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unknown title!; ....not dbz related.....
Topic Started: Feb 9 2005, 12:13 AM (424 Views)
Fallen Tears
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Decided to write a random story, hope ya guys like....more will come if people like
Chapter One: The Whole Prospect of Revenge

Ralendel stood in the doorway, blocking the way out for the people who resided within. A smile stood on his hard-etched, handsome face that seemed to forgive everything. His eyes, however, told a different story. The cold, blue eyes were deeply set into his head, sunken back. It was hard to see, but they too smiled; yet nothing about them was forgiving.
He cleared his throat to direct a few peoples attention towards himself. After a few heads turned, the smile faded from his lips.
“Now, what do we have here?” he said. “Anything of interest?”
The few people looking at him turned their heads away, undistracted by the man in the door, and his words of little consequence. No one seemed to notice who the man was, or what he had with him.
“Did no one hear me, or am I just a figment of your imagination?” Ralandel asked.
A cocky young man turned his head towards Ralandel, “We hear you just fine. It’s just we don’t care.” His head turned away, back towards the crowd.
“Excuse me,” said a voice from behind him. Ralandel made no attempt to move out of the way.
“Excuse me!” came the voice again.
Ralandel turned around. “I don’t think you want to go in there right now.” He motioned with his eyes towards the inside room. “It’s about to get a little messy…”
“I don’t care, let me in.”
Ralandel shook his head and smiled. “Fine by me, don’t say I didn’t warn you,” his voice was in a lighthearted tone, all most as if he was cracking a joke. The man believed this is what Ralandel was doing, but he wasn’t about to stand around waiting for the punch line.
He pushed through the doorway, pushing Ralandel aside.
“Bad choice, friend. Bad choice,” he muttered. He took his place back in front of the door and resumed his forgiving smile, the exact opposite of what he was planning to do.
The hands passed by coming and leaving, keeping the un-moving company for brief or long moments, depending on their age. All the while ticking as each hand passed the next number.
Ralandel’s eyes moved to glance at the clock. “Not long now,” he said to himself.
His glance shifted down, his smile turned down into an unreadable expression. His face turned placid and stationary. The movement in front of him did not exist for him; nothing did, except the distant clicking of the clock.
Once.
Twice.
Thrice.
Once more.
Twice.
Thrice.
Once more...
His thoughts rushed, becoming impatient with himself.
Twice.
Thrice.
Once more.
His fingers began to twitch, waiting to take what they so needed. His heart began to rush.
Thrice.
His fingers flung to his sides, and several ‘bangs!’ quickly followed.

He awoke, the smile still plastered on his lips from the night before, how he had gotten his revenge on those insolent beings. Ralandel smiled, remembering the one who had pushed his way past Ralandel to be inside, which had so led to his death. He had warned the man, but no one had listened to him. Perhaps that’s why he ended up doing it. It sure as hell didn’t help.
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