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Saiyan pride part 1; By kenny
Topic Started: Mar 27 2005, 07:34 PM (759 Views)
kenny
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Saiyan pride

The hole story kicks off after the buu saga, buu is defeated and all is well or it? And if the
World needs saving is vegeta gonna get in the way of that? And has some one got something against goku?

"Gohan..... gohan...... GOHAN time to get up for school,aww man mom can't I miss
piccolo said I could train with him today" gohan explained, " No gohan education
is more important than anything especially martial arts". "well when you want you grrr saving
don't come to me" says gohan as he storms out the house.

As gohan walks to school he has a sneaking suspicion some one is following him," who's there he shouts then
suddenly in front of him is "piccolo you scared the hell out of me" ha ha sorry sport I came to see if your
still up for training with me" "sorry piccolo I can't my moms harassing me to do well in school and stuff
so I'm gonna have to give it a miss, sorry man

Then in a blink of an eye piccolo is gone, as gohan gets closer to town he notices there no people around
he decides to get a birds eye view on things to see what's going on, "what the.. where is everybody" gohan continues his search
to find some people, after confirming that everyone is gone he rushes back home to check on his mother.

"MOTHER NOOOOOO" chi chi is lay on the floor in a puddle of blood, gohan didn't no where to turn accept to his dad
gohan powers up to to super saiyan 2 in Anger and blasts of the kami's look out where goku and the other z fighter are.
Gohan arrives at kami's look out and drops onto his hands and knees crying "what's wrong" gohan looks up to see goku
"oh dad its mom she's..." gohan stops still as the shock of his mother dieing is setting in "she's dead" gohan uses his last breath
before he passes in goku's arms,Everone goes silent for a few moments the crillen says "I'm sorry goku I'm so sorry" goku just sits
there concentrating on something then out of the blue he shouts "THAT POWER THAT THAT THAT'S NOT POSSIBLE NOOO" piccolo gohan crillin
and vegeta all search for this mysterious power that goku has detected, all the Z fighters faces immediately changed from sadness
to anger.

Goku grabs hold of vegeta and uses instant translocation, The z fighters are puzzled as to where they have gone "piccolo where's trunks and goten"
ask's gohan "They were in the hyperbolic time chamber trying out some...." before piccolo could finish goten stepped out of the
time chamber "gohan? what's the matter" gohan explains what's happened "I'm have to go and see her" gohan grabs goten "you can't
who knows who did that to mom" goten wants more answer and try's to escape but to know avail "how do you know it wasn't some to bid punk" says goten
"Because the wound was a blast wound" gohan also tells the Z fighters about the people missing in the town "it all seems so strange
It's freaking me out" crillen shakes nervously



What the hell is going on here? people missing, chi chi is dead and goku sensed a power then disappeared with vegeta
watch the story unfolds in Part 2....


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Gokuu
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I LOVE PEANUT BUTTER

Can't wait.
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SSJFutureTrunks
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Awsome Fic! Can't wait for the rest of it.
I have come From the Future.
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yellowhairedguy20
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Ribbit

That's pretty good kenny. Can't wait for the second one. ;)
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KILL_DEM_ALL
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Wow where u get this or did u write it urself???
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kenny
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hell yes
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The Saiyan of Salami legend
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Saiyan Destructor

That was really cool i hope the new bad guy is broly
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