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Full body poses; My newest drawings.
Topic Started: Jun 10 2009, 12:00 PM (455 Views)
Kai
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These are my first attempt at drawing full body poses. Need a bit of advise on how to improve. I know there is no shading as i can't shade yet. I think the the second goku is the best.


WHEN VIEWING THESE PUT THE PAGE SIZE TO 50 :)
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The second Goku.
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looks like basic,i mean you've made them for about 10 mins yeah? my drawings take about 2 or 3 hours to make them perfect and shaded.
you just need to make more details,body poses are ok but you need to work a little on faces
anyways its ok just dont stop with that ;)
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Goku 1- Not bad. Work on that lower arm a bit it shouldn't be the same size as the upper arm. His cloz are alittle off, the short sleeves make his shoulders look out of sorts. I like everything else about his clothing. As for the bottom, his shoes look like he has robot feet. I suppose thats fine though because in the anime his shoes are proportioned like that but give 'em some laces so it does look like he's made of metal or something. Not bad for your first Goku, shading nd coloring are the next step but as Lavender said, add some specific details.

Trunks 1-First thing I see is the hair. The styles totally different. With short hair it's wavy and more curve rather then just straight up like Goku or Vegeta. The drawing has almost no neck. His pants seem really big and I think your givin' him a wedgy. :rofl: No joke though, Fix pants. His shoes are nothing like the ones you drew.

Goku 2-Oh, for sure this is the best one you've made. needs a sharper nose. Work on your fists. His left is odd. If you want a reference then use your own fists and see how it curls. The right is good, i can tell you broke it down a bit. unintentional or not it worked. But yea definitely this Goku was your best.

Keep at it. One thing I noticed in common with all your drawings was your eyebrows. They basically had none that I could see clearly. I know they might be smaller then the forehead but they're there. so work on that, maybe reduce the size of forehead by increasing eyebrows. Don't be afraid to move on to shading an coloring if you choose because once you do then you'll know how to improve and decide which things will need working on more then the others. For example the fist thing I was talking about. Maybe with some shading and coloring it won't matter how in detail it's drawn as long as you have the right shades. Neways, Good job on first drawings.

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Both Gokus were really nice, Trunks`s hair was a little different but still not too bad, Good job I like the clenched fist on Goku #1.
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lavender
Jun 10 2009, 04:36 PM
looks like basic,i mean you've made them for about 10 mins yeah? my drawings take about 2 or 3 hours to make them perfect and shaded.
you just need to make more details,body poses are ok but you need to work a little on faces
anyways its ok just dont stop with that ;)
It did take me about an hour or two, especially on the last one. Yes they are the basic poses as i am just folloeing instructions from a tuturial. So for some reason the more complex the form the more detail they have.

With the faces if you see mmy previous work on here i can o the faces alright i am just not used to the scale yet.


Thanl you for all your advice every one. When ido my next one i will try to use it.

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