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| Topic Started: May 29 2008, 09:36 PM (256 Views) | |
| Silver Raditz | May 29 2008, 09:36 PM Post #1 |
A True Saiyan Warrior
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Chapter 36: Just Keeps Getting Worse. Mint waits outside for the all clear pacing a little in impatience. Krillin, Gohan, and Dende floated out of the ship each of them holding two dragonballs. Mint put her hand on her cheek a bit confused. “Gee you guys didn’t all need to come out here to tell me.” Krillin put on a flat face, “ No we’re sneaking the dragonballs out finding the last one and making a wish before Vegeta wakes up.” Mint smiled impishly rubbing her hands together a moment, “Oh nice!” she took the radar out and handed Dende it, “trade ya!” she took the balls from Dende with a cute smile, “Alright little guy, where’s the last ball?” Dende coughed a bit, “not too far, I suppose you can just follow me.” The group took off with bright smiles all around. Gohan laughed, “I can’t believe it, we’re almost done here! And soon we can all go home.” Krillin laughed rubbing the back of his head, “ I bet your mom is pulling out her hair worrying about you.” Gohan said meekly, “I hope she’s not too mad.” Mint patted him on the back, “Nah, she’ll be too happy to see you in one piece to be mad.” Gohan smiled in nervous worry, “Gee I hope so!” They all landed by a ruined Namekian village, “It seems like it’s around here somewhere…” Dende said after a moment of taking in the sight of his people’s destruction. “All right, let’s split up…” Krillin said dropping the dragonballs, Mint and Gohan dropped their and began looking around. Eventually Gohan popped out with the ball, “Found it!” “Good job Gohan!” Mint and Krillin congratulated him. They put the giant seven mystic balls together and Dende came forward, “Porunga! Viz ana walla tran!” The whole ground began to shake, the sky turned black and a giant thunder storm formed over head, the magic balls glowed to a near blinding light and a light shot into the light with a roar. Porunga emerged, the mighty dragon looked down at the four small mortals beneath him. Mint looked up at him amazed, “whoa. He looks like Shinron’s buff older brother” Krillin blinked in awe, “No kidding!” Gohan jumped out excited, “Mister Dragon I want to wish back Piccolo!” His eyes flashed as he saw three were human, “You must speak in the language of the creator.” Dende spoke up, “Zaz Piccolo ran!” The dragon’s eyes glowed bright, “Your wish has been granted, what is your second wish?” “S-s-second?” Mint said her face a little red, “You’re amazing Porunga!” “So cool!” Gohan smiled very widely. The dragon blushed a little, “err…” Gohan blushed, “oh…sorry! We wish Piccolo here so he can fight with us.” Porunga eyes glowed again, “Your wish is granted…what is your third wish.” “I dunno…” Krillin spoke for the group, “we really didn’t know we got two much less three!” Porunga sweat dropped. Meanwhile, elsewhere on Namek. Frieza had just finished of the last defender of Namek, Nail when he saw the storm start to form, “Enugh! The dragon has arrived!” he flew off as fast as he could. Then back with the Z-fighter’s Porunga suddenly roared in pain, “Aaaauuuuuuugh!” his image shattered like glass and the mystic balls were reduced to plain gray stones. The group could barely wrap their heads around this new event, “What just happened?” Krillin said softly. Dende sunk his head, “Guru…he’s dead…” Gohan approached him meekly, “I’m sorry Dende…” Just then Vegeta landed a wild look of anger in his eyes. “You idiots! Why didn’t you wish for my immortality, that was the only way we can beat Frieza!” Mint rolled her eyes, “pfft! Please, with Raddy and Goku we don’t even need you!” Vegeta grabbed her by the shoulders and shook her violently, “Are you mad woman! Do you have any idea how strong he is? And I don’t care how strong Kakarot and Raditz SEEM but I am still the strongest saiyan alive. Don’t you get it?” he asked and let her go, she stumbled backward with little dizzy swirls in her eyes and she fell down on Krillin, “eeeeeh-heeeehh--heeeeeh…” Krillin simply blushed underneath her, “uh Mint…Mint? Uuuuuhh…” Eventually he just gave up with a small sigh. Dende ran into a nook and Gohan stood in front of his friends defiantly. Vegeta just laughed at the little boy, “Please…” Suddenly the confidant smirk on Vegeta’s face washed away to a milky white blank face of fear, “Fr-Frieza!” Mint jumped up, suddenly sober she looked down at Frieza, “So we finally encounter Frieza…” Wow, his powerlevel is much more menacing then his looks. Krillin sighed, Aw…I was beginning to like that… AN: I’m going to change Kakarah name to Karah, I know that has nothing to do with this chapter but it does with the next. Least I’m not changing Mint’s name or something silly like that |
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| Antroz | May 30 2008, 02:44 AM Post #2 |
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| Silver Raditz | Jun 12 2008, 06:11 AM Post #3 |
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Also there is commentary by people in heaven and Earth on the battle. “In heaven” will be signified by * when it begins and ends, and “on Earth” will be signified by ~ when it begins and ends. Chapter36: The last stand of Planet Namek, part 1 ** ”Pura, why’d King Kai call us here again?” Bardock asked impatiently, putting his hands behind his head. Pura grumbled shaking her head a moment, “Already told you! I don’t know!” “Excuse me…” a soft feminine voice came meekly. They both faced her, she was a young human woman who looked like Mint except all her features were much softer like she had never seen battle. Her dress was a soft blue, modest but not prudish. “King Kai summoned me, I’m not sure I’m in the right place.” They were both caught a bit off guard by her politeness, Pura smiled a bit then shrugged, “If he made you come the same place as us, I guess so.” “Oh!” She smiled happily, she blushed a moment, “I’m sorry, my name is Speara…Speara Silver.” Bardock nodded gently, “I’m Bardock.” Pura chuckled lightly, “Well it’s mice to meet you…” she said a bit unused to being courteous. Speara smiled kindly, “Nice to meet you too…” A voice broke out in surprise, “GOKU!” an old man with kind eyes and a large mustache ran and hugged Bardock, “Oh Goku my boy, it’s been too long m’boy.” he began overjoyed, tears coming to his eyes, “You look so grown up! Where’d you get that scar?” Both women sweat dropped I unison as Bardock struggled and pushed the old man by the face off of him causing him to summersault backwards clumsily, Bardock said in a confused shout, staring at the old man, “Who is this senile old kook and Who is Goku?!” The old man sat up heartbroken. Pura tapped Bardock lightly, “Um, ‘Goku’ id what Kakarot calls himself, remember?” Bardock blushed, he couldn’t help but feel embarrassed, he helped the old man up, “You know Kako…er…Goku?” He nodded a little, “Yes, I raised him when he was just a little boy, as sort of a grandfather.” Bardock was speechless and Pura in spite of her saiyan pride welled with emotion and hugged Grandpa Gohan tightly, causing the old man to blush a little, “Thank you for taking care of my son.” She said gratefully as she let him go. Gohan’s eyes opened a bit, his voice trembled, “You’re his mother?” She simply nodded, her smile still shining with gratitude. Bardock shook his hand, “My name is Bardock, Goku’s father.” He chuckled a bit, “Really? I couldn’t tell.” “No offence but I didn’t call you just for a family reunion.” King Kai said appearing between all of them, then taking out a watch, “Hm… she’s late…oh well.” Bardock stepped forward, demanding an answer, “”Why did you call us here?” The Kai answered with unusual seriousness creating a large crystal ball in the middle of the group, “You may or may not know it know it but a terrible battle is about to take place and you each have a steak in it.” All of them suddenly became very silent. King Kai continued, “Goku and Raditz parents as well as Gohan’s grandparents, Goku’s adoptive grandfather, Mint’s mother…” He said slowly, bringing attention to each of them. “Am I late? Am I late?” An overly excited saiyan girl came down quickly an skidded to a stop, “Whoa!” “Karah, is that you?” Pura asked blinking in surprise. “Still a spitfire eh?” Bardock chuckled. She stood up, giggled, and gave him a thumbs up, “Yuuuuup!” King Kai smiled, “Well now that everyone is here…” he paused then gave the group a funny look and waved his hands mystically, his voice took the affect of an old gypsy woman, “gaze into my crystal ball.” The ball shined brilliantly then began to transmit the battle, they saw Gohan, Mint, Krillin and Vegeta facing down the changeling tyrant. “Where are those two?” Bardock asked fearfully. Kai said gently, so as to not panic them, “They’re injured and won’t be joining until later.” Karah said sadly, her body sinking, “Raditz is hurt?” “He’ll be fine…” The old kai assured her, she smiled warmly. Old man Gohan motioned to Gohan on Namek, “That’s Goku’s boy?” Kai smiled with a simple nod, “Yeah, that’s him.” Pura looked fiercely into the ball, “If Frieza hurts my little grandson I will break though the gates of hell and drag him back with me!” Bardock chuckled, giving her a kiss, “that’s why I love you babe!” Speara leaned toward the ball, “stay safe Mint.” she wished gently. ** Mint smiled confidently, “Come on guys, if we all team up no way he can beat us!” Vegeta pushed her backward, “stay out of