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Dragonball FF; dragonball fan-fic FOTW WINNER
Tweet Topic Started: Sep 3 2007, 07:37 PM (2,595 Views)
Syrex	Sep 3 2007, 07:37 PM Post #1
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	FOTW Winner: Week 6 DRAGONBALL FF Episode 1>>The Beginning ------------------------------------------------------------ Seven years ago on Planet Vegeta, the king, King Vegeta, has grown mad with power and has brought the entire planet under his control. All saiyans who try to oppose the great king and his army...fail. But there still lies hope for the planet. One saiyan still beileves there is hope, one saiyan who still trains for the day that he will destroy the saiyan king. That saiyan is Gakara. Gakara has led the saiyan rebels for over two years and have fought to wear down the kings defenses. However when a spy infiltrated the rebels base Gakara and his men were found. Under the pressure of being attacked, Gakra retreated with his three sons to a space port. Gakara sent off his two youngest sons, Koga and Ryuko, while he stayed on the planet with his other son Kisu. Gakara sent off his sons to the planet Earth. There he had met an old master who had agreed to watch over the boys on Earth. For the past seven years, Ryuko and Koga have lived with the master training not knowing of the horrible battles taking place on there home planet Vegeta. We join Ryuko and Koga finishing there training with some sparring. The two battled fiercly, being the brothers the two have always competed in there training and today was the last day of there training under the great Master Roshi. Wok!Wok!Wok!Wok!. The two traded blows back and forth as Master Roshi watched from inside his house. Master Roshi: Those two boys are growing in strength more and more each day and there stil so young. Koga and Ryuko would have made there father proud. Wok!Wok! Bam! Koga knocked down Ryuko with a massive kick. Ryuko: Ahg! Man Koga why you gotta kick so hard? Koga: Its not my fault if you're weak brother. Ryuko: Im not weak, I just have a cold today. I cant fight at my full potential Koga: Funny how you have a cold every tiem we spar. Ryuko: What, its not my fault I always catch someones cold right before we spar Master Roshi then jumped infornt of the two boys. Master Roshi: Oh ho ho! Looks like you still have some ways to go Ryuko. But dont worry you'll catch up to your brother some day. None the less, Im very proud of the both of you and your training is now complete. Its been seven long years since I began training you boys and I must say that yall have grown very strong. It has now come time for both of you to test your strengths. Ryuko: Oh boy! We're gonna get to enter the Strongest Under The Heavens Tournament aren't we!? Master Roshi: Yes, infact thats exactly what Im talking about.I know you both have been there to watch the tournament but now has come the time for you to enter the tournament. I know both of you will do very well. Koga: Great, finnaly some real competition. Ryuko: Hey, I'm competition! Koga: If you call that competition. I beat you in our sparring matches every time. Ryuko: I told you I was sick! Besides I did win one time! Koga: Yeah the one time when you made me sick cause you really were sick. Face it Ryuko im a better fighter then you Ryuko: Why you cocky headed mother - Master Roshi: Hey calm down boys. You both will have a chance to prove your metal when we get to the tournament in a week. Yall had a tough day of training. Take it easy and relax for the rest of the day. Master Roshi then went back inside the house. Koga began to fly away from master Roshi's island. Ryuko: Hey we're you goin? Koga: To visit Sarah. I gotta let her know that we will be entering the tournament this year. Ryuko: Hey wait for me The two then took off towards the city to meet there old freind Sarah. Filled with joy knowing in only a week they would be able to partake in the greatest fighting tournament the world has ever seen... TO BE CONTINUED IN EPISODE 2
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Syrex	Sep 9 2007, 02:52 PM Post #2
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Dragonball FF Episode 2>>Robbery -------------------------------------------------- Visuals on characters so far in the story Master Roshi Sarah Ryuko Koga Ryuko and Koga had been flying for miles until they finnaly came upon East City. There they had hoped to find there friend Sarah, a girl who, like them, was an exceptional fighter for a child. They landed just outside the city. They didnt wanna bring too much attention to themselves. Seeing as how Sarah's house was in the center of the city though they had a ways to go walking. " Say Koga, how do you think you're gonna do in the tournament" asked Ryuko. " Well, seeing as how its the strongest guys in the entire world, we'll be lucky if we get to the second round. But dont worry about it, we're only seven. By the time we're grown we'll be able to kick all those guys butts" said Koga. The two brothers continued walking, but uknown to them there was a heist taking place just a few miles ahead. The two robbers jetted out of the bank moving fast towards the brothers. The police were close behind, but these two were'nt any common thugs. Both of them stopped and faced the oncoming police and with one big blast from the two robbers, all the police squad cars exploded. Ryuko and Koga were just coming into the scene. " Hey bro, I think they just blew up all of those cars" said Ryuko in amazement. " So, we could do that, I think, anyways, we should probaly stop these guys before anybody else gets hurt" said Koga. The two brothers raced towards the two robbers and confronted them. " Hey, what do you guys think you're doing" asked Koga as he pinted his finger heroically. " Man, Koga you sound just like superman from the cartoons" said Ryuko. " I know, cool huh, Ive been practicing" said Koga. " Well I guess we'd have to say that we think we're robbing a bank" said the boy robber. Both the robbers loked about the age of 16, on a boy and the other a girl. " Who are you guys" said Ryuko. " I am Axel" said the boy robber. " And Im Kelly" said the girl robber. " We work for the most feared army in Earth, the red ribbon army. If you two are smart, you'll get out of our way, before we do to you what we did to those police cars" said Axel. " Ha! You dont scare us, we can take you guys er I mean guy and girl" said Ryuko. " Id rather not fight children. We wouldnt your mommies to get mad at us" said Kelly as the two chuckled together. " Enough talk lets do this now, I was hoping to test to see if I could beat grown fighters anyway" said Ryuko. The four faced eached other in dramatic fashion. Knowone dared get near the four as they saw what was about to happen. TO BE CONTINUED...... ANNOUNCEMENT FOR DRAGONBALL FF: IVE BEEN THINKING ABOUT IT AND IM GONNA TURN DRAGONBALL FF INTO A VIDEO FANFIC. IT WILL BE ON YOUTUBE BUT ILL CONTINUE TO POST IT IN THIS TOPIC. OH AND FOR THOSE WHO READ THIS FANFIC, LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT SO FAR. WELL SEEYA NEXT WEEK!
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Syrex	Sep 16 2007, 11:40 PM Post #3
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	DRAGONBALL FF EPISODE 1>> The Beginning http://youtube.com/watch?v=9EsnYAmsviA Tell me what yall think of it
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* Ben14	Sep 17 2007, 11:48 PM Post #4
Posts: 2,103 Group: Retired Staff Member #1,870 Joined: November 4, 2006 Gender Male Country United States	Nicely done, Syrex. This is definitely one of the most professional fanfics I've ever seen. Your format is nice, and your attention to detail is also very good. There are a few minor things I noticed, but nothing that are big enough that I'd even bother pointing out. Keep up the good work!



