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Misadventures of Piccolo and Freeza
Topic Started: Feb 8 2018, 03:01 PM (247 Views)
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Just sharing something I started. This is based around another fan fiction of mine, which I have shared here aswell (I think?). Just let me know what you think so far, I'm liking the whole adventure aspect of it.


Misadventures of Piccolo and Freeza


Piccolo and Freeza arrived at Mafuku's old planet.

Piccolo: I just need to talk to Nana very quickly before we move on.
Freeza: I'll wait here.

Piccolo headed inside the building. Nana was sitting in her chair and looked up when she noticed Piccolo.

Nana: Piccolo, hello!
Piccolo: Hello, Nana.


She attempted to get up.

Piccolo: Don't get up for my sake. I only need to ask you a few questions.

Nana took Piccolo's words to heart and got comfortable again. Piccolo didn't move, he just looked at her.

Nana: So, what's the questions?
Piccolo: Tramirot was the Saiyan father and I suspect you know more about that than you let on.
Nana: The Saiyans... Such a brutish race.
Piccolo: Yes, yes. However, I need to find a person. Do you have any information on Bardock?
Nana: No, not that particular person. However, There is a register of all the Saiyans. Brought here by Tramirot after the Saiyan planet's destruction.
Piccolo: Where is it?
Nana: Not here. Another Saiyan came and got it years ago.
Piccolo: Who?
Nana: Turles was his name.
Piccolo: Turles...
Nana. You know him?
Piccolo: Just. Do you know where I can find him? Did he leave any forwarding addresses?
Nana: No. He came, told me his name, took the register and left.
Piccolo: By which method? Spaceship?
Nana: A teleporting technique.
Piccolo: Seems like it's being handed out like candy nowadays. Anyway, thanks for the information. I'll be on my way then.


Piccolo turned his back to her and started heading for the door.

Nana: Piccolo, listen...

Piccolo stopped, but did not turn around.

Nana: There's a Saiyan living on a planet in this solar system called Tabaga. He might be of help.
Piccolo: Which planet?
Nana: Egruna.
Piccolo: Thank you.

Piccolo continued towards the door and exited. Freeza was stand outside in a guarding position.

Piccolo: We're off. But before we go... Do you have any requests?
Freeza: Requests? Travel destination?


Piccolo nodded.

Freeza: Not at the moment, but I might ask you later.
Piccolo: We are going to a planet close. It's in this solar system.
Freeza: Lead the way.


Freeza stretched out his hand. Piccolo grabbed it and they teleported. The planet they teleported to was lush, filled with tropical trees and unaffected water. Piccolo looked around. Aside from alien looking birds there were no life to see with bare eyes for miles, of course they couldn't see far because of the density of the plant-life.

Freeza: I can't sense anyone. Can you?
Piccolo: No, not yet.
Freeza: Disruptors?
Piccolo: No, it seems like this planet is still in early development when it comes to biological beings.


Freeza looked up into the sky. He noticed something flying, something big.

Freeza: Piccolo...

Piccolo looked at Freeza and noticed him looking up. He also looked up.

Piccolo: ...What?
Freeza: Isn't that one of those things you on Earth call a plane?
Piccolo: Yeah, it's a light aircraft.
Freeza: Follow it?
Piccolo: Yeah, but let's stay close to the ground, I don't want whoever's piloting it to know we are here.


Freeza nodded and they started moving with the aircraft. They moved for a longer period of time and distance, the aircraft was flying at a steady pace with no indication of landing. At the same time there were no indication of civilization anywhere, so Piccolo thought it odd that someone could build an aircraft on a planet like this.
After 1 hour of chasing this aircraft it finally started to descend.

Piccolo: Alright, when it gets into a certain position, let's say 20 meters above us, we'll slow down and scout where it lands.

Freeza didn't respond, just gave a small nod. The aircraft descended at a normal rate and soon it was just about 20 meters above Piccolo and Freeza, so they slowed down. They could see the aircraft descending to land in the distance, there was a crude outline which resembled a landing strip out there. They got as close as they thought they could without being detected, and they saw the aircraft landing on the strip. As the aircraft came to a halt, the hood popped up and a man stepped out of it, still with his flying gear on. He took of the helmet and to Piccolo and Freeza's surprise it was not a Saiyan they were looking at.
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Frieza's a good guy here?
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Frieza's a good guy here?
I have another DB story I'm not entirely happy with, but the aspect of a good guy Freeza was compelling to me. I'll tell that backstory at least...

In this other DB story, Freeza has an second brother unknown to Freeza and Cooler. Avalance was thrown away to another planet because he was weak, but he got strong because of an evil emblem that gives you massive amounts of power in return for life power. Freeza had been tortured badly in HFIL and had a generally bad time so he was already on the brink of turning. The fact that Cold and Cooler took so quickly to Avalance made him turn entirely. Some events on Earth made him gain an incredible amount of power borrowing the idea of "he hasn't properly trained his entire life" before it actually was a thing.

He joined the Zet-Senshi in the fight against Avalance and his family and decided to stick around with them until the events of this fan fic. The idea of this is that both Piccolo and Freeza are essentially outcasts on Earth, so they decide to travel the universe in search of something else. Piccolo always intends on coming back to Earth, but not sure about Freeza.
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I'll update this for as long as I feel like it, I'd still appreciate some feedback.