this woman, this is my battle. You weaklings will just get in way!” ** Pura, Bardock, and Karah all rolled their eyes, “Oooof course.” Grandpa Gohan an Speara turned to each other and shrugged ** Frieza covered his mouth coyly as he snickered, “Confidant as always Vegeta?” “Shut up!” Vegeta barked, then charged at Frieza fist drawn back, “You know nothing!” Vegeta lunged with all his might, Frieza simply laughed as he dodged gracefully. Vegeta went toward the ground and turned off it back at Frieza. He laughed, “Toro! Toro!” Vegeta growled and meet Frieza with a barrage of attacks. Frieza smirked darkly, enjoying his futile efforts. Eventually, he became bored “Insignificant worm!” Frieza said with disgust as he grabbed Vegeta’s arm, discarding him while bending his arm against his elbow cracking it. Vegeta grit his teeth though his pain long enough to return with a strong ki blast to Freiza’s face. Vegeta held his arm in pain as he scowled at Frieza, “Is that all you Frieza? Why don’t you transform for us an show us what you really got?” his voice filled with false confidence. Krillin waved his hand, his voice high in panic, “Vegeta, you really want to provoke him?” Mint swallowed hard, breaking a small sweat, “He gets stronger?” Frieza closed his eyes, “Well, if that’s truly your last wish Vegeta, I’ll grant it…” he opened his eyes and began to power up, “After all, it’s the least I could do for you for your years of service!” His terrible transformation had begun.” ** Bardock cursed, his heart filled with fear, “All this time and Frieza was still so much stronger…” Pura bit down on her lower lip as she watched, “I hope the boys can beat him.” Grandpa Gohan’s were wide open is awe and Karah had hid behind Speara, “Tell me when it’s over okay?” she asked, squeaking meekly. Speara smiled softly, “Sure.” Pura stomped hard, “Come on boys, get off your lazy butts and go thrash that gender bending snowball!” ** ~~ “Baba, have you got a signal yet?” Roshi asked impatiently. Baba shouted back, her hat flying up a moment, “Hold your horses you old windbag!” Roshi shook his staff at her, barking angrily, “Who are you calling windbag, you crone!” Before Baba could respond, the cocking of a gun was heard. They both turned pale faced toward Silver holding his gun to them. “Shut up and get the signal already!” Baba blushed and began divining through her crystal, “Well, you don’t need to shout…” Leaf lowered his gun with a smile of satisfaction. Chichi smiled at him a moment, “Thank you, I couldn’t help but worry…” she poured him a beer. Ox King chuckled loudly, “That’s my Chichi! Always worrying.” Leaf nodded a little at Ox Kind with a smile. Although, at first when their daughters became friends their own relationship was strained, eventuality they became friends and would talk about their daughters, their late wives, and their adventures as they played chess, Mah Jong, or sparred. “I-Is th-that Frieza?” Chichi nearly screamed, “Oh! If he has hurt my little boy, I swear I will build myself a spaceship, hunt him down and show him what for!” Silver laughed, “Gohan is fine, Chichi…calm down alright?” Ox King smiled, patting Silver on the back, “Mint looks fine too.” The image of young Gohan appeared to Chichi, she smiled overwhelmed with pride, “oh my little Gohan, he looks so grown up!” ~~~ Vegeta limped backward in fear, “He…He’s a monster!” Mint looked over at Krillin with her fire burning, “Hey Krillin, why don’t you and I show ‘im what Earthlings are made of!” Krillin chuckled a moment, “Sure thing!” The two charged at Frieza as he laughed at them. TO BE CONTUNIED! |
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| Silver Raditz | Jun 27 2008, 02:22 PM Post #4 |
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A True Saiyan Warrior
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AN: note heaven * note Earth ~ Chapter 37: Desperate Attack from the Children of Earth Vegeta limped back in pain as he watched the brave and foolish humans fight Freeza. Dende put his hands on Vegeta and the saiyan prince glared down at the boy, “What are you doing?” “Healing you…” Dende said begrudgingly. Mint and Krillin charged at Freeza and split to his left and right to attack him from both sides. Krillin gave a swift punch to Freiza’s side, the changeling countered with a chomp at Krillin’s neck and he ducked under butt was meet with a knee to his gut. He deflected part of it with a block but was knocked backward never the less. At the same time as Krillin’s assault Mint launched her own. She struck at Freiza’s face with a solid punch but he caught it and she pushed off the ground and kicked him in the chest as he fished with Krillin. Freeza coughed a bit and brought down his elbow on he causing her to fall to the ground so he could kick her away. She stumbled by Krillin and got up holding her bloody nose, “You alright Krillin…” her voice a bit nasal. Krillin smiled holding his stomach, “Sure thing…” Mint chuckled, “Ready for more?” **Speara jumped as she punched the air, “That’s it Mint! Give ‘im the ol’ one-two like daddy taught you!” Everyone stared at Speara and sweat dropped. Bardock waved his hands in the air turning chibi, “Where the heck did that come from lady?” She blushed hot red, covering her face with both hands, “Oh I’m sorry… it was just whenever I was Leaf fight it always got me so excited I couldn’t control myself. And Mint is so much like her father…” ** ~~Leaf sneezes loudly, then sniffs, “Come on Mint, I know you can do better than that!” He said cheering her in his own subdued way. Chichi clasped her hands together, “I’m trusting you two to protect my boy…” ~~ Freeza flew into the air thinking he had the upper hand there. But this fell into their plan perfectly. Krillin flew towards Freeza to distract him while Mint went behind. Krillin shouted, “Hey Freeza! Naaayah!” he stuck out his tongue and slapped his butt at Freeza. Freeza got red in the face. **“Oh…what an…interesting fighting style.” Grandpa Gohan chuckled. Pura, Karah, and Speara all covered their eyes, “Is he done yet?” ** Freeza barked at Krillin his whole body red with embarrassment, “Why you bald little munchkin! I’ll tear you to shreds!” Freeza swung wildly at Krillin. The monk bit down hard to concentrate his full attention on dodging Freeza’s wild and thoughtless attacks, not for a second trying to get in one of his own. Freeza drew back his fist wanting to knock his block off. Mint grabbed him by the elbow pulling Freeza back with her strength and his, “Let me return your gift.” Mint said with a big smile putting all her might and ki into a punch connecting with his face. “Enngh!” Freeza recoiled in pain covering his face. Krillin smiled and charged up his Distructo Disc. ~~Leaf stood up thrilled with excitement, “Wha-ho! That’s my little girl!” he shot his gun into the roof blowing a hole in it. Chichi smiled overly sweetly, “Leaf…” He turned to her, “Huh?” Her sweet smile turned into a death glare, a black fire burned around her, “You shot my house!” Leaf became extremely chibi, “I’ll pay for that….” Chichi smiled sweetly, “Thank you Leaf!” Ox King chuckled heartily, “You should be happy she didn’t get angry!” ~~ **Speara fired up and punched the air, “YEAH! Whata punch!” Pura chuckled crossing her arms with a smirk, “Gotta admit…she’s good!” ** Freeza uncovered his face, he felt the small trickle of blood run down his nose. He glared at her, “You kittle wench!” Freeze burst at hew swiping his hand at her, she attempted to dodge but Freeze caught her armor by the shoulder breaking it off. She in shock held her shoulder and looked at it with a shutter. “Mint! Lookout!” Krillin shouted to snap her out of it. As she looked up she was welcomed by Freeza’s hand wrapping around her neck. She wanted nothing more than to scream and fight back but her body betrayed her, being drowned with paralyzing feat. “Mint!” Krillin called out painfully. Damn I can’t take the shot! I’ll kill them both! Freeza chuckled darkly as he placed his finger above her breasts. “Now you die!” Her eyes widened as the purple beam ran through her chest. He let go and she fell toward the planet like a stone. **Speara screamed, “Mint!” she cried and fell to her knees, “My little girl…” Bardock looked down and he rested his hand on her shoulder to comfort her as best as he could. The rest could only silently stand beside her. ** ~~Tears came to the hardened Coronal’s eyes, he didn’t speak, and he just closed his eyes and prayed that somehow she’d survive. ~~ As Mint fell down helplessly, tears ran down her cheeks and flew up into the air as blood trickled down her mouth and spilled from her wound. This is it huh? Her breath escaped her as she hit the ground. Freeza threw his head back in laughter, “Oh my…I think I hurt her!” “Shut up!” Krillin’s eyes howled with anger and pain as he lobbed his Distructo Disc at Freeza. Freeza turned to face the speeding attack, “Enngh!” He flew upward to escape, but it was too late to fully avoid the monk’s wrath, it cut off Freeza’s tail clean off. Dende’s image came to Mint’s blurred vision, “I’m going to heal you… okay?” Dende asked meekly, but Mint heard nothing. He placed his hands on either side of her wound. Damn kid… copping a feel! Mint thought in her confused haze. But the haze soon cleared as Dende’s healing ki entered her body, sealing her wound without scar. As the wound healed she took a large gasp of air, her body desperately needing it. She sat up, “Dende, you’re a miracle worker!” She hugged him tightly a moment. She looked around