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| Pookie | Dec 19 2007, 04:31 AM Post #1 |
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Pookie Powa!
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Tell me what you think!
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| * ss3 | Dec 19 2007, 08:17 AM Post #2 |
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Hm, I must say I don't really like it much, sorry. The background is a bit bland and the shadow covering the left side of the render doesn't really look real. The text is great on the other hand, and so is the smudging/blending on the render, it integrates into the background seamlessly. So, like I said, the left side of the background could use some work (lighting, smoother color transition, another effect?); the right side isn't that bad though now that I look at it.
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| Strawberry | Dec 19 2007, 11:47 AM Post #3 |
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Chiaroscuro ♥
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Basically, I think the background is too bright and flashy for the render, it needed to look smoother to balance everything out. The render looks too dark. What about the shading on his face? You could have used that to add a cool lighting source on the right side, and then darken some spots on the left side. Text is decent. I remember that used to be your biggest problem, so good job. Overall, I give it 6/10, you've done better but it's still a nice sig.
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| Pookie | Dec 19 2007, 04:37 PM Post #4 |
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I added the shadow onto his face lol. The whole point of the left side being dark was to add a shadowy flow to his pose. Thanks everybody for your comments. I'm going to remake it.
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| Graffiti | Dec 19 2007, 07:04 PM Post #5 |
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MGD.
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Sweet sig, Chi-Chi. :] 8/10 |
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