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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 17 2005, 01:53 PM (648 Views) | |
| Goku | Apr 17 2005, 01:53 PM Post #1 |
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Goten flys toward the city and lands where the robbing is. Man: I come here to destroy Hecule and I get some 5 year old! Goten: hey I am 8! The man kicks Goten in the stomache then starts walking away. Gotern gets up and kicks the man in the stomache then punches him in the face 20 times. Goten powers up... KA MEH HA MEH!!!!!! The man qucikly shoots a finger beam at Goten knocking him down. Goten: This guy is tougher then I thought! Man: Give it up you cant beat me! Goten: OH YEAH!!!!! YAHHHHH! Goten turns into a supersaiyen then kicks the man in the stomache 355 times and the guy falls on his knees. Goten then shoots a huge beam sending the man flying. Man: While we had this fight my master got away! Goten: Where is he! The man dies and his body dissapears. Goten flys away to Trunks House. Goten land in West City then runs towards Bulmas house. Goten knocks and Trunk was in there playing Video Games. Goten: Hey Trunks. Trunks: Hey Goten want to play? Goten: Trunks we have bigger problems we have to get back to the lookout where Dad and Vegita told us to meet. Trunks: Alright... Goten and Trunks fly away towards the lookout. Goten: Do you sense something? Trunks: no why... A beam suddenly hits Trunks and kills him. Goten: TRUNKS! Goten balsts off to the lookout before he gets hit. Goten lands at the lookout. Goku: Wheres Trunks? Goten: Well er... Vegita: Where is my son! Goten: Dead... Vegita looks angry then turns supersaiyen 2 and flys off. Vegita: I WILL FIND YOU! YOU CANT RUN FROM ME! Meanwhile.... Goku: We cant let him go alone! Goku turns Supersaiyen 3. Goku: Piccalo, you and Goten train in the new chamber. You have to get stronger. We might not be good enough to win by ourselves. Piccalo and Goten go to train as Goku blasts off. Will Goku and Vegito be enough to defeat this new enemy? Will Piccalo and Goten be able to train in time to help? Will Trunks be revived? Will Gohan get out of school to help? Find out on the next episode of Dragon ball Z. |
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| yellowhairedguy20 | Apr 18 2005, 12:46 AM Post #2 |
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Pretty good dude. Write another! |
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| The Saiyan of Salami legend | Apr 18 2005, 02:23 PM Post #3 |
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come on keep going, i know im pesemistic lol, sorry but that was great, but why trunks? |
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| Kamiccolo | Apr 19 2005, 05:39 PM Post #4 |
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I just read both of them. They are both awesome! Keep writing. |
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