and said in a hoarse whisper, “Listen, I’m going to keep you hidden in a case anyone else gets hurt!” He nodded and followed her into a small stone nook hidden from the battle. Freeza howled in pain, “Augh! My tail! My tail! Oh you’re going to pay!” Freeza dashed behind Krillin so fast he couldn’t even see it. “Peek-a-boo!” Freeza sneered darkly as Krillin turned in time for Freeza’s hammering blow to his skull. The young monkey fell down in agony; Freeza could only chuckle as he dove down on Krillin and skewered his gut with his horn. Krillin screamed a moment and coughed up blood as Freeza bucked him off his horn like a bull. He came loose and spiraled into the water, making a plum of red blood stain in the sea a moment. Mint covered her mouth so she wouldn’t scream, she looked at Dende, “You stay here, I’ll bring him!” She dove in the water and swam as fast as she could to save him. Gohan clenched his fists, searing with anger, “Krillin and Mint… they were my friends…” Freeza chuckled darkly, “Oh? It seems I made the little monkey mad…” “Shut up!” Gohan shouted appearing right in front of Freeza and connecting a punch to Freeza’s face. What the hell Freeza thought completely off guard. The boy pummeled Freeza’s gut over and over with a strength he had never seen outside his own family. ** “Unbelievable!” Bardock said eyes wide and mouth agape, “Who ever figured that squirt was THAT strong.” Pura smiled, “He is our grandson.” ** ~~Chichi danced in her chair, “Oh yeah! Uh-huh! Go Gohan!” ~~ But unfortunately, Freeza regained his composure and elbowed Gohan’s crown knocking him away, then he kicked the boy to the ground. “You little brat…” Freeza cursed holding his stomach with his left hand, opened his right at the boy and fired a ki blast. ~~**Everyone gasped (Split screen action!)**~~ Suddenly, Gohan was whisked out of harm’s way. Piccolo held the boy in his arms, “You alright Gohan?” His voice showed little concern but his eyes betrayed it. Gohan smiled and set him down, “You did good Gohan now rest…” The boy closed his eyes in exhaustion. Edited by Silver Raditz, Jun 27 2008, 10:26 PM.
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| Graffiti | Jun 27 2008, 09:17 PM Post #5 |
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Introduce a little Anarchy. Upset the established order. Then everything becomes chaos. R.I.P. Heath Ledger 1979-2008 | |
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| Silver Raditz | Jun 27 2008, 10:24 PM Post #6 |
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I'm so glad you guys like it 
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| Silver Raditz | Jul 3 2008, 03:18 PM Post #7 |
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Chapter 38: Frieza’s True Might Mint laid Krillin by Dende who immediately started healing the fallen warrior. Mint held his hand tightly biting down on her lower lip holding back her emotions, “Come on old buddy, you gotta make it! Who’s gonna be my funny little buddy who I had so much fun with?” . Krillin’s eyes fluttered open as his wound healed, seeing Mint soaking above him holding his hand, “Am I in Heaven?” he voice was groggy and weak. Mint hugged him tightly, “Not yet, thanks to Dende!” Krillin blushed his head looking like a tomato, “Uuuhh….” Mint let go and sighed, “Piccolo is here…he’s a lot stronger now, I only hope he’s strong enough…” Krillin sat on he knees watching the battle unfold, “Where’s Gohan….did he?” He voiced hoped against hope. Mint sat up, “Gohan! Krillin you stay here and keep Dende hidden while I go and fetch Gohan!” Mint was about to take off when Krillin grabbed her leg and pulled her back, “No way Mint, you already risked your life once, I’ll get Gohan.” Krillin had a strong determination in his eyes that Mint couldn’t argue with, “Good luck Krillin,” He nodded and flew off. Piccolo stood across from Frieza with a cold look in his eyes, “So you’re Frieza hm?” Frieza laughed, “Oh my it looks like a missed one of you slugs…” Piccolo closed his eyes, and threw off his turban and cape, “Frieza you’re going to pay for the genocide of my people.” “Ooouh…the Namek is angry! What will I do?” Frieza feigned fear dramatically the chuckled darkly. Piccolo appeared behind him, they were back to back. “You’re too confidant Frieza…” Frieza turned swiping his arm at Piccolo furiously. Piccolo flew up and out of the way and kicked Frieza’s face with great strength knocking him toward the ground. Piccolo smirked with confidence as he charged up a ball and fired it Frieza. Frieza used both arms to block it, it burned his arms he hissed, “You just got lucky!” Frieza charged up his ki and flew toward Piccolo, they locked arms but it seemed Piccolo was winning. “You have to learn your lesson Frieza. You can’t commit genocide without paying the piper one day.” “Ennngugh!” Frieza struggled and Piccolo threw him down again and pile drove Freiza’s chest to the ground below. Frieza coughed and grappled Piccolo’s shoulders and head butted him causing Piccolo to lose his grip. The tyrant stood across from Piccolo and laughed, “Oh I must admit, this is the first time in a long time that I’ve actually had to try! Do you really think this is my full strength…no….I will show you a form so seldom seen you should consider yourself honored!” Frieza’s ki shot through the roof as his horrible transformation began. Piccolo trembled, “What is he?” Unreal! Frieza is still so much more powerful! We never stood a chance! Mint shivered in fear. Gohan woke up beside his friends, “Is Piccolo okay…” Krillin shook his head, “I don’t think so Gohan…Frieza is transforming again…”. “Again!” Gohan said sitting up looking at Frieza in his new and hideous form, “Ew gross!” **Pura recoiled in disgust, “Have to agree with you there kiddo…” Karah ran into the bushes, “Ew! I’m gonna have nightmares! Make it go away!”** ~~“Oh no! I can’t have Gohan fight that…that THING!” Chichi freaked out. Ox King held her, “Chichi…calm down!”~~ Frieza laughed coldly and disappeared, reappearing clutching Piccolo’s jugular , “You will fall like all your people…” He plowed Piccolo in the dust, the flew up. To Piccolo on the ground, Frieza blocked out the sun he looked like the reaper himself. “Now you die fool!” Frieza pointed both index fingers at Piccolo and fired innumerous ki blasts at the downed Namekian. “DIE!DIE!DIE!DIE!” He said madly laughing each blast. Gohan flared wit anger, “We gotta help him!” Gohan flew at amazing speed head butting Frieza in the back ending his assault on Piccolo. Frieza whipped around and grabbed Gohan’s skull, “Why you little?!” Piccolo reached up in pain, “G-Gohan…” I can’t…I can’t just lay here and watch him die. ~~Chichi screamed, “FREIZA YOU LET GO OF MY BABY THIS INSTANT!” Roshi hid behind Ox King, “She’s your daughter, do something!” OxKing sweet dropped, “Can’t.”~~ “Krillin we gotta do something! Now!” Mint flew at Frieza Krillin followed suit, “Don’t need to tell me twice!” Mint turned to Krillin, she smiled, “If we don’t make it out of this, I want you to know I never meant all that stuff I teased you with…I was just having fun.” Krillin shook his head, “Don’t talk like that Mint, we’ll make it out and then you can knock me around as much as you want.” Mint giggled, “Sure it’s a promise!” Frieza couldn’t believe his eyes as the two humans came and kicked him at the same time in his sides making him let go of Gohan, the young boy flew off and caught his breath. “How?! How can you be alive?!” Meanwhile, Dende came out of his hiding place to heal Piccolo **Leaf smiled sitting back up, reinvigorated, “Mint! She’s okay! Hallelujah!” Chichi smiled and hugged him tightly, “Oh I’m so happy!”** ~~Speara smiled, tears of joy ran down her tears her eyes, “My baby, she’s still alive!” Karah came out and hugged her, “Yay! I’m glad you’re not sad anymore miss”~~ Frieza grabbed both their legs and knocked them together and threw them away. “Fine if I’m going to fight you all again I might as well make sure this time you die!” Frieza’s ki flared and he began to shrink into a smooth and sleek body the recalled his first form a little. ** Bardock spat, “Oh come on! How many stupid transformations does he have!” Pura stomped her foot, “Seriously!” “Boooooo!” The whole group booed Frieza throwing cans and rotten fruit at the mystic ball. King kai steamed, “Hey! Hey! Hey! No! Stop!” They all did with sheepish looks. “Plus this is his last real transformation…” King kai said cleaning himself off. “How do you know mister?” Karah asked. “Well because…” He turned to two ogres: one holding a camera the other holding a boom. “I watched the original Dragonball Z!” He flashed a thumbs up and the two crew members sweet dropped. Bardock pulled him by the ear back to the ball, “Stop breaking the forth wall you old coot!” ** Frieza smirked, he looked at the three froze fighters, then back down at the Namek, seeing Dende healing him. “So that’s how you’re doing it.” Frieza fired a small beam right through young Dende causing him to yelp and fall like a rag doll on the half-healed Piccolo. The Nail in Piccolo wailed in pain, “Oh Dende…I’m so sorry…” Suddenly Vegeta flew up, “Frieza! I never said our fight was over, leave this useless Earthlings be and come fight a true warrior!” “Very well Vegeta…” Frieza flew in the air to fight him away from the trio. |
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| Psyam | Jul 3 2008, 06:13 PM Post #8 |
 
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I really enjoy reading your fanfic, keep up the great work!
