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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 10 2009, 11:50 PM (327 Views) | |
| * brit :) | Aug 10 2009, 11:50 PM Post #1 |
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boomboompow.
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Unrequited love. Something that seems nearly impossible to bounce back from. Something that feels like a never ending war raging inside your mind, without a moments' rest. Somehow, I've still managed to hold on. Even though it's battered and torn, my heart still manages to beat steadily like a drum. I've lowered walls and overcame many obstacles while nearly losing you in the process. Despite that we've still managed to create a bond that will last for more than a lifetime. I look at you and feel nothing but warm love and happiness. At the same time, I'm struggling with an unknown future I may not be prepared for. A future I have to create away from you. Away from everyone. My tired heart beats anxiously, scared of what may lay before me. You've created a home in my heart. You've stepped into my world and singlehandedly turned it upside down right before my very eyes. You look at life not as a challenge, but as a journey everyone should be excited to take part in. Such strength... where does it come from? I'm envious of how you always manage to keep your head held high and prominent smile always on your face. I lay awake at night, pondering about the future and all it has to offer. On the other hand, I'd be more happier.... just spending it with a person like you. I realize we've paved two different paths to follow on and naturally want to make something of ourselves. Why can't we defy nature just this once? I'm frightened. You have to realize that every time you share glances with me. You have to realize how much I want to hold onto you and never let you go. You've done something no one else has ever been able to do: make me experience the true feeling of happiness. I admire and love you so much for what you've done. [excerpt from my story: "swim"] |
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dART chaleureuse. chic. createuse. douce. leave me something nice. | |
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| Pookie | Aug 11 2009, 01:35 AM Post #2 |
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Pookie Powa!
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It was very interesting, and the thoughts were deep. It felt like I was the one that was feeling the emotion, which is a good thing. |
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| + Byakko | Aug 11 2009, 11:00 AM Post #3 |
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it
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Beautiful. Well done. |
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GFX Portfolio Tumblr DeviantArt ![]() Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'" | |
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