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Summer Sunrise
Topic Started: Jul 16 2009, 01:16 PM (284 Views)
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

Inspired by a person and a sight, which I couldn't even thought of this without.

The Summer Sunrise has begun
With colours of wonder
Basking in the glow,
Of the warm sun, we're under

Piercing the darkness of night
Swirling colours and dreams
Bring nothing but delight
Under the warm sun

Summer Sunrise,
Ever so bright
I've won first prize
With such a sight

Watching this, with you,
A moment grasped, a moment lost
Seeing every hue
There's no price, no cost

Summer Sunrise,
Ever so bright
I've won first prize
With such a sight

Summer Sunrise,
Ever so bright
I've won first prize
With such a sight

...So yeah...
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It truly was a Shawshank redemption

Nice lyrics again Mike. I'd love to hear this played like the last one.
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"Course. Doing better next time. That's what life is."
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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

Thanks dude :D

I'll get round to it, though I need to sort a few things out about it first.
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Cool, no rush. And keep up the good work.
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Chiaroscuro ♥

Thank you. That was very special... just beautiful.

6 am nature is incredible, everybody should experience it. :)

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I once gave a Kangaroo a heart-attack just by staring at it

Thanks Kris =D

It's on "The Tube" (YouTube) now, if anybody is interested in watching it, just click the link in my sig to take you to my page.
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I love the guitar in it, sounds really good. However the song cuts out at the end very abrubtly. I don't know if that's supposed to happen.
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Hmm. I'll re-upload it tomorrow... I can't watch it...lmao.

Thanks, though =D
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I loved what you did at the end, when you repeated the "such a sight" bit.
Really nice, Mike. I'm loving the more upbeat sound you went for, it suits the lyrics perfectly.

Summer sunriseee... summer sunrise... ever so bright...! aaah loved it. :)

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