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| * brit :) | Aug 22 2009, 01:17 AM Post #1 |
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inconnue. walking around in a desolate place looking for something that still hasn't been found faces pass me like a single blur not giving me a chance to let my voice be heard i walk alone head held low a smile quickly fading my tattered heart still aching who can help mend, this broken spirit? - written for an assignment in AP Literature. |
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dART chaleureuse. chic. createuse. douce. leave me something nice. | |
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| Mike2 | Aug 22 2009, 04:58 PM Post #2 |
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Seems a little simple to me, but not in a bad way, I like it
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| * brit :) | Aug 22 2009, 06:06 PM Post #3 |
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Lol, thanks. That was the point though, to be simple, but not. |
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dART chaleureuse. chic. createuse. douce. leave me something nice. | |
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| * Mitas | Aug 23 2009, 03:01 PM Post #4 |
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It truly was a Shawshank redemption
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Good job, it may be simple but it's quite powerful. I like the structure too. |
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"Then you've got the chance to do better next time." "Next time?" "Course. Doing better next time. That's what life is." | |
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