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My Glass of Water; a little poem I wrote
Topic Started: Feb 8 2005, 01:53 AM (569 Views)
Maximus Rogue
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*I wrote this poem, nothing of it is copy and that gives you know right to copy this. I wrote this with my own thoughts and emotions, I thought I'd let you guys see it first*

This glass of water it seems to keep going down the throat
The throat of justice and non-existance change
If this glass of water, cold go down swallow and choke
My life would swirl around, like the water in the toilet bowl
My life isn't unusual, the puzzle pieces just haven't been unscrambled
The open box of misery, for all too see
One can judge, minipulate and tease, but one can't see the scars that they hide above their knees
This pain will not show, even if this glass of water empties
The glass seems to stay the same level, like a master with a control board
It's like I can't find my way to the command center, it's like a un-exsistant place
If this control center is so real, doe's this mean I am too
Can you see my feelings, yet they arn't true
If they can't be shown, how can they be felt
If you scream for help, someone will be your hero
I am a self hero, with a communist inside
The issues of the world, they do not effect me
I'm to busy with change, that still is not real
Real is the word that flows through this glass, this glass is the object that will destroy
If the glass turns out unbreakable, then what must we do
We can't sit around all day, in our own self pity
If we just sat around, not trying to make a effort
To unfill this glass, of our own self mistakes
The answer to the glass of water is obvious, it is filled with mistakes
This is why, the glass of water will never be emptied
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Red Deer
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smoke it up baby

cool :( painful memories of wen yu were here
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Maximus Rogue
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Aww *hugs deer* Im still here
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Red Deer
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smoke it up baby

yuk

(about the huging part)
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Maximus Rogue
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Its perfectly normal, It's legal in spain xD, anyways how do you like my poem?
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Red Deer
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smoke it up baby

it was beyond my knowledge
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Maximus Rogue
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Yeah, they gotta take hooked on phonics up a notch, I was on it for 13 years. Jk jk, yeah I put all my emotions into that poem :(
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Red Deer
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smoke it up baby

i bet if guelph put emotins in his poems theyd scream

*gota admit it urself "big g"
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Dans l'amour avec mon ange foncé

yeah, that was pretty good, I liked it
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Encore Une Fois

............gee....wat a poem...{in a nice way}

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