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| Silver Raditz | Jul 6 2008, 05:31 AM Post #9 |
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A True Saiyan Warrior
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Chapter 39: A Prince and His Subject Vegeta was about to fly to face Frieza, he was stopped by Mint’s voice, “Excuse me Vegeta…”. . He turned to her in disgust, “what?” “We were wondering…” Krillin began in a kind and humble tone. “…and if you wouldn’t mind telling…” Gohan said in the same way. “WHERE WERE YOU THE LAST TWO FORMS!” They all shouted causing Vegeta to go chibi spinning in the air a moment, he barked back at them, “Shut up what do you know! While you idiots were wasting all your energy I was saving my strength” Everyone watching in heaven, Earth and Namek rolled their eyes. Vegeta smirked confidently and flew toward Frieza, “Now you die Friezaaaaa!” Frieza closed his eyes and appeared behind Vegeta “Oh really?” As Vegeta whipped around he was met by a cold backhanded slap across the face. Vegeta hissed in disgust, “How dare you I’m…” he was cut off but a devastating blow to the gut. Frieza picked Vegeta up by the hair and punched him again not allowing him to buckle, “I wonder how many hits you can take before you break my old monkey friend. Three? Four? Five?” As he asked he hit Vegeta again and again. Gohan and Mint looked away in horror Krillin pleaded, “Frieza! Stop!” But his plea was ignored, “Six? Seven? Eight? Nine?…” “Let go of him Frieza!” Goku’s voice commanded him from overhead. Frieza whipped Vegeta free of his grasp into a rock face looking up at Goku, “What’s this another monkey?” Goku landed and the two warriors faced each other, Goku smiled his classic Goku smile, “Gee, you don’t look half as bad as my brother made you out to be!” Frieza fell over classic anime style. Mint blushed embarrassed about what she was gonna ask, “Um…Goku…” Goku smiled, “Don’t worry, Raditz will be fine he was just a little worse off than I was before we got healed.” Frieza heard this and laughed hard “ Are you telling me you’re that weakling’s brother? Don’t make me laugh! No, wait you already did!” Frieza continued to laugh. Goku flared with the power of Kaioken X7 and stomped down causing the ground to quake, “My brother is no weakling!” Frieza chuckled, “Oh touchy touchy! Well my little monkey friend, shall we dance?” “”Thought you’d never ask!” Goku shouted as he flew toward Frieza striking at his face, Frieza’s eyes widened with surprise as he caught the punch and swung with one of his own. Goku smirked and dove under and kicked Frieza in the chest knocking him back. ~~Chichi blushed furiously, her whole body tingled, “Oh my! I forgot how…thrilling it was to watch Goku fight!” Leaf blushed a little sweet dropping, “Just keep your pants on lady…”~~ **“Damn Kakarot, that was one hell of a hit!” Bardock cheered swelling with pride. Pura jumped up and fire burned in her eyes with exhilaration, “That’s it! You show that tranny tyrant whose the boss! Karah turned to Spear with an innocent look of naivety, “What’s a tranny?” Spear sweet dropped, “Um…”** Goku appeared behind Frieza, about to kick his head, but Frieza predicted his move and blasted him with a ki ball. Goku’s Kaioken was cancelled as he tumbled to the ground. Frieza smiled wildly as he dove down onto Goku, “So, your strength has it’s limits but mine has none!” Frieza came down with full strength and speed on Goku’s stomach causing him to fold in and scream in pain. Frieza chuckled darkly as he rose his foot and stomped again, and again Goku screamed. Frieza rose his foot a third time but Goku snapped out of it, flared with the power of Kaioken X10, rolled to a stand and gave Frieza a clean left hook to the jaw causing him to stumble back. Goku attempted to punch Frieza again, it was caught and then with the other hand, also caught. Frieza and Goku exchanged a quick smirk. Goku head butted Frieza as he in turn brought his knew into Goku’s gut once again canceling Kaioken. Frieza then threw Goku into the air, as Goku regained control Frieza made an upper cut of ki, making a log thin ki cutter speeding toward him. Goku only just barely dodge it cringing with a shutter as he watched it cut the planet clean, “Ehhhhuugh!” Frieza flew up grabbing Goku’s face a made a softball sized ki ball and blast Goku’s chest, rending off his uniform. Goku lay, unmoving in the dirt, his body screaming in pain. Gohan shouted out in horror, “daddy!” Krillin screamed, “Goku no!” Mint shook truly terrified, No, it can’t be, not even Goku can beat him?! Frieza laughed as he charged up another ball, he bounced it in his hand, “One more little monkey dead!” Then, as in a flash Frieza got blind sided by a swift and powerful kick to the back of his head displacing his ki. Frieza whipped around to be met by Raditz flaring with Kaioken X10, Raditz quickly blasted Frieza with a small Double Sunday. This gave him enough time to dash to Goku, pick him up and bring him back to the rest of the Z-fighters. **Karah blushed hotly, “Whoa is that Raditz? He looks so handsome now!” Pura shook her head with a smile, “Well glad you showed up Raditz.” Bardock laughed proudly, “Frieza you’re in for it now! Saiyan brothers can not be defeated!” Old Gohan stroked his mustache, “so that’s Goku’s brother eh?”** ~~Chichi fell over backward exhausted from holding her breath, “Thank you Raditz, Thank you! When you get back I’m going to make you a huuuge meal with anything you want!” Ox King chuckled, “Lucky man!”~~ “Kakarot, are you alright?” Raditz asked as he set his brother down. Goku struggled up to a stand, “Yeah, I can still fight.” Raditz looked at the group, “I’m sorry I wasn’t here earlier.” Piccolo chuckled, “Hm? Sorry…sound like Goku.” Raditz barked, “save your strength green man, I still want revenge on you!” Piccolo could only laugh more. “Raddy, how are you gonna beat this guy?” Mint said nervously. Raditz smirked and put his hand on her shoulder to calm her down, “don’t worry I have a plan.” she sighed relaxing and nodded. Vegeta’s eyes fluttered open, he saw Raditz stand firm as the others put their faith in his strength. “R-Raditz…” Vegeta reached out to him. Raditz turned to him and powered down, “What is it Vegeta?” “come…please…” his voice was weak but sincere. Raditz knelt by his prince, his voice still holding bitterness, “What do you want?” Tears began to form in the prince’s eyes, much to Raditz’ surprise, “I’m sorry… I forgot a moment where my loyalty truly lay and when I realized my mistake… it was far too late.” Raditz closed his eyes to hide his feelings, “Nappa? It is not my place to forgive you. Perhaps you can ask him yourself in the afterlife Vegeta.” With that Raditz got up, but Vegeta grabbed his arm with all his remaining strength, “Listen!” Raditz turned impatiently, “What?” “Raditz…please stop him, stop Frieza, do everything you can understand brother?” Raditz sighed softly, “So now you respect me brother? I assure you I planned nothing else.” The two men grabbed each other at the elbow with their right arm to symbolize their sayian strength and shared a respectful smile. Frieza stepped forward, he mocked, “How touching!” he fired his death beam through Vegeta’s heart. Vegeta vomited blood as his grip on Raditz released, he shook with pain a moment and only one word escaped him before he died, “Nap…pa…” Raditz shuttered a moment in surprise and whipped around glaring directly, “Frieza!” Frieza put his finger to his mouth, “Oops! Did I do that?” Raditz sneered, “Kaioken times thirteen!” flew to a devastating body slam against Frieza’s form. He wailed with body blow after body blow finishing him with kick to his shoulder knocking down. Raditz immediately felt the strain of pushing his body so far in such a short time. “Kakarot, I know you’re hurt but I need you to make the biggest spirit bomb you can while I distract Frieza. Understand?” Goku liked this plan, he nodded, “Yeah!” he flew up and prayed for the energy. Frieza emerged from the rubble and burst with a new level of strength, “So Raditz you’re still alive?” Raditz kept his poker face, but inside he knew Freiza’s strength was greater than his own, “I’m much stronger than last time Frieza, I will bring you down!” AN: Vegeta and Raditz called each other “brother” out of respect. |
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| Silver Raditz | Jul 14 2008, 05:12 PM Post #10 |
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A True Saiyan Warrior