Syrex	Sep 18 2007, 02:30 AM Post #5
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	thanks man
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Syrex	Oct 29 2007, 11:34 PM Post #6
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Its been a while but episode 2 is here Dragonball FF>>Episode 2>> The Tournament Begins I must warn you that the second half of the vid for some reason has no sound. But hopefully that will be different for episode 3 which probaly wont be out until some after tenkaichi 3 comes out.
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Syrex	Mar 8 2008, 12:40 AM Post #7
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	DBFF Episode 3 Link DBFF Episode 4 Link DBFF Episode 5 Link
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Syrex	Apr 11 2008, 08:06 PM Post #8
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Episode 6 - The Final Match Click Here Edited by Syrex, Dec 17 2008, 04:14 PM.
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Syrex	Dec 17 2008, 04:07 PM Post #9
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Episode 7 - Now What? Click Here Edited by Syrex, Dec 17 2008, 04:28 PM.
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bubbles	Dec 20 2008, 02:44 AM Post #10
Posts: 102 Group: Member Member #3,831 Joined: November 29, 2008	loved it!!! i watched almst all the episodes!! keep up with ths



Syrex	Dec 22 2008, 05:57 AM Post #11
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Episode 8 - Boob Click Here
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Syrex	Dec 22 2008, 06:25 AM Post #12
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Episode 9 - Red Ribbon Attacks!! Click Here
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bubbles	Dec 28 2008, 05:53 AM Post #13
Posts: 102 Group: Member Member #3,831 Joined: November 29, 2008	more videos.. wow thx for updating this!! im enjoying them



Syrex	Jan 11 2009, 06:03 PM Post #14
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Episode 10 - The Hero Of Justice Click Here Edited by Syrex, Dec 17 2009, 06:03 PM.
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Syrex	Aug 28 2009, 05:18 AM Post #15
The Hilarious C.E.L Posts: 301 Group: Member Member #1,578 Joined: July 28, 2006	Episode 11 - Evil Koga Click Here Edited by Syrex, Dec 17 2009, 06:05 PM.
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