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DragonBall Unlimited
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Zeepwhat	Aug 27 2009, 04:15 AM Post #1
Posts: 27 Group: Member Member #4,415 Joined: August 26, 2009 What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	All Credits for the first four chapters go to Tenshinku. Who has not been online for almost 2 months so I am taking over writing his story just for fun. He came up with the idea and all and I am probably not as good in writing as he is ;). Tenshinku It's kind of a sequel to dragonballz, but I'm going to have to explain a little bit. In Dragonball Unlimited dragonballz happened, the final two chapters of dragonballz did not happen, we are ignoring the end of dbz. Dragonball Unlimited is like a sequel of dbz but except it starts like 05 years later after the defeat of majin boo. Dragonball Unlimited Saga 0ne: Return of the Saiyan race saga. Part 01 Old Foe Abroad? Trunks is out flying over to Son goku’s house, most likely looking for goten. He has a pair of black shorts and a black long sleeve shirt. Trunks: I sure do hope that goten’s home, I mean there’s nothing to do in that boring house of mine. All I get over there is nagging from mom. Trunks looks down and sees goku’s house is right under him, he flies down there. He walks over to the front door with his right hand in his pocket and knocks with his left hand. Someone in the house hears the knock. I’m coming! The door is opened by chi-chi. She is wearing the exact same wardrobe she had in the beginning of dragonballz. Chi-chi: Oh! Trunks it’s you! Look at you, you’ve grown taller! How old are you now? Trunks: I’m about 13 right now. Chi-chi: Come in! Are you here for goten? Trunks: Yeah! Is he here? Chi-chi: Yeah, hold on a sec. Chichi opens a drawer and grabs a pair of socks and puts them on, along with her boots. Chichi goes over to the dining room over to the back door and goes outside and there you see goten and goku training. Goku is wearing the gi he always wears in dbz. Goten has grown taller, he still looks like goku though. He is 12. Goten: Ha ha dad! Is this all you have? Goten tries to kick goku, goku grabs gotens leg and throws him into the air. Goten: Time for me to use the technique dad taught me. Goten puts his two fingers on his forehead and transports behind goku and slams his head from behind. Goku is sent flying to the ground but catches himself by putting his palms on the ground and then doing a back flip. Chi-chi: Hey goten you have company! Goku: Whew! Whoa, talk about hungry! Alright goten, your improving a lot! Tomorrow we will fight as super saiyans and then we will see if you can ascend to Super saiyan 02. Goten: Huff huff, right! If it wasn’t for you getting hungry all the time we would train more and make even more progress. Goku: Hey don’t blame me! It’s like I have five stomachs to feed. Goku and goten start walking over to chichi. Chi-chi: Cant you guys stop training for at least one day to spend it with the family? Goku: Oh come on chichi we need to train to prepare for any dangers that are heading to earth. Chi-chi: Yeah yeah… I know! How about we have a picnic today with the whole family and all of our friends. Goku: Well I don’t know… Chi-chi: There’s going to be lots of food goku! Goku: Alright! I’m there! They all enter the house. Goten: Hey trunks! What brings you here? Trunks: Nothing I’m just bored out of my mind. Chi-chi: So trunks, would you and your family like to go to a picnic with us? Trunks: Sure why not? Chi-chi: Great! I’ll go call your parents right now. Go call your brother goten. Goten: Why me? Chi-chi: Look! You wont be ruining this! This family needs this desperately!! Goten: Alright! No need to yell. A few hours have passed. Everyone is at the park now. Goten is wearing a white sleeveless shirt with blue martial arts pants and some black martial arts shoes. Chi-chi is wearing the same clothing she wears in dragonball when she fights goku. She is over at the blanket preparing the food. Goku is wearing the same clothing, so is trunks. Bulma and vegeta arrive at the park with their daughter bra. She is about 05 years old. Bulma is wearing a blue dress with no sleeves and some high heels. Vegeta is wearing