body, i caught it, snapping it back at the elbow before he could cry out i swung my leg up and repeatedly kicked him hard in the face. Dums broken arm snapped back into joint and he barreled into my me, spearing my gut with his shoulder. We plummeted into the ground, another crater was formed as more earth was thrown into the air under the impact. Dum recovered, punching me deeper into the crater, I grunted under the force of the blow. Dum gleefully laughed as he put his giant hands into my face, blinding my eyes as he unleashed hundreds of rapid blasts, each one feeling like a punch was being fired from a cannon. Giggling as he slowly rose into the air, pinning my body with a constant barrage of fireballs. Dum sucked in a huge breath before releasing a giant yellow fireball that expanded to double his own bodies size, blazing into me. Pushing me deep into the Earths crust, the ground rippled as the fireball exploded. The whole planet seemed to shudder under the force of the explosion, its blast radius covering 3 miles in a less than a thirty seconds, destructive energies tearing it apart. All is bright as the never ending Sun. Darkness descends. *** Dums erected forcefield glowed dimly in the darkness, his muscles pumped, veins standing on end. He waited. Not sure if he had defeated the crazy little warrior. Confident at least that his last attack had hit dead on. His nemesis was surely dead. His opponent was stronger than others fighters he had crossed paths with, but he was still only a little thing. The warriors soul would make a very welcoming meal. Dum waited for the smog to clear, unable to see into the darkness. *** Pebbled rocks tumbled and felll that had once been mountains scaling miles into the sky. Stillness followed. Nothing more moved. A blue- furred, clawed hand limply hanged out from the rubble... |
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