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DragonBall NG - Next Generation.
Topic Started: May 28 2005, 12:43 PM (1,774 Views)
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DragonBall NG - Next Generation.

DragonBall NG is set when Goku JR as grown up and at the age of 25
he has a son called Gojay age 10, Gojay's mother died by a terrable heart
virus so Gojay is left without a mother, Gojay does not have no friends since
he has power that he can not control, so this also means he does'nt go to
school, but Goku has many friends like Krinin, Raiki, and Hijin. they all have
this power called KI. a power that lets them defiy gravaty, ultimate enagy waves
and stroung attacks, so stroung that they can easly pick up a building with
one finger. welcome to a world of DBNG.

28th Under The Sun Tournament.
Goku and gojay was walking into the lobby of the tournament, both wearing
there turle uniform.
Gojay- i wonder were they are.
Goku- they'll be here, they never miss a fight (smiles)
Gojay- this will be my first tournament
Goku- you nervus?
Gojay- (head down) abit
Goku- dont worry this is my third tournament. and i want you to face me the the finals
Krinin- so there letting young kids in this year?
Goku- (blinked) krinin?...oh krinin, about time you got here, weres the others
Krinin- they'll be here some, there doing somthing
hotdog stand
Owner- please gimme the money
Hijin- (angry) 20 zennies?!!
Owner- yes
Hijin- no way am i paying 20 zennies!!, thats day light robbary
Raiki- just give him the 20
back at the lobby
Goku- oh i see. but 20 zennies is alot for an hotdog
Krinin- thats hijin for ya (grins)
Hijin finaly payed for his hotdog, and was walking to the lobby
Raiki- why did'nt you give him the money stright away insted of all this asel?
Hijin- 20 zennies raiki.....20 zennies, i could get 4 hotdogs for that
Raiki- well it is at a tournament, they do over charge
Hijin- well at least i'll get my money back when i win this tournament (smiles)
Goku- if you win it
Hijin- hu?.....if!?, tut goku, youre looking at the last years champion
Gojay- yeah but I was'nt int that one was i?
Raiki- Goku?. why is you're son here?
Krinin- he's entering
Raiki- he's only 9
Gojay- 10
Raiki- 10
Goku- it says on the flyer, you can be 10+ to enter the 28th under the sun
tournament
Raiki- they let anybody in tournaments nowerdays
Goku- what are we suposse to do now?
Hijin- i guess we'll go to are rooms and wait for ferther infomation
Krinin- im stopping here, im going to the Gym
Goku- okay then see ya later krinin
Krinin went to the gym
Krinin- (thinking) a dont need to be here, i can take any of these lossers out
Man- lossers
a big mucaley man came up to krinin
Man- theres no way you can take us out
there was about 5 man just as big as him
Krinin- i may be small, but hell can i kill you
Man- lets see what you got. Punk!!
the man went to punch krinin, but krinin jumpped out of the way and booted
him in the back of the head, the man went though the wall. then a other man
ran up to him, grabbed his arm and went to log him, but krinin did'nt move.
krinin jumpped and kicked his arm and broke it, a man i the distance through
a whight at krinin, the wight hit him on the head, but did'nt hurt befor the wight
hit the ground krinin grabbed it and lobbed it back, the man went flying into
cobord, an other man was punching him realy fast, but krinin doged them all
then krinin tripped him over and knocked him out.
Krinin- (disapointed) that it?
Krinin walked out.
Krinin- weaklins
Krinin was walking down the hall when he bumbed into a big tall man
Krinin- oops, exscuse me....
Man- whatch were your going kid
Krinin- im 23
Man- get out of here
Krinin- (walking away) <i hope he's entering the tourny then i can kick his head in>
Krinin walked around the corner. then two men went up to the big one
Big Man- you made it
Man1- well if we want this to work, you need are help
What the men did'nt know is that krinin was over hearing
Big Man- theres somone here, take care of him
Man2- (walking up to krinin) sure
Krinin- <oh man they've seen me>
Krinin ran, but one of the men jumped in the way
Krinin- (scared) how did you do that?
Man1- i can do more than that (evil smile)
The went to punch krinin, but krinin telleported
Man1- wha?! (suprised)
Krinin- not only you can do that
Man2- i know i can also
Krinin- eh?
one of the men telleported behind krinin and grabbed him
Big Man- good, good
Krinin- who are you?
Hudson- im hudson, who are you?
Krinin- krinin.
Hudson- krinin?. are you the great grandson of krillin
Krinin- YES!
Hudson- cool.....mako, olin, take care of him
Hudson walked away
Krinin- eh?
Olin- lets kill him
Mako and olin tuck krinin to a remote room
Mako- lets kill him in here, its a sound room
Olin made an enagy spire
Krinin- you have powers like that? (suprised)
All of a sudden a big bang blu open the door. krinin jumpped out of the smoke
Krinin- i also have em
Goku got his cloths unpacked and gojay was looking at the ring from the room
Gojay- its big
Goku- you sure you wanna go through with it
Gojay- i have'nt trained for all my life, just to let it down
Goku- there is'nt a jounior division this year
Gojay- i know, i have to go with you and krinin, but i am 10 dad, i should be able to get really
far, i know i'll probbebly lose to you or krinin or raiki and hijin, they've been training all
there lifes, but i know i'll do well
Goku- you will
Hijin got to his room
Hijin- (eyes wide open)WOW! this room is huge
Hijin went to the frige and opened it
Hijin- look at all the food
Then there was a knock at his door. hijin opened it
Hijin- Krinin???......why are you mucky
Krinin- i got atacked by a gang of men i the gym, then got attacked by 3 men when i got out.
i've had good look aaaall day, what about you'res
Hijin- same....apart from being attack. i've had good luck, look at this place, look. at. the. frige
Krinin- nice (wierd)
Hijin- sandwhich?
Krinin- no thanks
hijin went to make a sandwhich. back at gokus room, goku was in the shower and gojay
was doing situps
Gojay- one million and one, one million.....and two, one million and three
then goku came out driying his hair
Goku- how many now?
Gojay- one million and five
Goku- very good, you can have a rest now. later we'll go for a jog and see if krinin wantd to
come with
Gojay- yeah sure (exsited)

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