a brown sweater and a black shirt with some brown pants. Bulma: Oh son I haven’t seen you in a long time! Goku: Wow! You changed bulma. Bulma: Of course! I’m more elegant then ever. Goku: Oh I meant that you have a wrinkle under your eye. Bulma: And I MEANT THAT I’M MORE ELEGANT! Vegeta: So kakarot, you been keeping your boys in check? Goku: Well goten seems to be progressing, but gohan… well. What about trunks? Vegeta: We train everyday. He probably leaves your boy in the dust. Chi-chi: There, the foods ready! Goku: Alright! My favorite part! Everyone removes their shoes and sits at the blanket and begin grabbing food. Especially goku and vegeta, they are grabbing everything very fast and shoving it in their mouths. Everyone is staring at them like if they were a bunch of freaks. Over at a dessert there are five shining glows flying over to the ground, they crash making five craters. The objects look like saiyan spaceships, the doors begin to open. Four men wearing saiyan armor come out of the spaceships. One of them is a woman. Arocko: Hahaha, shall we go cut up some meat now! Slurp! Arocko is a medium sized saiyan with a mohawk who is very skinny. Crowna: Patience arocko, we will get all the meat we want! Crowna is a girl saiyan, she has long purple hair and is wearing an elite saiyan armor. Redrack is a tall buff saiyan with long hair and green eyes, he is wearing a blue saiyan armor. Omuku is an old skinny saiyan who is wearing an elite saiyan armor. Crowna: Lets go! They all fly away. Edited by Zeepwhat, Aug 27 2009, 05:22 AM.
	"Me, I want whats coming to me" "And I'm a SUPER SAIYAN!"


Zeepwhat	Aug 27 2009, 04:16 AM Post #2
Posts: 27 Group: Member Member #4,415 Joined: August 26, 2009 What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Tenshinku Dragonball Unlimited Saga 0ne: Return of the Saiyan race saga. Part 02 Prince Vegeta Gohan and videl arrive to the picnic with their one year old baby daughter named pan in videls arms. Gohan is wearing a blue T shirt and some black pants with black shoes. Videl is wearing some leggings with some flats, along with a white long shirt with no sleeves. Goku sees them and begins to wave at them with his mouth full, chi-chi disgusted at goku hits him with a spoon. Gohan and videl see them and go over to them, both remove their shoes and sit with the rest of them. Chi-chi: Oh it’s my baby! Pan! Can I hold her? Videl: Sure! Videl hands over baby pan over to chi-chi. Chi-chi: She is so adorable. Goku: So how’s it been for you two since you moved out? Gohan: It’s been great! We found a new bigger house that we’re going to move too. Chi-chi: So how’s your job? Gohan: It’s pretty good teaching at the university of Satan city. So where is goten? Chi-chi: I’m not sure. That boy is always getting into trouble. Goten and trunks were walking around the park but decided to go back to the picnic spot. They go and sit down right next to master roshi. Trunks starts to whisper over at roshi. Trunks: Hey old man. Do you have any more collectibles for me and goten? Master Roshi: Sure sonny! I always carry a few with me. Roshi pulls out a few nudie magazines from his shirt. Goten begins to blush. Trunks: Alright! Here is the Zeni. Just then someone’s feet stomp on the ground next to master roshi, it turns out to be bulma. Bulma: Are you some type of hustler selling these ridiculous things to kids!!? You perverted old freak!! Master roshi: No it’s not what you think! I need the mo- Bulma begins to smack him around. Goten and trunks creep away. Back to where the saiyans are the group seems to be heading over to a city. Crowna: Finally our hunger will be appeased. Also our goal for those balls that grant wishes. Omuku: Yes, now that our race lives again we shall revive our planet. They arrive at the city. Arocko: Sluuuurpp… shall we? Crowna begins gathering her energy on both of her hands. Crowna gives away an evil grin. Crowna: Sure…. She throws both energy attacks at the city, both hitting two big buildings. Arocko flies with his tongue out of his mouth and shoots a energy beam out of his mouth over to a theme park, the theme park vanishes from existence. Crowna is floating right next to him. Crowna: You know if you keep it up like this, there wont be much meat