Removing the helmet, it was a namekian who looked quite young. From his attire, he wasn't built like a tank; He was quite skinny. A healer perhaps, Piccolo was thinking.

Freeza: So a namekian. What does that mean?
Piccolo: I have no idea. There are many things Guru has kept from me and his people, perhaps he's a scout. Maybe even a defector. We might have to be careful.
Freeza: Careful? We must be stronger than anybody on this planet.
Piccolo: That's not what I mean, but either way let's go approach him, it doesn't look dangerous.


Piccolo flew off with Freeza right behind. As they got closer, the namekian stopped and turned around. They landed about 10 meters away from him.

Namekian: A namekian...

He did not looked frightened. In fact he looked quite intrigued.

Piccolo: And so are you... And I don't know you.
Namekian: Should you?
Piccolo: My brother, who I've fused with, lived on a planet in this solar system. I would've guessed there'd be a good chance he'd know.
Namekian: Fusion... Fascinating.

Piccolo let out a grunted laugh.

Piccolo: My name is Piccolo and this is Freeza.
Namekian: That Freeza?
Freeza: You've heard of me.
Namekian: Of course I have, but I would have thought namekians wouldn't associate themselves with you.
Freeza: I've... changed.
Piccolo: What's your name?
Keytar: Keytar.
Piccolo: What are you doing on a remote planet like this, so far away from Namek?
Keytar: You clearly don't know...
Piccolo: Know what?


Keytar didn't answer. He turned around and walked towards a hangar made of wood. Piccolo and Freeza looked at each other. They followed the namekian. He pressed a button on the side of the hangar and the gate opened. Now Piccolo could see that this was not wood at all, it was some other material, something they didn't have on Earth.

Piccolo: Keytar.

He didn't respond, he just walked into the hangar, but he did let Piccolo and Freeza follow. The inside was mostly empty and what was around was of no real importance.

Keytar: Okay, you two... listen.

Piccolo and Freeza stopped in their tracks.

Keytar: You're not supposed to be here, but since you now are I might aswell tell you.
Piccolo: Tell us what?
Keytar: There's a planet called Namek, the one you mentioned earlier, and then there's... my home planet.
Piccolo: Another namekian planet?
Keytar: Sort of. It's not solely a planet for namekians, it's shared with Saiyans.


Piccolo was very surprised by this.

Piccolo: So there's... still a race of Saiyans?
Keytar: Yes, and they are not very nice.
Piccolo: Are any Saiyans?
Keytar: There are exceptions, of course. There's currently a rebellion on that planet among the Saiyans.
Piccolo: So it's not here.
Keytar: No, this is a satellite planet. In control by the namekians of Paestea.
Piccolo: What's the purpose of this planet?
Keytar: This is supposed to be a contingency plan. The namekians of Paestea wish to move here at some point and leave Paestea in the hands of the Saiyans, but that means the rebellion needs to win.
Piccolo: Are there any other namekians here with you?
Keytar: Yes. We are 8 all together, 7 namekians and...


Keytar paused, as if he didn't want to reveal the last race.

Piccolo: A saiyan.

Piccolo finished the sentence for Keytar and he didn't deny this with his look.

Keytar: Yes, a Saiyan.
Piccolo: And not from the rebellion either.
Keytar: No, he was here when we got here. He's been tremendous help, but I can't shake the feeling he has an ulterior motive.
Piccolo: Is his name Bardock or Turles?
Keytar: No.


Piccolo thought this would be the case, but had to make sure.

Keytar: His name is Kakarot.

Piccolo and Freeza both looked very surprised by this.

Piccolo: D-did you say Kakarot?!
Keytar: You know him?
Piccolo: That's... impossible.


Keytar was intrigued by their reaction.

Piccolo: Tell me, has he been out and about on other planets recently, say... the last 24 hours?
Keytar: No, we know where he is at all times. How would he get to other planets anyway?
Piccolo: How do you think we came to this planet?
Keytar: Spaceship, perhaps?
Piccolo: No. I know a technique known as Kai-Kai, also known as Instantaneous Movement.
Keytar: So you can move around anywhere at a blink of an eye.
Piccolo: Precisely.
Keytar: Fascinating. I've heard of this from the elders back home, but I thought only gods were allowed to use it. Are you a god?
Piccolo: I used to be, but that's not how I know the technique.
Keytar: I'd like to hear the tale some day, but right now I'm kind of in a hurry. You seem interested in this Saiyan, why don't you come along?
Piccolo: I appreciate that.
Freeza: This seems like a peaceful planet, is it really so?
Keytar: Yes, there's no conflict here. It would be pointless to stay behind here on guard. By the way, you should move. You're standing on the hatch.


Piccolo and Freeza walked over to Keytar as he pressed the button. A large hatch descended into the ground to reveal a set of stairs.

Keytar: Most of the important natural resources we make materials from are underground, so we made our homebase down there.

Keytar walked around to the top of the stairs and started walking downstairs. Piccolo and Freeza followed him.
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