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Chapter 40: A Short Lived Victory “You pathetic monkey! You can’t defeat me!” Frieza scoffed a little, Raditz growled, “Kaioken times fifteen.” Raditz burst with strength that Frieza had never seen before. Raditz held his head a little and held back scream. He looked back at Frieza, more focused than ever. Frieza’s eyes widened a little, “hm?” He dove down on Raditz, punched at his face, Raditz dodged to the side Frieza’s fist gracing the saiyans mane. Raditz spun kick at Frieza, but he in turn flew above his the blow, the cunning warrior grabbed onto Frieza’s leg and threw him down supplementing his throw with a powerful ki ball Frieza countered with of his own. Frieza flew down in smoke, Raditz up losing his boost and the metal gloves on his both hands. Raditz regained his control cringing in pain he shouted, “Kakarot! How much longer?!” The ball was a fair size, “Sorry Raditz, it’s still not big enough!” Raditz turned just in time to dodge a swift charging double punch from Frieza, He quickly powered back up to Kaioken times 15 again. Raditz kicked Frieza hard in the gut, Frieza caught his leg chuckling darkly, he pulled him into a devastating punch to the chest cracking his armor causing the saiyan warrior to cough blood and he spun to the ground. “RADITZ SNAP OUTTA IT!” Goku shouted desperately. Mint jumped clasping her hands in front of her chest, “Please Raditz!” Raditz recovered with their words, he grimaced as he released what he had to do, dmn Kaioken times fifteen isn’t even enough! My body…oh well, if it means taking down Frieza I’ll just have to push myself further. “Kaioken times…TWENTY!” Raditz burst with power. “What?!” Frieza was completely surprised. Raditz howled in pain as his ki flared around him, “HAAA! AAHH!” Pura turned away, “God, how far is he go?” Bardock held her protectively, “I trust you son…don’t let this go to waste…” Raditz appeared behind Frieza and trust his fist hard into Frieza’s spine. Frieza barked in pain, “Ugh! Why you?!” Frieza countered by trusting his elbow back at the saiyan warrior, Raditz’ ducked and pushed him back at the saiyan warrior, Raditz ducked at pushed him back. Frieza managed to get a solid hammering blow down on Raditz left shoulder, breaking the metal strap and causing him to fly downward. The combination of the crack before and breaking the strap now caused the armor to crumble away from his left side. Raditz comforted his shoulder a moment, then glared back at Frieza and growled, “Let’s try this again!” Frieza and Raditz exchanged swings dodging each other well. Goku held up his hands clenching his teeth, “Come on! Coooome oooooon!” Gohan shouted up to the battling saiyan, “Keep it up uncle Raditz!” Mint stood next to him, “Raddy, you’re doing great!” The two warriors exchange a powerful blow to each other’s jaw sending them both backwards. Group cringe and “OH!” Both warrior stood across from each other, cheeks bloody and raw. Raditz laughed heartily, holding his sides, Frieza’s eye twitched as he scowled, “Have you finally lost your mind monkey?” Raditz gave a satisfied smirk and wiped the blood off his mouth, “Frieza, you’ve become sloppy! You may be powerful, but you’ve relied on other to do you’re dirty work so long you’ve lost all semblance of fighting talent!” “How dare you?” Frieza’s eyes burned with offence, “you are my solider, my monkey, you do not speak that way to me.” Raditz voice was cold and spiteful, as if he wanted to say this a long time but now had the courage to speak,” I was your solider because I was weak, your monkey because I was afraid. But now, I am strong, I am brave, and I will no longer be bound by you!” Raditz burst at Frieza with the tremendous power of Kaioken times twenty-two slamming the changeling’s chest hard, Frieza clasped his hands together hammering his crown. Raditz, falling forward, used this momentum to flip fully and kick Frieza with his heels, knocking him down toward the planet. Raditz charged up his ki in both hands, Frieza caught himself just in time or so he thought. Raditz fired the beam from his left hand at Frieza. The tyrant prince flew downward avoiding the blast, “You have to be smarter than that Raditz!” Raditz released the beam from his right hand much to its relief, blasting Frieza toward the seam he smirked satisfied, “I am..” Goku called out, “Raditz! Get outta the way!” Raditz nodded and flew fast back behind his brother, Goku hurtled the giant blue-white ball at Frieza. Frieza just recovered from Raditz’ blast as he saw the massive ball barreling toward him, he nearly streaked, “It’s too big to avoid! To powerful to destroy! Curse you monkeys!” He defended himself against the blast as it pushed him to the sea bed. Frieza howled as it encroached on him, it exploded as it hit the basalt floor ending Frieza’s screams. Raditz shook with a weak chuckle, “We did it?” Goku’s smile grew from ear to ear, “We did I!” Goku flew and gave Raditz a tackle-hug, laughing happily.. Raditz blushed, “Kakarot…you’re embarrassing me…” Goku gave him a light punch, “Ah! You like it!” Raditz chuckled, he did. Mint picked up Gohan and spun him around making him burst into giggles, she cheered, “Gohan, you’re daddy and uncle just saved the world!” Gohan smiled so bright his eyes closed, “Yeah I know!” Krillin jumped and whistled, “Goku you did it! Stretch…not bad.” Raditz bust up, “Thanks shrimp!” Piccolo smiled weakly, “They do better with each other than against.” Bardock pulled Pura in for a passionate kiss, ”Those are our boys!” She smirked up to him lovingly, “ I know…” Karah blushed a little, “Raditz, you did great!” Old Gohan stroked his mustache with a chortle, “Goku has become a fine young man.” Speara smiled proudly, “Mint is quite strong too…” King Kai pulled out a bottle of champagne, “Who wants a drink?” Karah jumped up, “Oh bubbly apple juice!” King Kai stopped smiling a moment at her, “None for you!” Karah slumped, “Aaaaawww…” Bardock grabbed the bottle, popped the top, and lifted the bottle, “To brats done good!” He chugged the drink in spite of its worth, causing King Kai to sweet drop ,”It’s not a sports bottle Bardock.” No response, but Pura took the bottle, “Stop hogging it!” She chugged the rest. The rest of the group sighed, except little Karah who ran past the two crew ogres and popped up on an orange ogre wearing a baseball cap and sitting in a director’s chair, “Do you have any bubbly apple juice?” He, a bit surprised, fell over backward, sighing he adjusted his baseball cap, “saiyans…” Chichi hugged her father, as best her arms could get around the large man, “Oh I can hardly believe it dad! Goku won and everything will be okay!” Ox King adjusted his glasses and smiled patted her on the back, “Hhaha, and Gohan is safe and sound too!” Roshi and Baba smiled and hugged each other, then glared and turned their backs with a overdone harrumph. Leaf could only sigh in relief, “Thank Kami…” Raditz and Goku had landed with the others as they continued to share revels and celebrate. Krillin sighed he looked up at Mint, “Hey, Mint…Bulma.” Mint gave him a clueless blink, “Huh?” Krillin gave her a blank expression, “Bulma!” Mint recoiled in confusion, “Huuuuh? Did you get hit on the head?” Krillin groaned, “Never mind, I’ll get her.” He flew off with a heavy sigh. Mint blushed, “Ooooh! That’s what he meant.” They began to gather themselves as Krillin disappeared from their view. Behind them they all felt an eerie presence, they turned to their dismay seeing a badly burned Frieza standing with one eye half shut with pain, he spat, “That hurt! That actually hurt!” Everyone was frozen in fear, if that couldn’t stop Frieza what could? He pointed at Goku, “You! You caused me this pain!” He motioned upward pulling Goku up with some telepathic power. Goku screamed, “Aah! It hurts! It hurts!” “Frieza let him go!” Raditz pleaded desperately. Frieza scowled at him, “Why?” Goku screamed with a pain he never felt before as Freeza finished the weakened saiyan off with a d Death beam stright through his neck, killing him nearly instantly. He fell to the ground with a glossy look of shock frozen on his dead face. Raditz felt a memory flood his mind, he held his temples in pain, “Kakarot!” Pura looked at her son, right into his eyes, “Raditz! Whatever happens, take care of the child. Promise me!” Raditz hesitated, and nodded softly, “I-I promise..” Gohan cried out hold Piccolo for comfort, “D-daddy…” Mint quivered, “N-no…” Chichi cried crawling to the ball, “No Goku….Goku…my Goku…” The rest could do nothing for her. Pura bit her lip and held onto Bardock, bracing him with her pain. Bardock held her, staying strong to protect her as best he could. Raditz began to shake, his grief turned to anger, his anger into hate, his hate into the purest loathing, “FREEEEEIZAAAAAAH!” The planet shook with his tremendous ki, golden ki flowed up in small ripples up his body. Those small ripples grew into a golden flame that burst out, this gold waved down through his mane and made his hair collect in spikes all the way down. His eyes become a glassy emerald green, but in spite of this they were smoldering darkly at his former master. Frieza shook terribly, Mint called to him, “Raddy?” Raditz turned to her over his shoulder, “Take the boy and the Namek and get out of her Mint.” his voice cold. Mint stepped forward, “But…” “But nothing! Get out of here, I will not have any others die here!” She nodded and picked up Gohan and Piccolo humbly, “Good luck…” she flew off. “Wh-what are you?” Frieza said, his heart full of fear, in truth he knew what Raditz was. Raditz turned to Frieza taking sure steps to him, glaring him down, “I am the screams for justice incarnate, I am vengeance. I am the very sprit of all the saiyans you killed and betrayed. I am the wrath of my race, my family, I am a super saiyan!” AN: A bit darker than Goku’s famous, “I am the hope of the universe .” speech, yes? |