left. Arocko: No need to worry. I’m being careful. I just like playing with my prey. Omuku is standing in the middle of the street, he starts shooting energy beams from his eyes. The people begin to panic. Redrack grabs a couple and smashes them on to each other. Arocko jumps at this woman and blood is coming out from all over her, you could hear her screaming. Arocko has blood all over his mouth and body when he is done with her. Arocko: Yuck… human meat tastes disgusting raw. Over at the park goku stops eating and stands up. Vegeta: I feel four energies, kakarot. They feel… saiyan. Goku: Yeah… Goku knew vegeta was right about them being saiyan. Chi-chi: What is it goku? Goku: Vegeta, trunks, goten, there isn’t much time. I can feel them killing a lot of people. Chi-chi: But goku… Goku, vegeta, trunks and goten put on their shoes. Goku: Sorry Chi-chi, I know how important today is to you, but I promise you we wont take long. Chi-chi: Just go goku. I believe you. Goku smiles. Goku: Thank you Chi-chi… Goku then flies away with vegeta and the boys. Bulma: Vegeta, trunks…. I hope they’re going to be alright. Back at the city, which has been made into a ghost town has the saiyans camping out eating their human meat. Crowna: After we are finished eating we will search for the balls. Goku, vegeta, trunks and goten land in the same area where the saiyans are. Goku: We’re too late…damn! All the saiyans stand up with awe. Crowna: P- prince vegeta? Vegeta: Well, if it isn’t crowna. I thought you were dead. Crowna: I was dead, we were all dead. You… Goku: Me? Crowna: You look like bardock. You must be his son. Goku: Bardock? Never heard of him… Grrr… why did you destroy this city? Arocko: We were famished… Goku transports in front of him and punches him over to a destroyed building and transports back to where he was. Crowna: Your fast… Goku: You selfish fools… So your saiyan huh? Figures… Crowna: Prince vegeta… what has happened to you? You normally would kill because of the enjoyment of it, you’re a disgrace. Vegeta: Me a disgrace? You’re the one that kills people weaker then you. Crowna: Your father will be disappointed when he hears about you talking this way. Vegeta: My father…? Crowna: The whole saiyan race is back… Vegeta, goku, trunks and goten look in awe. Tenshinku Edited by Zeepwhat, Aug 27 2009, 05:23 AM.
	"Me, I want whats coming to me" "And I'm a SUPER SAIYAN!"


Zeepwhat	Aug 27 2009, 04:17 AM Post #3
Posts: 27 Group: Member Member #4,415 Joined: August 26, 2009 What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Tenshinku Here it is guys! Tell me what you think so far! Dragonball Unlimited Saga 0ne: Return of the Saiyan race saga. Part 04 A New Fur Coat Vegeta: What in god’s name…!? Crowna: Before I kill you I would like to make you a proposition. Vegeta: Forget it! I won’t join in your stupidity. Crowna: I see… I was going to spare your life so that you can join us in rebuilding the saiyan empire but I see you don’t want too… Crowna runs over to vegeta, vegeta prepares himself to fight back but crowna smacks him with her tail and cuts him on his arm. She proceeds to kick him over to a pile of rocks. Vegeta: Grrr… You managed to surprise me, and anger me...! Crowna flies down over to vegeta and knees him on his stomach. Redrack and goten are standing in front of one another. Goten: You aren’t bad. Redrack: I don’t want any compliments from no half breeds. Redrack begins to power up and turns super saiyan. Goten: Whoa your power just went through the roof…! Redrack looks up into the moon, he then shoots some of his super saiyan energy at it. His eyes become blue and he begins to grow red fur all over his body, he grows claws on both his feet and arms, his teeth are very sharp. He is now a humanoid version of the great ape. Goten: What in the world…!? Redrack jumps out over to goten, he reacts by dodging him and prepares to kick redrack. Redrack grabs goten’s leg and pierces it with his claws. Goten: Grugh… (My leg!) Redrack aims his tail at goten, a red aura begins to appear around his body and his tail. His tail forms a red beam and shoots it at goten. When it hits goten the area explodes with redrack flying out of the blast unharmed. Arocko is kneeling on the gorund in front of goku. Goku: Had enough? Arocko: Huff… you think I am weak! Goku: (I have to finish this quick and help vegeta out. That transformation was strange. Can’t let him look at the moon.