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| Seruphim | Dec 6 2005, 02:12 AM Post #1 |
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Ok, I have this original story idea. Some have probably seen it if you looked at my journal, but Im starting to really get into it XD Ok, here's the outlive thus far; Its about this guy who wants to take over the world using androids. He pretty much as the whole world living in constant fear. You can tell if something is an android because of the markings on it. The more markings, the more powerful it is. He recently created a new female android, his strongest yet. But something malfunctions and she escapes. She goes into hiding and he is determined to get her back. She stays in hiding though, but encounters a rebel group. She dosent want to harm them, but they want to kill her. Someone ends up saving her, a blind man, and she stays with him for quite awhile, basically just growing up. But then she is found by the people who created her and they try to take her back, she refuses and they kill her friend. She looses control at the loss of her friends life and demolishes the entire house with her powers. When she regains her compusre, she is appalled at the destruction. She swears to never use her powers again. I havent gotten much past that point, but she ends up joining a rebel group. They resent her at first but after a few missions they accept her sort of, but some are still resentful of her. She also grows out of the fear of using her power. The people (havent thought of a name for them yet) who created her try to take her back a few more times, but eventually give up and make an android even more stronger than her. Those two end up fighting a lot in the story. I was wondering if someone could tell me what a genome is? Im not exactly usre but I was thinking of calling them that but when I looked up what a genome was I got confuzzled @.@ I have some pictures of the girls too. Here; pic This is the first android. The one that malfunctioned. pic 2 This is the second one made. See how she has no color in her eyes? That shows that she's not malfunctioned Anyway, comments? (not on the pics, the story idea ) |
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