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| Silver Raditz | Jul 22 2008, 08:26 PM Post #11 |
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A True Saiyan Warrior
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Chapter 41: A Slave’s Roar. Frieza took a step back as Raditz gave him a hard glare with his newly green eyes. What has he become?! **Bardock could only gasp, “Dear Kamis, my boy is a super saiyan!” Pura glared at him with feigning anger, barely hiding her smile, “Our boy.” she insisted.. Karah’s heart skipped a beat, “oh! Yeah, go Raditz! Go kick his butt!”** Raditz burst at Frieza with a speed he had never seen before, his hand caught Frieza’s face and plowed him deep into the face of a nearby hill causing the changeling to howl in pain, “Nuauuugh!”. Raditz could only laugh as he drove his fist into Frieza’s gut. Frieza coughed, charged ki in both hands and blasted Raditz’ shoulders knocking him backward. Frieza charged back at Raditz, “I don’t care what you are! You’re still a monkey compare to me!” he tackled him grabbing his shoulders, Raditz pushed him to the side and kneed him in the gut, kicking him away. Raditz laughed, “hahaha! This is too easy!” he then appeared behind the airborne Frieza and used a hammering blow on his head. Frieza whipped around and gut a solid blow on Raditz’ gut before he fell. Frieza growled and fired to ki cutter beams at Raditz, he skillfully flew between them avoiding his sure demise. Frieza took this opportunity to appear behind Raditz and kick him in the small of the back and drive him to the ground. “Hmph…” Frieza smirked in self-satiation. The ground rumbled with Raditz‘ power, he pushed off the ground making a creator bucking Frieza off like some kind of crazed horse. Frieza stumbled backward, the saiyan warrior gave him a powerful uppercut sending him to the sky. Frieza’s tumbled in the air and final caught himself just before Raditz was going to attack him again, “W-wait! WAIT!” Raditz levitated facing Frieza sternly, “Why should I?” Frieza sneered, “Because I need time to get to my full strength, I know how you saiyans love challenges!” Raditz charged up his ki in his palms, “Does it look like I care? You killed my people!” Frieza snickered in false confidence, “Coward…” “What was that?” Raditz demanded. “Coward! Only a coward wouldn’t face an opponent at his full-strength!” Frieza egged him on. Raditz growled at him with disgust, “Fine! Power-up, you still won’t be able to beat me!” Frieza chuckled to himself and began to power up with a mighty scream. **Speara sweatdropped nervously, “Ugh, is it a good idea to provoke the megalomaniac?” Gohan cap flipped in the air, his mustache straightened and his face turned red with impatience, “What the heck is he thinking?” Bardock looked back at them with a confidant smirk, “He’s a super saiyan, no way he could possibly lose.” Pura chuckled, “Yeah, so relax!”** Frieza screamed as his muscles budged and veins appeared down his body, “Naaaauugh!” Raditz yawned feigning disinterest, “You done yet?” “Aaauugh!” His ki made once last flare, then he laughed “You’re a fool Raditz!” ~~Roshi was bowled over the jumped up in his muscle form, “Hey you copy-cat! Going around like you’re Arnold SchwazinFreiza!” Roshi kissed his muscles with some classic Arnold noises. Baba had a pound sign on her head, she poked his bellybutton, “Oh hush you!” Roshi deflated with a sigh.~~ “Is that all?” Raditz said, his smile wide in confidence. Frieza disappeared and appeared elbowing him in the jaw. “Awww!” Raditz flew back and counter with a knee to the gut. The two warriors charged at each other, Frieza laughed, “You stupid little monkey, now I can’t lose!” Frieza charged at Raditz like before but this time Raditz was ready. He whirled around and kicked at Frieza, but Frieza burst forward and avoided the kick. The warriors turned to each other and fired their ki blasts. The two balls collided Causing a grand explosion of smoke and flame. They both had the same idea, they charged through the smoke at each other, they meet each other with a myriad of blows. Raditz took the opportunity given to him by a missed blow of Frieza’s to grab onto him and throw him in the sky and follow it up with a swift Saturday Crush. Frieza managed to block some of the damage but it was apparent he was beginning to lose the battle. Frieza sneered, dmn, he’s too strong for me even now! he held up his hand charging up his death ball to an enormous size, “Prepare to die my solider!” Raditz chuckled with a confidant sneer, “Please, that thing won’t do more than burn me!” Frieza laughed like a madman, “Not aiming at you!” he fired it down toward the planet. “You can’t be serious!” Pura, Bardock, Gohan, Speara, King Kai, and Karah all jumped up, “He can’t be serious!” Chichi, Ox King, Silver, Baba and Roshi jumped up, “He can’t be serious!” Frieza sweatdropped a little when he realized what he just did, I can’t be serious! . The death ball burrowed a little into the planet and exploded rocking the whole world. “Hmph! Looks like the old girl’s got a thicker skin then I anticipate. Still…I wouldn’t say this planet has more than five mintues!” With that arcs and jets of fire spurted from the breaking planet. Raditz glared at him, “Why would you do this Frieza, we’ll both die!” Frieza chuckled, “have you forgotten? I can breath in space! So while you burn on this planet, I’ll escape and live on!” A fire jet burst between them, Raditz glared, “You’d go to such lengths in order to win? Ha, it just shows me how desperate you are!” Raditz tacked Frieza, driving his elbow into his gut. Frieza shoved Raditz backward then kicked him on the chin, “Shut up you dmn ape!” Raditz flew back and fired a Double Sunday at Frieza, he flew above them and took a swing at Raditz’ face. The blast ended and he caught Frieza’s hand pulled him in and jabbed him a few times. The planet was burning up, no longer emerald and sapphire but crimson and onyx. Mint and Gohan flew, eyes wide with fear, “AAahhhh!” Gohan screamed in fear as a lava jet fired behind them. Mint panted heavily in fear, “Don’t worry Gohan we’re almost at the ship!” If the ship is still intact… . Krillin shouted out behind them, “Guys! Don’t forget us!” Bulma screeched, “Aaaahhh, get me outta here!” “Hurry Krillin!” Mint shouted. MEANWHILE: Kami had the great idea of wishing back everyone Frieza killed, they had just gathered the last dragonball and done so. Back on Namek, everyone came back to life including the mighty dragon Porunga. Both Raditz and Frieza’s eyes widened as they saw the dragon, they stared a moment in shock. Vegeta awoke in his body he looked up at Raditz, “No….no! He’s done it, he became a super saiyan! dmn you Raditz! It should have been me!” Goku woke up by Dende, Goku gasped, “Whooooooooooooaaaa! He looks awesome, I wonder if he can teach me that!” Frieza turned to the dragon, “Great dragon, I wish that I were immortal!” The dragon blinked at Frieza and puffed his hot breath, “You must wish in the language of the creator!” Raditz bit down a little, damn it all! I don’t know any Namekian! Goku shouted up to Raditz, “Hey bro! I got Dende right here, he can make the wish for you!” Raditz smiled looking down at Goku, “It’s good to see you alive Kakarot…tell him to say : “I wish everyone besides Frieza and Raditz!” Goku protests stepping forward, “I can help!” “No Kakarot! This is my battle, you get back and defend the Earth just in case…” Raditz was passionate with his words. Goku nodded, “Alright you heard him Dende! Do your stuff!” “Nama Raditz u Frieza, zak Earrah terra lan!” He spoke. Paronga’s eyes glowed, “Your wish shall be granted.” Mint, Gohan, Krillin and Bulma all watched the spaceship explode in front of them. “What now?!” Mint panicked a little. “We’re all gonna diiiiiiiiiie!” Krillin howled. Suddenly they were all whisked to Earth along with all the Nameks, Vegeta and Goku. They sighed heavily in relief. Frieza cursed violently, “You!! You stole my immortality! I’ll kill you!” Raditz smirked, “Well Frieza, shall we end this?” |