} Arocko: By looking up at the moon and- Goku appears behind arocko and kicks him on his head over to the ground, knocking him out cold. Goku looks over at crowna and vegeta. Crowna has vegeta on the ground while she kicks him all over his body. Goku flies over to crowna and vegeta and kicks her away from him. Goku: Vegeta, are you alright? Vegeta: Tch, yeah…. (Grr… I don’t need to be saved like a helpless child…!) Crowna gets up and floats over to goku. Crowna: Your powerful... Would you like to join us kakarot? Goku: Join you? What for!? Crowna: Think about it, we will rebuild the Saiyan Empire, starting by collecting the objects called dragonballs! Goku: Dragonballs huh…? Crowna: With the dragonballs we will wish for eternal life so we can live and fight forever! With our second wish we will wish for our planet to be revived! Our planet, Planet Vegeta! Then we will go out ruling the universe! Taking planets for ourselves, so that when we reproduce our race even more, we will have all the room we need for our race! Selling planets to other races! We will control the universe! So! What do you say!? Goku: Sorry, but I decline. I stop evil, not cause it. Crowna: Suit yourself traitor! You and the rest of your lot will die by our hands! Crowna powers up and rushes over to goku, goku powers up too and throws a punch at her. She smacks it away and kicks him on the face. He then puts his hand on her face and smashes it on the ground. She pulls his arm and slams him to the ground. Both get up and back away from one another. Goku: ( This is…! Exciting…! Crowna: ( He seems to be a fun one…) Both stare and smirk at each other. Zeepwhat \| Tenshinku Dragonball Unlimited Saga 0ne: Return of the Saiyan race saga. Part 05 Time for...Chubbiness! Crowna says "Lets cut the chit chat and get to the punches" Goku: "Hmmf your right." Crowna rushes at Goku and he dodges and appears behind her. He kicks her up into the sky and uses his instant transmission to get above her and fires a kamehameha. Crowna pushes the attack out of her way. Crowna: "Hmm, your powers are weaker than I expected. This should be no problem. " She starts to charge a golden wave of energy in her hand. She flys to goku and punches and kicks him brutally until hes on the ground with her one hand. Shes about to fire the shot. Vegeta: "Kakarott!! Get out of here!" Several shots of energy are thrown at Crowna. Its Krillin! Piccolo! Yamcha! and Tien! Suddenly Crowna transforms back into her normal state. Crowna: "Whatt!? Time already?" And she flees the scene. Trunks: "Hello!? Have you forgotten about me Goten!? Its my turn to kick his butt!!" Goten: "Noo! I wanna do it" Redrack: "If only there was someway I could kill the both of you at once" Goten: "ooh Trunks! I know, lets fuse! then we'll be even stronger" Trunks: "Okay, sure why not?" Goten and Trunks begin to perform the fusion dance. "FUUUSION HA!" Trunk's finger slips and they are fused into...Fat Gotenks! Redrack: "Ahahahah" Gotenks: "Way to go Trunks, you messed up. Shut up" From the mountains suddenly arrives Yajirobe. Yajirobe: "Hey! Goku! Vegeta! What happened? I saw the big explosions and I thought some fights were going on. So I brought some Senzu beans!" Goku: "ahah. Just in time" Vegeta: "Aghh! What was that crowna transformed into!?" Krillin: "Who cares right now, you better eat up and restore some eneergy" Piccolo: "Wheres Goten and Trunks!?" Vegeta: "Over there in the forest they were fighting..AHH! they were fighting redracks...he must have transformed too!" The Z fighters plus Goku and Vegeta fly over to find Goten and Trunks. Yajirobe: "Heyy! did you guys forget about me???" They arrive in the forest and minutes later Yajirobe shows up. Yajirobe: "Hey did you guys find Goten and Trunks" Yamcha: "Nope, but we did find a chubby mix" Vegeta: "Where did Redracks go" Gotenks: "He ran off. Something about transforming back?" "I bet we just scared him away" Krillin: "Scared him off with what? Your layers of fat? ahah" Gotenks: "Shut up baldy.." Krillin: "Erhh" Edited by Zeepwhat, Aug 27 2009, 05:27 AM.