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| Silver Raditz | Aug 3 2008, 02:46 PM Post #12 |
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A True Saiyan Warrior
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Chapter 41: The End of an Era The two warriors stood across from one another, the sky above them became an inky black morass of thunderclouds, the ground beneath them became a caldron of lava and fire, the sea completely disappeared being replaced by flame. Raditz looked on at Frieza with increasing disgust, "I hope you're happy with you handy work Frieza because you're going to die on this planet." Frieza scoffed with a haughty laugh, "Big words for the son of a guinea pig!" Raditz was taken completely off guard, "What?!" he was met by a solid punch to the brow. Frieza smirked as he laughed, "That's right Raditz, you were so weak when you were born I thought that your mother would be the perfect test subject for my super solider incubator. If it was a success than great, if she died in failure no loss!" Pura gasped taking a step back, something about what Frieza just said hurt her to the very core, "What? I…Kakarot…Raditz? What?" She couldn't form her thoughts. Bardock hissed at Frieza a moment, holding his mate, "Disgusting! How dare you Frieza!?" Raditz eyes burned with utter loathing, he elbowed Frieza then grabbed his shoulders and kneed him in the gut. He discarded him like trash, pushing him backward, "So it was all you, right from the start? Ugh, I should have know it was your fault, I served under you like a dog and you killed my whole family!" Frieza chuckled darkly, he pointed at Raditz charging his ki in his finger, "And I'll kill you too, then go to the homely little planet and kill your brother again!" He shot the beam at him, Raditz dodged to the side but it scathed his side. Frieza fired another weaker one Raditz making him jump to the other side. Raditz burst at Frieza knocking him with his two fists held together. Frieza countered with a hard kick to Raditz' sternum knocking the super saiyan backward. Frieza followed it up with a punch but Raditz caught it, twisted his arm and blasted him into the air. Frieza hissed, the strain of battle wearing on every fiber of his being, “Raditz, listen to me… we don’t have to fight. The two of us, we can rule the universe together…I’ll even leave Earth to you!” Raditz smiled honestly, “Oh well thank you Frieza! You know, it wasn’t too long ago when I would have accepted that lovely little offer….” Raditz lifted his right hand palm out to Frieza, his eyes became cold and hateful, “but no.” He fired a string of small blasts from his hand hitting Frieza like a machine gun. Frieza got hit by a few before he managed to escape Raditz’ wraith. Frieza whirled around burning with anger, "Fine…now you die monkey!" Mint paced back and forth holding her hands together, "Oh Kami, I want to know what's going on! This is maddening!" Goku rubbed the back of his head, "don't worry Mint, Raditz will be okay, I mean even if he isn't we always got the dragonballs!" Mint let out a heavy sigh, "I know, I know. but still I can't shake it!" ~~ Vegeta sat against a tree, "Shut up woman, that idiot is dead, and soon this planet will be mine." Gohan blinked innocently, "um, you don't sound that enthusiastic about it… not that I want you to." Goku chuckled pointing to himself with a big old grin, "Well, I'm still stronger than you Vegeta!"~~ Vegeta scoffed, "Shut up!" Though I hate to admit it, for the moment Kakarot is.but with Raditz out of the way it won't be hard to reclaim my rightful place as the mightiest in the universe! This planet has it's charm, and I might start a harem to reclaim the saiyan race. He chuckled to himself Mint sweatdropped, "Why are you looking at me like that?"~~ ** Speara said darkly with a hint of uncertainty, "I'm not sure why, but I have the strange desire to kick Vegeta's *****." Karah twitched a second then giggled falling over, "Whoa miss Speara, you're kinds scary when you're mad." Gohan chuckled, "It's never a good idea to anger a parent."** Frieza held his hands above his head and formed two red distructo discs above his head, "I'm going to slice you to ribbons!" He hurtled the two discs at Raditz with far more speed and accuracy than the time before. Raditz grunted his eyes narrowed with intense focus as he flew swiftly away from Frieza and his deadly attack. He arced up and around flying at Frieza, the two blades still following him. He smirked evilly and blasted Frieza’s face with his double Sunday causing Frieza to be knocked back and lost in dust. Raditz pulled up at the last moment and the blades flew forward and cut the Tyrant in three making him streak in pain and his blood to burst like the seas of flame around him. He laid reaching toward the sky with only one good hand left. “Aaauuugh….what….what happened to…me?” His voice was raspy and full of pain. Raditz walked out in front of him with a smile of self-satisfaction, “Ah Frieza…it seems you nicked yourself a little.” Frieza coughed out in pain, causing a small artesia of crimson blood swell then run down his chin, “Meerrccyyyyy….pleeeease…”. Raditz spat in disgust, “Their will be no mercy for you…instead…” he flew back to get some room for the blast, his voice burned with anger, “I will leave you with the vengeance of my family!” This is for you Kakarot…mother…father he cupped his hands at his side as he got into his brother’s Kahmehameha stance. As he did Frieza pushed himself up, the fear made him hallucinate, he saw the flashing images of Bardock, Pura, Goku and of course Raditz going into the pose. The illusion flickered faster and faster as the blue beam hurtled faster and faster toward him, “No! No you all stay away! Stay awaaaaaaay!” He howled at it engulfed his being plowing his broken body into the dead planet. ** Bardock smiled happily as he embraced his mate, “Frieza is dead! He’s finally dead!” Pura sniffed and kissed him, “Oh Bardock…I’m so proud!” Karah stumbled over herself as she ran toward the ball, “Is he dead this time!? Gohan chuckled and patted her head, “Yes, I do believe he is!” Speara nodded, “I know he can get wished back, but I hope he makes it out for Mint’s sake.” Pura nodded knowingly, “Yeah…you said it.” Bardock stood back confused, “Uh…Mint’s sake?” Speara smiled closing her eyes, “Mother’s intuition, I just know!” Pura nodded, “Mm-hm!” King Kai came out with a large bag, he took out a big wig that looked like Raditz’ hair, “Free limited edition collectible Raditz wigs!” He passed one to each person.** Raditz smiled a little, “He’s finally gone! I better get outta here….and that’s the last time I use that move, not my style…” Raditz flew into the air the hot jets of fire burning all around him, “Damn it all!” He looked around, he looked toward the horizon where he believed the capsule corp. ship to be, “no…it’s too far away…”. He suddenly got an idea, “Frieza’s ship!” He flew as fast as his power would let him, skillfully dodging them. Suddenly a giant wave of flame burst around Raditz **As the flames shot up the crystals shattered “Wh-what happened? It broke!” Karah shouted. Pura shook the old Kai, making his wig fall to the ground, “How will we know if he makes it out of this okay…” King Kai shook his head, “We won’t…”** ~~Mint shuttered, “I suddenly got an awful feeling…”. Gohan followed her pacing, “Calm down miss Mint…” . Piccolo shook his head, standing being fully healed long ago, “Forget it Gohan, she’s to wrapped up to hear you…” ~~ Raditz had defended himself against the flame, he panted a moment, suddenly he felt a weight lose from his check. He looked down and swiftly caught Mint’s falling pendent. The chain was irreparably damaged and the pendent its self was burnt. He clutched it in his hand tightly, “I need to get back…”. He burst at Frieza’s spaceship. He saw the hole in the ship, he couldn’t fly it… He saw ion the corner of his eyes the Ginyus’ ships. He levitated a half foot of the hot ash ground. One was still in tact, he hopped in. “Get me outta here damn it!” he started pressing buttons to close the hatch and to turn on the lights. The computer voice came, “voice recognition confirmed: low-class saiyan Raditz identified. Access Denied.” Raditz cursed, “Damn it…um…Emergency override mark 7-39.” The voice responded, “Mark 7-39 emergency override mark 7-39 underway, buckle up!” The pod burst out of the planets atmosphere as the flames shot up behind him, he saw them at the ship’s sides, he felt the heat in the ship he sweat profusely. He panted heavily and closed his eyes, he powered down expecting the worse to befall his ship… |
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| Silver Raditz | Sep 7 2008, 03:10 PM Post #13 |
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A True Saiyan Warrior
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Chapter 42: The Ripples of Change AN: I’m introducing two more characters that will play a bigger part in the prequel than they do now. Raiz was the leader of Raditz and Karah’s squad. Beat was also in that squad and is Karah’s older brother. Raiz is a pun off of Rice and Beat is a pun off of Beat . Also if Mint seems a little more girlish with Chichi, that’s just how she is around her seeing as Chichi is Mint’s only girl friend. And gentlemen get those nasty ideas out of your heads :-P __________________________ A young man in saiyan armor, who was about Goku’s height, had a tough look in his eyes, spiky black hair and a pony tail ending in the middle of his shoulder blades dragged another saiyan who seemed to be in his mid teens. The teenage saiyan was struggling hard not to come and there were two long tracks of plowed Earth behind him. He was strongly built, had wild red spiky hair and a subdued scowl on his face. “Come on Beat! Stop being a jerk-ass and come and watch the fight with Frieza.” The older saiyan groaned as he dragged the other saiyan. “No!” Beat said stubbornly. Karah jumped up when she heard the two men, “Hey Raiz, is Beat being a pain?” Raiz sighed heavily as his body sank a little, “Yeah would you convince your brother to watch the fight?” Karah giggled, “I would but it’s already over!” Beat crossed his arms and chuckled a little in a satisfied way, “Hmhmhm!” Raiz fell over backwards, “Laaaaaaaame!” Pura chuckled and put her hands on her hips, “Glad to see you didn’t change you two goofs!” Raiz, as swift of the wind, shot up and took Pura’s hand and kissed it, and kissed up and down her fore-arm and gave her a sly little look, “I would never change unless you wanted me to…” Pura turned a little blue and sweatdropped. Bardock fumed and tapped him on the shoulder. Raiz turned into a shaking chibi, “Oh…hello Bardock….” he didn’t get a reply just a solid punch to the face causing him tumble backward. Bardock’s fist was smoking and their was a hot red fist mark on Raiz’ face. Pura smiled a little shaking her head, “Thanks Bardock…” . Bardock smirked and nodded strongly, “Anytime!” Karah put her fists on her hips and leaned in toward Raiz, “Raaaaaaiz, can you stop hitting on Raditz’ mom for three seconds so I can tell you what happened?!” Raiz shook his head quickly making the red mark disappear off his face, “Uh, sure Karah, what happened?” Karah leaned back with a big old grin, “Raditz became a super saiyan and beat the tar out of Frieza!” Raiz blinked, “No kidding? That squirt actually beat Frieza?” Raiz smiled proudly then got up and swatted Beat upside the head, “See what you made me miss?!” Beat winced and chuckled a little deviously. Raiz shrugged, he took a glace at Speara, "Well while I’m here!" he zoomed to her put his hand on the back of her head and pulled her in to him, “Has anyone ever told you that you look stunning?” Speara quickly took out a small handgun from the garter belt under her dress and whipped it at his crotch, she glared at him, “Back off!” Raiz fell over backward with little hearts in his eyes, “My god that’s sexy!” Gohan shook his head, “He’s worse than Roshi!” Time passes and there is no word from Raditz, fortunately for the Z-fighter the Namekian years are much shorter than Earth years so that the could summon Porunga and wish back their friends. They assumed Raditz dead but that problem would soon be remedied. They agreed to wish back the friends they lost to the saiyans first since they were gone the longest. And so Tein, Chou-tzu, and Yamcha were revived. Everything seemed to go back into routine of what it was before the saiyans first arrived except Mint seemed a little distracted from the day to day. Gohan and Goku went on to tell Chichi about Raditz, Goku finally got a real chance to tell her about his parents. One day as Mint and Chichi sparred, Chichi noticed she was doing something she hadn’t in a long time in her spars, she was winning.. Chichi panted heavily and stood across her friend, “Mint, are you alright…” Mint nodded a little with a disheartened sigh, “I dunno…I got a lot on my mind…” Chichi stood down on guard, she approached Mint with concern in her voice, “Do you wanna talk about?” Mint turned her back grabbing her jacket and covering herself with it, “It’s so embarrassing!” Chichi rolled her eyes smiling with a light laugh, “Oh come on Mint! We’re best-friends, you can tell me!” Mint blushed a little, her cheeks matched her hair, “Uh…you know how I’ve always had a crush on Yamcha right?” Chichi crossed her arms with an understanding nod, “Yeah I remember….you upset that he’s still with Bulma?” Mint shook her head with a nervous laugh, “No actually…the weird thing is ever since he came back I’ve felt nothing for him!” Chichi was shocked, Mint had been ga-ga over Yamcha since she saw him, “Really? Nothing?” Mint blushed a little, she undid her ponytail as she spoke, “Yeah, I mean I still like him, but only as friend.” Chichi leaned in toward Mint with a sly smile on her face, “Lemme guess, you’ve fallen for that tall drink of water my husband calls a brother!” Mint jumped waving her hands, “How did you know?! I mean…I mean….uh….NO I’m not!” Chichi giggled a little and said in calming tone, “Gee Mint…you are a terrible lair! It’s okay I mean I don’t blame you!” she said affirming her. Mint smiled her nose crunching and chuckled impishly , “Yeah, I mean Raddy really takes my breath away sometimes!” Chichi giggled impishly with her, “Yeah I mean RAAAWR!” She did a little tiger claw thing with her hands. Mint shoved her a little, “Chichi stop you’re married!” Chichi winked at her, “And who knows you might be married too soon!” Mint fell over, “Let’s not get ahead of ourselves….although if I did you know what that’d mean?” Both woman squealed a little in a girlish excitement that took them over, “We’ll be sisters!” A few more months passed and once again the group gathered the giant Namekian dragonballs to wish back Raditz and give the Namekains a new home. Just as Goku was about to wish his brother back when Mint jumped, “Wait! Wait! If we wish him back…won’t he be wished back where Namek was and just….” Chichi comforted her a little rubbing her shoulder a little, “What do you mean?” Piccolo cross his arms and nodded, “Yes she’s right…we’ll have to wish him to the check-in station first then back to Earth…”. He had said to Gohan he had come for him, which was half-true. The other half was to his own personal welcome to his rival. Gohan and blush shyly and turned to his new friend Dende, “But don’t we need two wishes to give a new home and then get you there?” Dende nodded, “Yeah but it’s okay…” Moori, the new leader of the Nameks chortled a little, “Well yes, we don’t mind staying here a few more months until the dragonballs recharge again…that is of course if miss Bulma doesn’t mind.” Bulma blushed with a warm smile, “Of course not, you boys are very tidy house guests.” And so they wished Raditz to the check-in station only to an odd reply from Porunga, “I can not grant this wish…” “Why not Porunga?” Gohan asked curiously “Because, only those who have passed on can go to the check-in station.” The great dragon rumbled Mint blushed, “Does that mean Raddy isn’t dead?!” “Indeed…” The dragon nodded. “Then what are we gonna do with our new third wish guys?” Goku asked clueless. Suddenly a voice was heard in all their minds, “Hello! This is King Kai, guess who I just found here.” Raditz gruff voice had a distinct tone of happiness, “Hey everyone, I’m sorry for making you all worry…especially you Kakarot, Gohan,….Mint.” Mint smiled speaking up to the sky where she perceived his voice, “Forget that, when will you come back?” Gohan cheered, “Yeah uncle Raditz! When?” He chuckled a little, “Well not for a while, I have some business I have to finish up….but I would like you to use one of your 3 wishes for a favor for me?” Goku smiled cheerily, “Sure bro, what is it?” “I want you to wish back Nappa.” Raditz seriously. WORLD WIDE SPIT TAKE “You gotta be kidding?” Goku said wide-eyed. “I know I know…he killed many of your friends, but now they are stronger and if he does do anything I will take full responsibility for his actions.” Raditz said solemnly. “Well…if you’re sure…I guess we will…” Goku surrendered to his brother’s request. Gohan trembled a little, “So we’re gonna wish back the big scary bald guy?” Piccolo nodded, “Looks like it.” ___________________ AN: Guess who's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack? He won't be a huge character but I felt like bringing him back |
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