	"Me, I want whats coming to me" "And I'm a SUPER SAIYAN!"


Zeepwhat	Aug 27 2009, 05:21 AM Post #4
Posts: 27 Group: Member Member #4,415 Joined: August 26, 2009 What Browser do you use? Mozilla Firefox Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Zeepwhat \| Tenshinku Dragonball Unlimited Saga 0ne: Return of the Saiyan race saga. Part 06 A Father!? Krillin: What was that all about? Goku: I'm not sure, but that trio had incredible power! Its kind of exciting! Vegeta: Be quiet. My Father is here! All but Vegeta: Whaaatt!? Vegeta: There were 5 saiyan spaceships. Crowna, Redracks, Arocko, and my Father. The fifth I don't recognize his ki. Gahh! I wonder how they are back alive. Goku: Come on guys, we better get back to the picnic. Back at the picnic Bulma and Chi Chi are walking back and forth together dramatically. Waiting for their sons to come back in peace. Gohan is with Videl and watching their baby. Mr. Satan arrives with a camera crew at the battle site and starts to fool West City that he was just part of a "big battle in which he wooped the bad guys asses". They all arrive. Bulma&Chi Chi: WHERE ARE OUR SONS!? Gotenks: Right here mom! Bulma&Chi Chi: Ahhh! Bulma: Your not trunks Chi Chi: Or Goten! Hmmf Gotenks disfuse. Chi Chi quickly grabs goten and praises him. Chi Chi: Oh goten did they hurt you are you okay!? Please tell me you kicked theyre butt. Bulma: Yeah, what was up with all of that? Goku: Super Saiyans Bulma: ahhh! Vegeta: These were diffirent. They transformed into an ape human thing. Well I dont know what they were! Agh I just can't stand it they defeated me! Only a few moments later a familiar face to Vegeta shows up right infront of them. Its king Vegeta! And behind him stand Redracks, Crowna and what? Whos this! He looks just like Goku! Roshi: Ahhh! Look at that guy! He looks just like Goku Goku: Who are you guys!? Redracks: We are a super force of- K. Vegeta: Silence. Don't interrupt your master. Redracks: Sorry my sire. K. Vegeta: We have been revived by Shenron for one soul purpose to rebuild our planet. Krillin: Why would he let you be alive again!? You guys are murderers. K. Vegeta: He said that their was good in one of us and that things would start to change. That our race was going to let go of our "evil" ways. Anyways Bardock here is the one who came up with the idea to use these planet's Dragon Balls to gain Immortality. You now know why we came here and how we are alive. Now my disobedient son, Vegeta it is time for you and your friends to DIE!!!! King Vegeta charged purple streaks of energy and raised them up just as he was about to fire the shots down. Bardock attacked K. Vegeta from the back and Goku grabbed everyone down there and signaled Bardock to join them. In an instance everyone was on the planet of New Namek! Tien: Goku why did you bring that guy here!? Piccolo: Because this "Bardock" is Goku's father All but Goku, Piccolo, and Vegeta: WHAT? Goku: How did you know Piccolo? Piccolo: My Namekan ears, remember? Goten: Does this..Does this mean I do have a grandpa!? Bardock: I knew this day would come. Its all thanks to you son. Back when Planet Vegeta was about to be destroyed I had visions of you. You said it wasn't to late to change my ways, you OPENED my mind! So I devised this scheme to betray King Vegeta and to change the Saiyan ways. Edited by Zeepwhat, Aug 27 2009, 05:27 AM.
	"Me, I want whats coming to me" "And I'm a SUPER SAIYAN!"


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